Developing a Yandere? No, That's the Boss

Well, I don't feel there are any big problems at the moment. It's just that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is dealt with by a strange guy who looks a bit sugary, but it should get a lot better once it gets on the right track. Anyway, I'm still looking forward to the subsequent plot.

Not bad, I really want to see the story of little Thorne falling into darkness. Although I understand Heifina said that Thorne doesn't know how to pretend to understand, these chapters are a bit boring to read. If the male protagonist is replaced, it will feel a bit uncomfortable to read. There is a feeling of why she has been letting her go like this, even if I know she feels a little guilty, Fina's parents will eventually disappear. Why does the male protagonist regard all this as his reason? Although I know that the author will most likely have Fina understanding the male protagonist's plot, I still want to see the male protagonist fall into darkness. After falling, won't he lose his emotions anyway? It is better to have this memory of getting along with Fina, but lose the emotions related to the memory, and watch this memory from a more rational perspective. I want to know how they get along after this, although I feel that if the male protagonist's feelings are not restored, there is a high probability that they will break up [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Hello author. I like this book of yours very much! I'm a little worried. According to my understanding, the male protagonist and female protagonist will definitely meet again in the future. The male protagonist spent so much effort and even spent the few opportunities to fake his death and escape. How will the two of them meet in the end? Why meet? I was quite afraid that this would become a highlight of the book. If a man and a woman reunite after hundreds of chapters, is the pace too slow? If the male and female protagonists reunite after a few chapters, is the pace too fast? Could it be that as soon as the male protagonist and the female protagonist meet, they will be immediately replaced by the rain after a long drought, and a fire will ignite at a moment's notice? I'm a little curious about how the author would describe it! ! ! I wish the author never runs out of inspiration hehe

Although it looks good, the yellow button on the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

I almost forgot to comment. The content is very nice and the writing is fluent. There are no poisonous points so far. The emotional writing is not embarrassing. I can only say that the description is just right. There are battles and daily life. The only bad thing is that the author's update speed is too slow [angry] [angry] [angry]

The plot is okay, but there are two big flaws. One is not to leave Fina now, the last resurrection will definitely be used for this matter. The other is the dark power, which will probably change the protagonist's personality drastically at a certain critical moment. It depends on how the author fills it in

I don't think there is much problem with the handling of the emotional scenes. The problem is that the transition is not smooth enough, the fake death is too hasty, and the world view is not shown much. However, the score of this book is relatively low. I give it five stars to comfort me. I think it is about the same as 4.1 Stars for the actual level.

Later, the protagonist suffers a little battle damage and defeats the enemy to the limit when fighting each other. Later, the sister attacks and the protagonist's life hangs by a thread. Or the black sister. When there is a fight, the protagonist is injured more and forced to smile, which makes her feel bad. Some people say that it is about a single female protagonist, but they never said that the heroine must be the younger sister [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Please update more, even if it is an AI article, I am willing to do so. 👿👿👿👿 Please update more, even if it is an AI article, I am willing to do so. Please update more, even if it is an AI article, I am willing to do so. Please update more, even if it is an AI article, I am willing to do so. Please update more, even if it is an AI article, I am willing to do so.

Not bad, just don't hurt your sister. If the irrelevant person dies, let him die. The bond between the two protagonists is well written.

At present, there is no problem in giving a 4-star rating to the more than 200 chapters. The overall rhythm is very good. Although there are some minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. On Tomato, most of the time, newbies write new books and veterans rest on their laurels. It's not easy to find a few books that can be read. In the end, I gave the author five stars to show my encouragement. Keep up the good work.

The two gods, the protagonist and the heroine, are directly locked up. At the beginning, the protagonist's performance was that he was somewhat affectionate in his relationship with the heroine. After this period, it started to become sweeter. Mainly because of the protagonist's fun-loving personality, he started to become naughty and flirt with the heroine.

I thought I could see Tiantian's daily love life, but finally it got to this point [crazy] [crazy]

It's been a long time since I've read a novel that touches people's hearts. I hope it will be updated well. I will definitely say this even if I switch to other platforms.

It's very interesting, but the fact that the protagonist can be resurrected and it was just a game before makes me always think about pretending to be dead and running away when I step into the role of the protagonist again.

It's okay, a little bit poisonous. But you can still watch it.

，！ It's super beautiful, super interesting, the benefits are great, and the author's ideas are also very interesting, but why is the rating so low? Highly recommended.

I discovered that both the male and female protagonists have mental problems.

It feels very interesting, and I want to keep it first, but looking at the title, it seems that the players have not appeared so far. I want to wait until the players appear before reading. I hope the author can update it quickly.

The author's writing style is very good, but it's a bit lacking. I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss]

It's a good read and I love reading it. It's rare to find a book that suits my taste. I hope the author will continue to read it and not stop updating it [Please update more] [Like]

It's pretty good. Six points is a bit too low. At least it should be eight points.

It's okay, but it's too short, as short as the author [thoughts]

Overall, it's okay. Although there are flaws, I can still feel the author's intentions.

My horniness is pretty good now, and I get goosebumps when I hear my feelings.

A very good novel There are some bad points in the first part, but the latter part is really good.

Still very exciting

It looks good, come and have a look

Nice. Nice. . . . . . . Nice. . .

It's beautiful, I've been following it