Delta: Under the Mask, I Am Said

It's good-looking. It's one of the few male videos with delicate emotional transitions and not stiff connections. It's a flesh-and-blood story. Of course, the plot is also very exciting. There are almost no problems with the logic. The golden finger is also very reasonable. It's a fun story that can be read with your mind. The protagonist is very kind and kind to his own people, and treats his enemies like the autumn wind sweeps away fallen leaves. He also extends his hands to the civilians to do his best to support and teach them, and to his own people, he will rescue even if he grits his teeth, imparting skills and even spirit, for Asara. The integration of the two worlds and the two identities in life is not bad. It is Said and Ziaten. Although Lao Sai's surname is indeed Ziaten in the game, his full name in the game is "Sayid. Ziaten". This is not a fateful bond. As for the shortcomings, the name given to the team is a bit embarrassing for me. I can tone it down a bit so that the frequency of the name decreases and the meaning is conveyed. It is best to only appear once. And the protagonist's subordinates, the native Assala, actually know that the Blue Star players are a three-person team. This is a bit abrupt, and a small scene clip of the protagonist training and teaching the soldiers can be added to make the transition. Personal feelings, the author's own thoughts shall prevail. Overall, the flaws are not hidden, the emotions are delicate, and the plot is also very vivid and exciting. Will review after finishing.

(The following is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) (There may be some spoilers) Evaluation: Among the male Delta novels, there are few novels with such delicate emotions. It has more than 50 chapters so far and I feel good about it. Suggestion: The plot is a bit draggy. If the core selling point of this book is to defend against the Blue Star invaders, then the foreshadowing is a bit too long. And at present, it seems that the protagonist's time as Said is too short and can be lengthened appropriately. Most people who read this book mainly want to see Said. For example, the part of traveling to Sanya can be appropriately reduced. (I skipped most of that part. I personally didn't like it very much. I mainly came to see Said) At present, the description of the protagonist's strength is too little. A little more details can be added, otherwise it will be impossible to understand the protagonist's current strength in detail. The core selling point of this article is not yet clear, and the author can highlight it. Summary: The plot can be sped up appropriately, the paragraphs where the protagonist is Said can be increased, the daily life with the family can be appropriately abbreviated, and the core selling points of this article can be highlighted as soon as possible. (This is my first time writing a long review, please like it) (If you have any mistakes, you can point them out and I will correct them) (I will follow up on the review later)

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Well-being, absolutely well-being. But the number of words in the new book is a bit short

The author has written the real Said. The characters are flesh and blood, and the emotions are sincere and passionate. It is a rare good book. I read it in one sitting.

The writing is really delicate, and you can see the author's careful portrayal of the characters. Among the articles on Delta, it is one of the best I have ever read. Keep at it, your results won't be bad

Good luck! ! ! It's really beautiful, but I don't know why there are so few people.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very interesting, the plot is exciting

There are always some people in this world who are leaders while they are alive, but become their faith after they leave this world.

[Attention][Laughing][Like] Not bad, not bad, another good book! ! !

There is no problem with the logic. The most important thing is that the emotional line is very well drawn. The author's composition must be of a relatively high level, otherwise the emotional line would not be so well drawn.

Now that I've read it, I feel like the writing is pretty good, and I like it.

Very interesting, good luck to the author! [Praise]

I've only read a dozen chapters and I cried. If it weren't for the fact that Yang Persimmon can only give five stars, I wish I could give him fifty stars [crying]

It's not bad, it's a bit much in daily life [eating melon]

It's not bad, it's just the daily life in the previous life ex

It's rare to find a good person, and I want to keep the author at home and update 12 hours a day (ꐦಠ ಠ)

It's very beautiful and worth watching for now.

This is the best Delta fanfic I've ever read [crying]

The protagonist's characterization is detailed and looks interesting

The emotional description is delicate and the plot is interesting.

Good review, no need to say more

This book will definitely be a masterpiece

The emotional descriptions are quite realistic.

I saw that the team couldn't stand it any longer.

Handsome, very real, very much like him

One of the most handsome Lao Sai

Give every book 5 stars, no matter how good or bad it is.

Why are you fighting? Because someone taught us Who? A man with a red mask