My Wand Was Too Fragile, So I Turned Wandless Magic into a Machine Gun

It's pretty good to watch. The main character has an indifferent personality. The only emotional ups and downs are about his family. I feel like I can delve deeper into ancient magic. It's very suitable for the main character who doesn't need a wand. He has a lot of magic power. In the end, he should be able to increase his dimension, at least on the same level as the God of Death. Anyway, the main character's lifespan is not worried. I like the relationship between the main character and Xiao Long. It's more like a guide than a bodyguard. There are some poisonous points, such as Xiao Long trying to save Ron. Dead, both in terms of friendship and as a Slytherin, it is basically impossible for Malfoy to do such a thing. The relationship between the two is not good. Wouldn't Mingzhe protect himself? I really can't think of Malfoy saving Weasley, but it doesn't hurt to look at it. At this stage, the original three little ones except Hermione are basically avoiding the protagonist. It's good. You don't have to deliberately be friends with the three little ones. Look at the back. If you just lick the three little ones, you will abandon them.

This book is really cool, it is the kind of strength that is not acceptable at this level of magic. Even if you belong to Hogwarts, you have to bow your head and be polite. I'll go, it's super invincible. It's very exciting, just physical crushing. Now the last thing I want is for a female protagonist to appear. It's just a personal pleasure and that's it. In fact, I quite like Draco's growth. It's this process of becoming stronger.

The writing is okay so far. When reading fan fiction, I still prefer to see the author's slight changes to the plot line. Anyway, the overall world background and power system settings remain unchanged. Those who can write different things from the original work based on these two foundations are good fan fiction. The only thing I can complain about is that no matter where you look at it, Ron is just as detestable as the literary talent in Uncle Nine.

Dear author, can you arrange a female protagonist for the protagonist? Fleur Delacour! ! Don't hang around your brother all day

It's pretty good. The subject matter is novel. I need to pay attention to the details. Overall, there are no problems. Perhaps the cover could be changed to be more attractive to readers? Personal advice without any malicious intent

Looks good, I hope there is no female protagonist

To be honest, the writing style has a bit of an AI feel, but I like the setting very much [admiration] and I love the setting [blowing kiss]. The protagonist seems to be twins with Draco (bushi), invincible writing, and the reverse scale is Draco [cool]

This is a sane protagonist who sees the world in a way that we subconsciously understand. With crushing power and rights, do not do unnecessary things. Analyzing the essence of the problem will naturally eliminate all obstacles.

A perspective I haven't seen much. The protagonist has an indifferent temperament and is constantly on the road to becoming the supreme and powerful. I am looking forward to the conflicts brought about by all parties in the subsequent growth. [Like][Like] I saw a lot of comments saying it was an AI article, but this is a matter of opinion. However, some settings do have conflicts, such as whether the protagonist is Draco's older brother or younger brother.

There is the style of a great Han chess master [Thoughts] Even if it is written by AI, you still need to check the context.