Let You Learn Magic, and You Use Wandless Magic as a Machine Gun

It's pretty good to watch. The main character has an indifferent personality. The only emotional ups and downs are about his family. I feel like I can delve deeper into ancient magic. It's very suitable for the main character who doesn't need a wand. He has a lot of magic power. In the end, he should be able to increase his dimension, at least on the same level as the God of Death. Anyway, the main character's lifespan is not worried. I like the relationship between the main character and Xiao Long. It's more like a guide than a bodyguard. There are some poisonous points, such as Xiao Long trying to save Ron. Dead, both in terms of friendship and as a Slytherin, it is basically impossible for Malfoy to do such a thing. The relationship between the two is not good. Wouldn't Mingzhe protect himself? I really can't think of Malfoy saving Weasley, but it doesn't hurt to look at it. At this stage, the original three little ones except Hermione are basically avoiding the protagonist. It's good. You don't have to deliberately be friends with the three little ones. Look at the back. If you just lick the three little ones, you will abandon them.

The writing is okay so far. When reading fan fiction, I still prefer to see the author's slight changes to the plot line. Anyway, the overall world background and power system settings remain unchanged. Those who can write different things from the original work based on these two foundations are good fan fiction. The only thing I can complain about is that no matter where you look at it, Ron is just as detestable as the literary talent in Uncle Nine.

This book is really cool, it is the kind of strength that is not acceptable at this level of magic. Even if you belong to Hogwarts, you have to bow your head and be polite. I'll go, it's super invincible. It's very exciting, just physical crushing. Now the last thing I want is for a female protagonist to appear. It's just a personal pleasure and that's it. In fact, I quite like Draco's growth. It's this process of becoming stronger.

Dear author, can you arrange a female protagonist for the protagonist? Fleur Delacour! ! Don't hang around your brother all day

It's pretty good. The subject matter is novel. I need to pay attention to the details. Overall, there are no problems. Perhaps the cover could be changed to be more attractive to readers? Personal advice without any malicious intent

Looks good, I hope there is no female protagonist

To be honest, the writing style has a bit of an AI feel, but I like the setting very much [admiration] and I love the setting [blowing kiss]. The protagonist seems to be twins with Draco (bushi), invincible writing, and the reverse scale is Draco [cool]

A perspective I haven't seen much. The protagonist has an indifferent temperament and is constantly on the road to becoming the supreme and powerful. I am looking forward to the conflicts brought about by all parties in the subsequent growth. [Like][Like] I saw a lot of comments saying it was an AI article, but this is a matter of opinion. However, some settings do have conflicts, such as whether the protagonist is Draco's older brother or younger brother.

This is a sane protagonist who sees the world in a way that we subconsciously understand. With crushing power and rights, do not do unnecessary things. Analyzing the essence of the problem will naturally eliminate all obstacles.

After seeing 80 Palms, I'll read it another day. It's very well written. It's a new approach and perspective. Also, maybe add a female protagonist.

Awesome! [Adoration] Breaks the original understanding of Harry Potter, the look and feel is very good, quite attractive [laughing][laughing][laughing] Highly recommended! ! ! It's really beautiful! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

There is the style of a great Han chess master [Thoughts] Even if it is written by AI, you still need to check the context.

Believe me, just go and watch it. The protagonist is very cool and sensible. When I watched it, I thought a lot in my heart, but it was very calm. It brought a big change to my thinking. I am in tj Gemini. Calm madness, very cool, Draco has changed, Hermione is crazy about silence in pursuit of power, Harry is eager to become stronger but is led astray by Voldemort, involving all kinds of knowledge

A very good HP series time travel article. There is not so much messy play house, but Spartacus-style growth and confrontation. Really, after mastering the power, playing with the original is a very stupid and unnecessary behavior. The real protagonist is the one who truly attacks higher dimensions.

I have read Chapter 48 so far, and I am very happy, very happy, and very happy. I haven't found the problem mentioned in the comment area yet. I think it is very interesting. The protagonist is super strong. Dumbledore can't do anything to him. He will not be a nanny to Harry if he is not close to him. He knows how to train but not please Draco. The noble platinum young master is still very obedient to his younger brother. The only problem is that it's a bit long-winded, and whether McGonagall's character is in conflict with Snape. She is relatively fair. When will she stop giving points to Slytherin?

It's quite interesting, but I hope the author doesn't arrange CP so that I can continue to enjoy it like this.

Although there are some flaws, and there is a bit of AI writing, it still looks very enjoyable. I hope the author can review it carefully and have fewer flaws. This is a very perfect book.

Please note that this is completely an AI book from the end. If you don't mind, you can continue watching, and his feeling of being a complete tyrant is simply refreshing. After all, there are very few books like this

I think the content and plot are pretty good, at least it's not a cookie-cutter Harry Potter fan novel. The protagonist's behavior and personality are good. The only flaw is the strong AI flavor that fills the lines. It reads very stiff and rushed, and there are a lot of AI sentences that are not what is not but what is. I don't recommend listening to the book. Listening to the book will amplify it. If you read it, just skip it.

Did the outline change or was it changed to AI later? The main character was always the younger brother and later became the older brother.

Delicious. This is what I wait for when I go home every week.

It's okay, but the data is a bit overstuffed.

It looks pretty good so far. It's the soul furnace and the dual soul furnace that keep jumping. I quit, what I wrote was too outrageous.

It feels like there are a lot of details

It looks good, it does look good. Malfoy's transformation is particularly reasonable.

Very beautiful, very beautiful.

I haven't finished watching it yet, but I personally think it's quite good. My personal opinion is different, so don't criticize me.

Nice looking, very novel angle

The writing is pretty good so far

So far, the logic is clear.