Hp Shisui

What? So I can post book reviews myself (sweat) First of all, thank you all for your likes! This is my first book. The writing style may be very green and the logic may be very brainless. I didn't have an outline when I wrote it. In fact, I only knew the plot development a few hours before you did (I'm sorry) But I hope Xichi and Xiaolong can live a beautiful and happy life in that world. This is my main purpose. The relationship with the trio will gradually change from tit-for-tat to better, and there will be no regrets - children should make good friends! (Pointing) In fact, I have obviously felt that the number of people reading it has dropped a lot recently, and the reading volume has suddenly dropped from 4,000 to 800 or 900 (touch my nose). I must be feeling uncomfortable, mainly because I feel that my subsequent writing has become worse. But I still want to keep writing. If for a moment you are touched by the emotions expressed in the book, then I think that is enough. After all, this is the first book, so I don't ask so much from myself >ෆ< I hope you are happy every day! ! ! !

The writing is good (this is not a big trumpet, right). The characters are described in detail, and the most important thing is that each chapter is a large chapter with over 4k (as expected of a new level 1 account, it is (not a sarcastic) neither light nor heavy)

As a new writer (right) it's great to be able to write to this extent! And each chapter is a 4000+ masterpiece, which is constantly updated! The character's emotional line progresses well, the plot does not drag on, and the teacher-student relationship is also well described. The protagonist is strong and will not be overshadowed by the protagonist of the original book. The emotional pull and plot are detailed. I highly recommend watching it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] The introduction can be more detailed to attract readers' interest! But as a newcomer, I've already done a great job! Come on! (Do you feel uncomfortable because I always call you a newcomer? If so, I will change it. You can say it if you don't like it.)

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It looks good. Come on, teacher. The setting is very good, the protagonist has a strong background, and Draco is slowly becoming stronger. I hope it will have a different ending this time [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful, the emotional line goes as it should, and there are quite a few words. I hope Xiaolong and Xichi will always be happy [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Yes, the plot is very interesting, I like it very much, it combines Eastern and Western elements, and there are some more funny aspects, don't you think? The bond between Blaise, and especially Slytherin, is very interesting, and the emotional line between the two is also very good. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Of course, I am even more looking forward to their marriage. I hope the author will not stop updating, otherwise I will be very sad (இωஇ )

The emotional line is very well written. The main plot is too fast, right?

Boss, why haven't you updated yet [crying]

Come on, big brother. Everyone is cute and like it. It's a really, really cute book, and it has never been updated... As a new author, it's really great! Hope to continue writing. You can feel that the author writes more and more smoothly later on, and the emotional lines are also very natural and sweet). There are a lot of settings and foreshadowing in it, and I can feel that I want to prepare for the ending of making dumplings. I hope everyone can do well this time o>_<o

How can the teacher's writing be so beautiful! ? 😋😋😋You can't tell that this is my first time writing.

I feel pretty good. This is the only oriental hp I can accept.

I feel like this is the best-looking HP fanfic I've ever read (I don't mean to be flattering), mainly because it really hit my xp! And I really feel that the writing style is very good. I promise that as long as the author continues for a long time, I will definitely keep following it (*^@^*)! Come on, duck! ! ! In fact, you can change the title of the book. I feel that this title is a little too short. It feels a bit like a short story (of course, it may be my personal reason). I am personally not very interested in short stories. The main reason I clicked in is because this cover is so foul! But after watching a little bit, I was seduced by the good plot and the two cute protagonists. (It seems a bit off topic) In short, if the title of the book is lengthened, it may attract more people.

Come on, you must keep updating. It's really beautiful.

It's so beautiful and beautiful, please give the author a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's super good-looking. The interaction between Ye Xichi and Draco is very sweet. Protecting the dean is very suitable for my taste, but it's just not enough to watch [I'm about to cry]

Looks good, likes it, looking forward to it!

Shocking and delicious, delicious food is coming

It's so good I've watched it 4 times

Shockingly delicious! ! ! The author is DaBeiLai٩(*´◒`*)۶

It's so beautiful. I've been looking for this kind of setting before, and I finally found one I like. The author's writing is so cute.

The author writes very well ◦`꒳´◦ʔ

My Fake is a very good class, okay?

This is the first time I read this kind of fanfic. I read it as soon as I came across it. After reading it, I found that it is quite interesting. It's not bad.

Oh my god, it's so good. It's rare to find books that suit my taste.

It's difficult for me to forgive the young master. This article is well written and I support the young master. It's beautiful.

The author's imagination is really good, haha, I didn't expect it to be very interesting to write like this. The plot is interesting and the characters have their own personalities.

Super Invincible Explosion is so beautiful, so big, I must keep updating it, don't be a jerk, please orz

The author's writing style is good, and the emotional lines are also good. He added a bookshelf.

It's so beautiful. The teacher's writing style is also very good and the emotional line is very smooth. I hope I can keep writing! Come on! I hope the teacher can enrich the introduction content! I am a person who loves to read introductions hahahaha. It can attract more readers to read it.