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Regrets in the past life, running to HE in both directions in this life!
[Two heroines + ancient times + women disguised as men + rebirth]
[Princess + soft spot + running in both directions + house fighting and conspiracy]
[The fake boy with deep love VS the cute and smart little princess]
In his previous life, Lin Shu died on the eve of his wedding to Princess Lezhi.
She was knocked unconscious by her mother Wang's own hands and stuffed into Shen He's sack, just to make her disappear and let her brother Lin Shu completely secure his position as the legitimate son.
When she opened her eyes again, she was back at the fork of fate.
Wang looked at her condescendingly: "From now on, you are 'Ashu'."
This time, she continued to follow the arrangement, disguised as a man, and followed every step.
But she will never be a puppet, a shadow, and be manipulated by others again.
She wants to keep everything that belongs to her, including her knowledge.
When Lezhi softly called her "Ashu" again, she was finally sure——
The only thing that person saw in his eyes was her: Lin Shu.
Reader comments
Not bad, not bad. It's pretty. I feel like I've found a treasure.
I gave it four stars just because it's not finished (personal habit).
The character setting is very good, everyone is three-dimensional. At present, there are many young people with arrogant personalities. The good and bad are very obvious. The princess was attracted by the sight of her for thousands of years ([smirking]), and the true origin of Miss Zheng was both unexpected and reasonable ([understood]). Although the few middle-aged people don't appear much, they still have a sense of being and are not background objects.
The individual scenes are okay. The space scenes where the characters move are still very graphic. The overall scenes are a little bit worse. What the palace is like, what the capital is like, and what the streets are like. There is very little graphic feeling. I don't know if there will be more in the future. The hierarchy and etiquette feel a little inconsistent. For example, the princess calls Lin Shu Xiaohou Ye at the beginning? Communicate among peers but call yourself students? Also, I have never been able to imagine how Chen Tao met Xu Zhaoyi while walking. Where did he go? There is a slight sense of dissonance.
The development of the overall storyline is designed to be very smooth. For example, the mystery of life experience comes from an accidental discovery in the warehouse, and entering the warehouse comes from other things. Another example is that the carriage suddenly ran out of the city thinking that something was going to happen, and "something happened" did happen later. This kind of smooth and not abrupt, but also sudden but reasonable, the smoothness of things happening is very comfortable. So far, there is an overall feeling that the story is slowly unfolding.
I don't know how long this article will be, but I hope the following articles will get better and better. I'm still looking forward to it.
Finally, when will the woman's identity be revealed, how will the mystery of her life experience be found out, how long can the sickly prince live, and will his younger brother's official match be Miss Zheng. These are my current expectations for the follow-up plot. Dear book lovers, come and visit for yourself.
On a whim, I want to give myself a five-star review!
I thought I would finish writing the story of Lin Shu and Le Zhi in about 200,000 words, but ended up stumbling to over 300,000 words, and their story is still going on! I must give my own persistence a thumbs up!
Because the writing is a bit slow and I like delicate emotional development, there are not many readers (biting the corner of the quilt and crying), but the warm-hearted babies who accompanied me all the way really touched me (the crying I just pretended), and it was your feedback that gave me the motivation to continue writing.
There is still some time before the end of the story, let's look forward to the happy life of Lin Shu and Le Zhi~
It was very well written, and I was scratching my head while reading it. It is not a traditional happy novel, but the emotions between the protagonists are used as clues throughout the whole text. I really wanted to jump to the chapter where the protagonists live a sweet life together, but I also wanted to go back and look at the details, not wanting to miss every detail.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The whole text is cruelty-free! The battle of wits and courage with the villain is mixed with sweet interactions! Lin Shu's restraint and impulsiveness, Le Zhi's bravery and defense step by step, the emotional line gradually makes people's hearts beat! The foreshadowing of the discovery of the daughter's identity and the plotting of plots are all so unexpected and applauding! There are also all kinds of interesting holiday specials, so enjoy! Just two little bitter gourds who love each other very cautiously, and they were persecuted again after only a few days of secret love! Therefore, I want to eat sweet rice in the extra episode and eat it to my heart's content! You won't get tired of eating sweets! [Eat melon]
Yes, yes, five-star praise
I always feel that my identity has been exposed. If it is true that ancient times would not last long, but it is fiction after all. [Shocked] But other than this, the writing is still very good, the details are very well described, and the emotions are also very delicate.
[Adoration] It looks good. Please update the author quickly. If you change the cover, more people will see it [Laughing]
Wow, this book is a treasure. When I first saw that there were very few ratings and it was unfinished, I read it to pass the time. My interest in reading became more and more intense. The author's story line is very complete, the two heroines' characters are well established, and the subject matter is also very fascinating. The more I read it, the more I like it! Waiting for updates [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
In fact, I rarely watch GLs where women dress up as men, and I always feel a little bit suspicious of BG. I don't have any objection to BG, because when I watch GL, I just want to see girls falling in love. But this is not the case. In the first chapter, the author writes that Princess Lezhi in her previous life recognized the difference between Lin Shu and her twin brother on their wedding night, so she felt more at ease, and then tied the knot. I look forward to Le Zhi falling in love with Ashu, who has regained her daughter's body, and also looking forward to Ashu realizing her ideals and ambitions as a daughter.
After reading the review of Chapter 155, the relationship between the two heroines is described very delicately and the writing is very good. However, it is rare that when the first heroine breaks the situation on her own, she is reborn in vain. She repeatedly falls into the trap, and then the princess saves her. There are also some unreasonable aspects. For example, she is already the prince's companion and has the support of her father, but she is still afraid of the mother and has been tolerant. In the end, she wants her brother to leave and give her what she has worked hard for. Just, Bai was reborn.
It looks good, it looks good, I like Lin Shu & Le Zhi very much. Fortunately, Lin Shu is not a bad person, otherwise this road would not be easy! Fortunately, the prince and the emperor were also very kind to Le Zhi, otherwise they would have had more difficulties. . Fortunately, the imperfections in the first life were compensated by the second life. . . I didn't expect that the lady was arranged by the villain. She sacrificed herself for the rest of her life. It was pitiful and pitiful. . But she was also successful all her life. .
The plot of the novel is simple and easy to understand. Can the author write two chapters a day?
A woman disguises herself as a man and runs in both directions. The writing is delicate and the emotional lines are slow and interesting [laughs]
Good writing, not stupid
It's pretty good, suitable for watching secretly during evening self-study👀
Nice! ! ! Give the author a five-star review and keep up the good work, it's not enough! ! ! ! ! !
The relationship between the protagonists is very delicate, and the back and forth is very touching!
Lin Shu was just too restrained, and of course it was understandable that her experience and situation made her dare not act recklessly. Fortunately, she met Princess Lezhi! The princess is really a beautiful being, bright and flamboyant, daring to love and hate. Her preference for Lin Shu is really touching. She is a great guiding lover.
It's so good. The author of ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ will do your best to update it.
It's so beautiful. I suddenly realized why there are no ratings. It turns out that too few people have watched it. It's such a pity...
Everyone starts rating and writing book reviews!
Come on, boss!
I hope the princess also has memories. I get excited just thinking about it.
Can you write more about the princess' memories after Lin Shu's death in her previous life? [Awkward laugh]
This is really beautiful, and the writing is also online
Beautiful, worth seeing
Very, very beautiful
Beautiful, highly recommended
The plot is very exciting, with twists and turns. The heroine has a lot of brains. I look forward to the follow-up.
Very pretty. Ah ah ah
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's true that it's a two-way street, there's nothing wrong with it [Thinking]
As a reader, the writing is very good
Super, super, super beautiful! ! ! ! !
It's good-looking, the princess knows it's a girl, the relationship between the two comes naturally, the author also has a good grasp of the rhythm, the plot should be fast or slow, and the plot is very organized. Please live a happy life quickly!
It's very interesting. The writing is good and wonderful. I really want to read it.
Not bad, not bad. It's pretty. I feel like I've found a treasure. I gave it four stars just because it's not finished (personal habit). The character setting is very good, everyone is three-dimensional. At present, there are many young people with arrogant personalities. The good and bad are very obvious. The princess was attracted by the sight of her for thousands of years ([smirking]), and the true origin of Miss Zheng was both unexpected and reasonable ([understood]). Although the few middle-aged people don't appear much, they still have a sense of being and are not background objects. The individual scenes are okay. The space scenes where the characters move are still very graphic. The overall scenes are a little bit worse. What the palace is like, what the capital is like, and what the streets are like. There is very little graphic feeling. I don't know if there will be more in the future. The hierarchy and etiquette feel a little inconsistent. For example, the princess calls Lin Shu Xiaohou Ye at the beginning? Communicate among peers but call yourself students? Also, I have never been able to imagine how Chen Tao met Xu Zhaoyi while walking. Where did he go? There is a slight sense of dissonance. The development of the overall storyline is designed to be very smooth. For example, the mystery of life experience comes from an accidental discovery in the warehouse, and entering the warehouse comes from other things. Another example is that the carriage suddenly ran out of the city thinking that something was going to happen, and "something happened" did happen later. This kind of smooth and not abrupt, but also sudden but reasonable, the smoothness of things happening is very comfortable. So far, there is an overall feeling that the story is slowly unfolding. I don't know how long this article will be, but I hope the following articles will get better and better. I'm still looking forward to it. Finally, when will the woman's identity be revealed, how will the mystery of her life experience be found out, how long can the sickly prince live, and will his younger brother's official match be Miss Zheng. These are my current expectations for the follow-up plot. Dear book lovers, come and visit for yourself.
On a whim, I want to give myself a five-star review! I thought I would finish writing the story of Lin Shu and Le Zhi in about 200,000 words, but ended up stumbling to over 300,000 words, and their story is still going on! I must give my own persistence a thumbs up! Because the writing is a bit slow and I like delicate emotional development, there are not many readers (biting the corner of the quilt and crying), but the warm-hearted babies who accompanied me all the way really touched me (the crying I just pretended), and it was your feedback that gave me the motivation to continue writing. There is still some time before the end of the story, let's look forward to the happy life of Lin Shu and Le Zhi~
It was very well written, and I was scratching my head while reading it. It is not a traditional happy novel, but the emotions between the protagonists are used as clues throughout the whole text. I really wanted to jump to the chapter where the protagonists live a sweet life together, but I also wanted to go back and look at the details, not wanting to miss every detail.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The whole text is cruelty-free! The battle of wits and courage with the villain is mixed with sweet interactions! Lin Shu's restraint and impulsiveness, Le Zhi's bravery and defense step by step, the emotional line gradually makes people's hearts beat! The foreshadowing of the discovery of the daughter's identity and the plotting of plots are all so unexpected and applauding! There are also all kinds of interesting holiday specials, so enjoy! Just two little bitter gourds who love each other very cautiously, and they were persecuted again after only a few days of secret love! Therefore, I want to eat sweet rice in the extra episode and eat it to my heart's content! You won't get tired of eating sweets! [Eat melon]
Yes, yes, five-star praise I always feel that my identity has been exposed. If it is true that ancient times would not last long, but it is fiction after all. [Shocked] But other than this, the writing is still very good, the details are very well described, and the emotions are also very delicate.
[Adoration] It looks good. Please update the author quickly. If you change the cover, more people will see it [Laughing]
Wow, this book is a treasure. When I first saw that there were very few ratings and it was unfinished, I read it to pass the time. My interest in reading became more and more intense. The author's story line is very complete, the two heroines' characters are well established, and the subject matter is also very fascinating. The more I read it, the more I like it! Waiting for updates [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
In fact, I rarely watch GLs where women dress up as men, and I always feel a little bit suspicious of BG. I don't have any objection to BG, because when I watch GL, I just want to see girls falling in love. But this is not the case. In the first chapter, the author writes that Princess Lezhi in her previous life recognized the difference between Lin Shu and her twin brother on their wedding night, so she felt more at ease, and then tied the knot. I look forward to Le Zhi falling in love with Ashu, who has regained her daughter's body, and also looking forward to Ashu realizing her ideals and ambitions as a daughter.
After reading the review of Chapter 155, the relationship between the two heroines is described very delicately and the writing is very good. However, it is rare that when the first heroine breaks the situation on her own, she is reborn in vain. She repeatedly falls into the trap, and then the princess saves her. There are also some unreasonable aspects. For example, she is already the prince's companion and has the support of her father, but she is still afraid of the mother and has been tolerant. In the end, she wants her brother to leave and give her what she has worked hard for. Just, Bai was reborn.
It looks good, it looks good, I like Lin Shu & Le Zhi very much. Fortunately, Lin Shu is not a bad person, otherwise this road would not be easy! Fortunately, the prince and the emperor were also very kind to Le Zhi, otherwise they would have had more difficulties. . Fortunately, the imperfections in the first life were compensated by the second life. . . I didn't expect that the lady was arranged by the villain. She sacrificed herself for the rest of her life. It was pitiful and pitiful. . But she was also successful all her life. .
The plot of the novel is simple and easy to understand. Can the author write two chapters a day?
A woman disguises herself as a man and runs in both directions. The writing is delicate and the emotional lines are slow and interesting [laughs]
Good writing, not stupid
It's pretty good, suitable for watching secretly during evening self-study👀
Nice! ! ! Give the author a five-star review and keep up the good work, it's not enough! ! ! ! ! !
The relationship between the protagonists is very delicate, and the back and forth is very touching! Lin Shu was just too restrained, and of course it was understandable that her experience and situation made her dare not act recklessly. Fortunately, she met Princess Lezhi! The princess is really a beautiful being, bright and flamboyant, daring to love and hate. Her preference for Lin Shu is really touching. She is a great guiding lover.
It's so good. The author of ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ will do your best to update it.
It's so beautiful. I suddenly realized why there are no ratings. It turns out that too few people have watched it. It's such a pity... Everyone starts rating and writing book reviews! Come on, boss!
I hope the princess also has memories. I get excited just thinking about it. Can you write more about the princess' memories after Lin Shu's death in her previous life? [Awkward laugh]
This is really beautiful, and the writing is also online
Beautiful, worth seeing
Very, very beautiful
Beautiful, highly recommended The plot is very exciting, with twists and turns. The heroine has a lot of brains. I look forward to the follow-up.
Very pretty. Ah ah ah
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's true that it's a two-way street, there's nothing wrong with it [Thinking]
As a reader, the writing is very good
Super, super, super beautiful! ! ! ! !
It's good-looking, the princess knows it's a girl, the relationship between the two comes naturally, the author also has a good grasp of the rhythm, the plot should be fast or slow, and the plot is very organized. Please live a happy life quickly!
It's very interesting. The writing is good and wonderful. I really want to read it.