Those of you who are still waiting, stop waiting. If you can't change it, basically everything needs to be changed.
Thank you for your continued company, and thank you for your rewards.
When she opened her eyes again, she became Yun Jin, the most beautiful woman in the world of immortality. Before she could be happy, three men kicked in the door, pushed her to the ground, and tore open her collar——
She thought this was hell. I didn't expect that there are eighteen levels of hell.
Being sold, bought, used as a furnace, and made into a puppet. She lay in the mud and vomited for half an hour. When she looked up and saw the breathtakingly beautiful face in the mirror, she suddenly smiled.
"God, are you making it up to me, or are you kidding me?"
Then she understood. Whether it's compensation or fun, it doesn't matter. This skin was given by God, and she has the final say on how to use it.
The chaotic Yuan Yin body is unique among ten thousand. She can devour the cultivation of others, strip away the original attributes, and refine the marks of everyone who died in her hands into her own strength.
Fire Seal, Ice Seal, Gold Seal, Wood Seal, Earth Seal, Thunder Seal, Wind Seal, Yin Seal, Yang Seal, Seal of Life, Seal of Space, Seal of Time, Seal of Destruction - thirteen seals, thirteen forbidden techniques.
She stepped on the bones of those men and climbed up. Golden elixir, Yuanying, Lianxu, Mahayana, Chaos Supreme. Those who treated her as prey eventually became the nourishment in her mark.
Someone asked her, don't you feel dirty?
She looked down at the blood that was still wet on her hands and thought for a long time. "Dirty? In my previous life, I knelt down to make money, but in this life I lie down and kill people. What's the difference?"
Reader comments
The grief of the little characters is well written. Although there is a lot of pornography, there is no feeling of other humans, but there is a strong sense of pity? No, it's a very complicated feeling. The author's writing is very good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. But I think the psychological portrayal of the protagonist is too much. The author probably wants to highlight the sadness of the little character. If I give it four stars, I feel that I might enter a small dark room later.
I came across this topic again and would like to encourage you.
The following personal views
First of all, the writing style: OK (some of the psychological descriptions and analogies are very good and detailed), but there are too many modifying words in the writing, and the psychological description is too modified. What is not, what is like, what is like, what is like, it is understandable that you want to enhance the sense of picture and emotional transmission, but if the modification is too redundant, it will interrupt the reading experience and the perception will become worse.
And in fact, simple writing does not necessarily mean that it is not good. Like line drawings, you can write well with one word and one sentence, leaving the rest to the reader's imagination and input.
Plot progress: Very slow, very slow. It should be because the modifications are too redundant. Sometimes the emphasis is too much on expressing the feelings of modifications. In fact, it can leave some space for readers to imagine. Except for the psychological changes that need to be described a lot, there is no need to be too metaphorical in other aspects.
Later, when we look at the relationship between the heroine and Leng, the description is really too redundant.
At the beginning, he described the sadness in the past life and compared the past life with the current life. I found it quite amazing. The author also has something of his own.
Protagonist: The portrayal is pretty good. Due to the slow progress of the plot, it can be seen that he is not the kind to make decisions immediately but needs time to adapt to this sudden identity. In fact, he was very patient in the early stage. This is excusable. The author wanted to portray an image of a person who does not have a big gold finger but endures humiliation. It's just that readers are easily frustrated and tired, and cannot immerse themselves in the experience.
Supporting characters: The portrayal of the villain's success and the protagonist's frustration in the early stage are too detailed and too embellished. It is very sad to read. People like me who are easy to substitute just want to fast forward and fast forward. In the later stage, Leng Guyue, Yan and other money and so on are like human-machine, the characters are a bit empty, and the dialogues are also quite human-machine. You can see the difference but not much. After reading it, I only have one thought. The heroine is very frustrated. The idea is good, but the feeling of highlighting the heroine's intelligence and resourcefulness is not very strong. (I don't have much vocabulary, so I can only describe it this way. My culture is average)
I hope that the author's writing skills will continue to improve, the plot will continue to be continuous, and there will be a lot of inspiration.
I hope that the heroine will become stronger soon, and that the heroine's methods will become more and more sophisticated.
As for psychological descriptions, modifications, and detailed descriptions, the author does not have to keep writing similar metaphors, metaphors, and personifications (meaning that modifications, metaphors, and personifications appear again in the text soon after). It is also good to leave blanks, white descriptions, and simple writing methods, or occasionally write like talking.
I still hope that there will be more and different stories about this theme.
I like watching this kind of thing, it's so cool to be the protagonist [Adoration]
I don't know what kind of experience the author had when writing this book, but it was quite depressing and breathless. The subject matter is quite novel. This is the first time I have read this kind of description. I can't accept it, but it doesn't affect it. It's a good book. Come on, author.
(Personal opinion only!)
Come on, author, love reading
The writing is really good, much better than those 9-point milk-dragon novels that are not very good at all.
This is the first time I review a book on Tomato, but I can only say that this is one of the few high-quality books of its kind on Tomato, and it is not even comparable to its peers.
Is this single, married, or a lily?
Is it okay to eat more meat? [Blowing a kiss]
The fourth picture of the teacher is gone. Wuwuwuwu. XX
I downloaded it but I'm afraid it will be gone.
I feel so sad when I see it [crying]
It's very interesting to watch, but when will the protagonist be able to regain his composure? It's so frustrating to watch, and my chest feels so tight [crying]
You won't go into a dark room, right?
Every time the heroine bites her lip, why is it not infected and inflamed, leading to oral ulcers?
Yun Jin and Leng Guyue really get along very well, it's a pity
The grief of the little characters is well written. Although there is a lot of pornography, there is no feeling of other humans, but there is a strong sense of pity? No, it's a very complicated feeling. The author's writing is very good, and there's nothing poisonous about it. But I think the psychological portrayal of the protagonist is too much. The author probably wants to highlight the sadness of the little character. If I give it four stars, I feel that I might enter a small dark room later.
I came across this topic again and would like to encourage you. The following personal views First of all, the writing style: OK (some of the psychological descriptions and analogies are very good and detailed), but there are too many modifying words in the writing, and the psychological description is too modified. What is not, what is like, what is like, what is like, it is understandable that you want to enhance the sense of picture and emotional transmission, but if the modification is too redundant, it will interrupt the reading experience and the perception will become worse. And in fact, simple writing does not necessarily mean that it is not good. Like line drawings, you can write well with one word and one sentence, leaving the rest to the reader's imagination and input. Plot progress: Very slow, very slow. It should be because the modifications are too redundant. Sometimes the emphasis is too much on expressing the feelings of modifications. In fact, it can leave some space for readers to imagine. Except for the psychological changes that need to be described a lot, there is no need to be too metaphorical in other aspects. Later, when we look at the relationship between the heroine and Leng, the description is really too redundant. At the beginning, he described the sadness in the past life and compared the past life with the current life. I found it quite amazing. The author also has something of his own. Protagonist: The portrayal is pretty good. Due to the slow progress of the plot, it can be seen that he is not the kind to make decisions immediately but needs time to adapt to this sudden identity. In fact, he was very patient in the early stage. This is excusable. The author wanted to portray an image of a person who does not have a big gold finger but endures humiliation. It's just that readers are easily frustrated and tired, and cannot immerse themselves in the experience. Supporting characters: The portrayal of the villain's success and the protagonist's frustration in the early stage are too detailed and too embellished. It is very sad to read. People like me who are easy to substitute just want to fast forward and fast forward. In the later stage, Leng Guyue, Yan and other money and so on are like human-machine, the characters are a bit empty, and the dialogues are also quite human-machine. You can see the difference but not much. After reading it, I only have one thought. The heroine is very frustrated. The idea is good, but the feeling of highlighting the heroine's intelligence and resourcefulness is not very strong. (I don't have much vocabulary, so I can only describe it this way. My culture is average) I hope that the author's writing skills will continue to improve, the plot will continue to be continuous, and there will be a lot of inspiration. I hope that the heroine will become stronger soon, and that the heroine's methods will become more and more sophisticated. As for psychological descriptions, modifications, and detailed descriptions, the author does not have to keep writing similar metaphors, metaphors, and personifications (meaning that modifications, metaphors, and personifications appear again in the text soon after). It is also good to leave blanks, white descriptions, and simple writing methods, or occasionally write like talking. I still hope that there will be more and different stories about this theme.
I like watching this kind of thing, it's so cool to be the protagonist [Adoration]
I don't know what kind of experience the author had when writing this book, but it was quite depressing and breathless. The subject matter is quite novel. This is the first time I have read this kind of description. I can't accept it, but it doesn't affect it. It's a good book. Come on, author. (Personal opinion only!)
Come on, author, love reading
The writing is really good, much better than those 9-point milk-dragon novels that are not very good at all.
This is the first time I review a book on Tomato, but I can only say that this is one of the few high-quality books of its kind on Tomato, and it is not even comparable to its peers.
Is this single, married, or a lily?
Is it okay to eat more meat? [Blowing a kiss]
The fourth picture of the teacher is gone. Wuwuwuwu. XX
I downloaded it but I'm afraid it will be gone.
I feel so sad when I see it [crying]
It's very interesting to watch, but when will the protagonist be able to regain his composure? It's so frustrating to watch, and my chest feels so tight [crying]
You won't go into a dark room, right?
Every time the heroine bites her lip, why is it not infected and inflamed, leading to oral ulcers?
Yun Jin and Leng Guyue really get along very well, it's a pity
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It's the type I like to watch
Next story come back soon
This is the first time I have seen a novel with this kind of plot on Tomato. Please read it and cherish it. Maybe it will be blocked sometime.
Instructions for time-travelers Article 1: A wise man does not fall in love, and the king will become a master and repeat the same mistakes.
Not bad, come on, friends who write about Uncle Xiao Huang