Dragon in the Clouds, Snake in the Lake

It's also that Shili's Gold Rush has finally come out with a guarantee [face covering]. It's really well written, but I don't know if the author can grasp the handling of the relationship between men and women later on.

It's good-looking, and the rhythm is well controlled. It's neither urgent nor slow. It goes from ignorance to understanding, and it looks at the world from a new and hazy perspective. I finished reading it before I knew it. I hope it will be updated soon.

Very good, the pace is very slow, and each character is vivid and three-dimensional. Mo Yuan still needs one thing to grow up. He is too innocent now. I don't know when the author will kill me (it won't be Qing Ni who is killed by someone to kill the demon and seize the treasure [face covering])

The description of the ignorant and inhuman feeling of just awakening to wisdom is very accurate and beautiful. I will give you five stars after writing it [laughing]

Interestingly, the author was inspired by watching "Mountain Rain Jiao"? The subject matter is similar, but the details and content are different, and the description is also good. I am so happy to have this excellent product.

The writing style is plain, but very suitable for this type of novel. The image of the characters is also good, what kind of people say what kind of words and do what kind of things. But there are a lot of small errors. The author should pay attention to punctuation errors and short sentence segmentation problems.

It's beautiful, it's beautiful. The light, sweet and fresh writing style is like the song of birds after the spring rain accompanied by the fragrance of soft mud, and the clever words are like the clear spring in the mountains carrying fallen red, spreading over the moss and tinkling among the stones. Quiet and elegant, a rare good book

It's a good work, but the writing style feels a bit AI-like. I have read two books with similar writing styles before, but I don't know if they are AI. So far, there's nothing serious about it. I'm a little unclear on the purpose of the character Little Green Snake. Does the author intend to write her as the heroine in the future? The subsequent plot feels very bland, without any conflicts, and it feels like everything is smooth sailing. I'm just looking forward to the follow-up plot where the protagonist will see the broken flow again.

A sense of nature and relaxation comes to my face 1. The writing is very good, real and down-to-earth, with a sense of imagery and empathy. ·There is a story and content❤️There is warmth and emotion❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌹

This is a monster novel that is very comfortable to read. The writing is very beautiful. The image of each character is very three-dimensional, and the tone is slightly vicissitudes of life. It feels like the work of a great master in the past. In the case of most history books like Tomato, it is definitely a masterpiece worth reading. I just hope that there will be no more swords and poisonous spots later, and I hope there will be a female protagonist [I almost cry]

Put it in a tomato and it really looks like a white lotus. The writing style is elegant, and a very distinct character image is depicted in just a few strokes. The author writes very seriously. It feels a bit like watching famous works, such as "The Twelve Hours of Chang'an" and "Chang'an Lychee". I was really surprised to see this book in Shuhuang recently.

It's so well written, I love reading it, unlike other demons, it's so approachable.

It's so beautiful, it feels like still water running deep.

A very good book, a breath of fresh air among Tomato Immortal Cultivation novels. The rhythm is slow and appropriate, just like the horizontal waves of autumn water. The emotions are sincere and touching, as good as the warm sunshine in the middle of winter. If Stinky Tomatoes hadn't been promoted enough, the results would have been even better. I highly recommend everyone to check it out.

Very delicate writing style. Most people can't stand it after reading too many foreign persimmon novels. It's worth reading. The flow is long and smooth. I don't know how the fighting behind it is. The fighting is well written, at least 9.5

A very nice book with a good plot. A little bit of AI on the front? But it could also be the author's style [something]. It feels a bit like "Snake Ancestor". Did part of the author's inspiration come from this? [Adoration] [Adoration], in short, it is a highly recommended book [Adoration] [Adoration]

The perspective is novel, and the confusion of new life, the process of development, and the persistence of life are written out, and the writing touches people's hearts. It's not that the protagonist's family is the only one, but that the protagonist and the world coexist. The language vocabulary is slightly lacking. Overall, I think it's well worth reading, and it's a book that suits me.

It's really good-looking and doesn't feel like a human-machine feeling (maybe I haven't read enough AI articles to notice it, but I really don't think it's AI) Especially Qing Ni and Mo Yuan feel really emmm… quite good-looking, really warm, kind of uh… better than the tranquility of time? A kind of narrative feeling, yeah, yeah

The pace is slow and there are no bad points so far. I personally think it is a very good book. The protagonist is a black snake, who is native to the world view. He started practicing by accident and became wise. The main line is to transform into a dragon. The current plot is that the snake has been in the swamp after turning into a snake, and then went out after transforming into a python. Occasionally, it returns to the swamp. The heroine should be a green snake (not yet transformed), and she likes the protagonist very much. Those who are interested can take a look.

To be honest, the rating is now low, I feel it is above 9.5. Tomato has not had such a good book in many years. It is written with great depth and makes me feel inexplicably moved. Also, the author should work hard to update, there are only more than 200 chapters now.

Not bad, not bad. The writing is very interesting. Although it is a bit bland, the writing style is much better than most Tomato works. Among the novels that are almost all original works written by Shi Wen on this Tomato platform, this novel can really be said to stand out. As long as you readers can bear to read it calmly, I think it will be of great benefit to you personally.

I actually found gold again. It's not easy. The writing is delicate, and he doesn't cut for the sake of cutting. I didn't expect Qingni to take form. I thought he could cut with a knife. It's worth reading. Really, good books have been buried.

I only read 7 chapters! It's so comfortable to read. It's a good story, but many people may not like this way of writing! I hope the author can persist and I will keep following up for updates! Great looking, finished chasing! The author maintains quality updates Why can't it be praised multiple times? This score is too low.

The rhythm is quite slow, and it looks quite comfortable, but it is AI optimized, and the rhythm is controlled like a machine, step by step.

It's a good book, and it has a refreshing feeling like the drizzle in the south of the Yangtze River. It's very good. Also, give Xiao Qingling a little more role [crying]

The storyline is smooth and orderly, very attractive and enjoyable to watch. It is suitable for reading slowly and savoring slowly. It makes people very calm. Highly recommended!

Very nice. To be honest, I started reading Tomato in the second grade of junior high school, and now that I am in my third year of college, there are not many books that I can read that are 4.30. The pacing is so well controlled that people can't help but want to keep watching. Come on, author, don't stop updating [Salute][Salute][Like][Like]

It's pretty good. I really like his traditional and warm way of healing and cultivating immortals. I'm looking forward to the next plot. I also hope that the author can make this story longer and keep it this way. This is enough [Like]

It can be seen that the author is very serious in writing, and the writing is also very good. The rhythm is great, and the description is also very good. It is faster and faster. In addition, I think the design of the book cover is really appropriate and very thoughtful.

It is very well written and has the feel of an old book. Today's novels are too fast-paced, although they are wonderful. But it doesn't have a heavy and readable flavor. The rhythm auxiliary writing is very good.