[Gender Swap + Yuri Transformation + Tsundere younger sister × Gentle, asexual older sister]
Chen Wan realized that something had been off about her lately. She was starting to feel something strange for Chen Huai. Just like today, when she asked Chen Zhun, as usual,
“Why are you always so quiet?”
“Because there's no need to talk.”
“Then why do you talk to other people?”
“I only talk when necessary.”
“What about me? Am I necessary?”
Chen Wan didn't know when she'd become like this, always asking strange questions.
When she saw Lin Yuyan clinging to Chen Huai's arm, her chest tightened.
When she heard someone say, “Your older sister is so pretty,” her brows furrowed. When she woke in the middle of the night and found Chen Huai still out on a mission, she couldn't sleep all night.
She wanted to get closer, to have Chen Huai all to herself, to make Chen Huai look only at her.
Those feelings smoldered in her chest like embers, growing more intense and hotter the more she tried to suppress them
Until, one night, she finally couldn't hold them back.
“You said you wouldn't find me annoying.”
“I did.”
“Then I'm going to do something now. You aren't allowed to get annoyed.”
“What?”
“...Just wait.”
“Once some sparks are lit, they can never be put out again.”
Still... Ok, it's definitely not AI anyway. Judging from the constant switching of the protagonist's name between Huai and Zhun, 80% of it is handwritten. Also, I didn't feel that it was exciting. The whole text was bland and the characterization was pretty good. I'd like to give you five stars to encourage you. It's not easy to write a new book.
Personally, I prefer Tie Tie, but I was a bit fooled into it by the title. The writing style feels a bit like Cologne, with a relatively obvious free and easy and quaint atmosphere. The dialogues between the characters are mostly subtle and clever, and the transitions are neat, efficient and quick. By analogy, it has the flavor of Sanfenzhenyao Pass, but without the drag. Focusing on the main plot, 90% of it is serious business. I am skeptical about posting. The family debuff and the writing style shown so far are far from the warm daily life mentioned by the author. Anyway, as a reader, I don't feel it very much. It's not to my liking, so I'll give it four stars to encourage it.
It's good to read, but it's too bland and boring. Sometimes it feels like a running account, but if you read it with your heart, you will find that the writing is very interesting, and the protagonist burns with emotions and becomes a human being. I'm worried for my sister, so I'm going to spread my love.
This is my first time reading such a new book, and I can see it has great potential. The story should still have a relatively common framework, but the author's writing style is outstanding, making the novel full of charm, like a ball of warm water with the feeling of a fire burning quietly underneath. At the same time, to paraphrase the author, the arrogant sister and the iceberg gentle sister are really delicious, but I can't see how to eat them at the moment.
How can the protagonist be gentle? He is purely human-machine. He doesn't respond without instructions. He is very dull [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]
Jazz is a good book, it has really come full circle—— 111, when will the candle-lighting session be held for me, can I be calm?
Not bad, but I don't know if it's just the way he speaks or is it due to his personality? Sometimes the dialogue, one after another, makes me a little exhausted/uncomfortable? Yes, maybe there is room for improvement in dialogue 🤔
So far, I feel that this book does not describe the protagonist's emotions very well. When reading Daily Life, I always feel that the protagonist is an emotionless person, that the protagonist has no soul. When reading other books, the character of the protagonist will make people either like or hate it. But when reading this book, I feel that the protagonist is an emotionless person. The character feels so fake that I can't relate to it, and when reading this book, I can clearly feel that this is a book written by a newcomer. I thought it was your first book. I can't explain exactly why. I just didn't post a description. I don't know if you, the author, read the entire book when you were writing it.
Clingy girl and sexy girl, it feels okay
The details of getting along with each other are very interesting. I just hope that the heroine can wake up soon, talk to her sister about her feelings, and train with peace of mind to become stronger.