Oh No! Ace Ate the Dark-Dark Fruit

The writing is very exciting so far. There is no attempt to steal Luffy's crew. They are all self-created or original characters. However, the point of giving the royal mate at the beginning has not changed. Sabo should have the potential to be a general. There are a lot of AIs at the back, I can even tell what AI it was written with.

Not bad, not bad [laughing evilly] The identity of the protagonist will be revealed sooner or later. You can first report the identity of Blackbeard and let the World Government pursue Blackbeard [laughing evilly]

I think it's great! The plot, characters, and descriptions, this is one of the few genuine novels I have seen among Tomato novels. It can be said that you can definitely go to Qidian to publish the article. Tomato novels are more not novels, but the author's self-motivated articles. They have too many random plots, half-hearted characters, and overly expressive characters. At least so far, I see your book as what a novel should be, writing a story and your imagination for others to read.

The writing is great. As a ten-year-old Haimi, the description of the characters in this book is really detailed and fits the personalities of the characters in One Piece. The author must not be a eunuch [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's a good book, and it's well written, but I still want to say that Bucky is really embarrassing [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Very good, considered to be the top pirate fan in Tomato. Some personal suggestions: 1. The protagonist's personality is a bit too cold, and he has little communication with the members. He feels like a high-ranking and indifferent monarch. It might be better to have more bonds, daily communication, companionship, etc. Among the members in the pirate world. 2. The description of the development of the power is very detailed, but it feels a bit too detailed [facepalm] too much and it becomes a bit boring. After all, most people read pirate fandom for the bond of pirates, battles, etc. There is no need to be so detailed about the development of the ruling jurisdiction. Overall it's very good, nothing bad, five-star praise, waiting for updates

The world view, plot, and crew are all pretty good, but some details of the fights are too wordy. I hope the author can change them. There are also some monsters and the like. The strength of the protagonist group can be seen in seconds without too many wordy plots.

There are still traces of AI, I hope the author will use less AI

A very enjoyable fanfic, I rate it 9 out of 10

I have read the latest 400 chapters. Generally speaking, the early stage is quite good. There are a lot of repetitive plots in the back. The plot written in the previous chapter is mentioned again in the next chapter. It may be the AI ​​polishing or something that makes the whole plot seem a bit long-winded. Also, the subsequent plot is about training to beat one's own people. After training, one goes to fight the enemy. The enemy comes back to train and beat one's own people after the fight. Each fight scene is written very long (the author is immersed in his own little fighting paradise). Overall, it is okay. You can read it in the book wasteland.