[Armor Hero I + Armor Hero II + Armor Hero III]
Lin Bufan was struck head-on by the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse and died in the modern world.
But he was reborn in the Armor Hero world, inside the body of another Lin Bufan with the same name.
His parents were both dead.
He was adopted by Yang's mother and raised to adulthood.
As a secret practitioner from a lineage passed down for generations, Yang's mother taught Lin Bufan the Ares mind-training method, Ares telepathic communication over a thousand miles, and Ares divination from childhood.
Unable to put up with his younger sister Yang Yinghuan's constant pestering, he went to work at the D City Research Institute.
It wasn't long before
he encountered a rampaging mutant beast.
Wanting to test the power of the Shura Armor in his hands, he summoned Shura on the spot and used the Evil Ginseng Beast as a target.
Lin Bufan: "Shura Armor, combine!"
The Shadow Guardians: "Damn it! Where did that Shura Armor come from? It's ruined everything!"
Li Xinnan: "So that's the Shura Armor... I'm so weak compared to him!"
Bei Miao: "I have to get stronger! I have to surpass him!"
I feel that some parts of this book are too fast, for example, the handling of the emotional line, the part where Binger fell in love with the protagonist in the gym was too fast. Why do you like the protagonist? Just by saying that there is no pressure to stay with the protagonist, no need to pretend, no need to be on guard, you fall in love with the protagonist? I know what you're trying to write, but it's so fast that it feels like child's play. Also, after obtaining the Shura Armor, the plot has not yet begun, so the armor does not show its strength until Chapter 10. I feel this is a bit slow. And this is the armor world. The priority to write should be the theme of armor. For example, Kaiyi's team problem, how will Hui solve it after the protagonist is gone? And the branch plot can be about how you convinced those female protagonists. Secondly, there is the issue of shaping the protagonist. For example, after meeting Bing'er in the gym, it seems that Bing'er took the initiative to find the protagonist, right? Now that they have struck up a conversation and have been working out together for so long, the protagonist still has a cold attitude no matter what he says. For example, the chapter where Bing'er goes to the protagonist for dinner. The protagonist was willing to go, but still replied in a light tone, "There is still one more class, I will go find you at noon." I know what you want to write about, but it doesn't sound like that. Come on, I believe you will get better and better
I hope the author arranges a female protagonist
A solid assistant director and a smooth plot. The ugly character of being beaten will appear throughout the text
Focus and become stronger, attitude is very good, not bad, not bad
More heroines, more heroines, more heroines.
@Zuoqianhu I hope Bing'er won't be possessed by the Shadow Guardian. When will the protagonist take Bing'er back?