[Armor 1+Armor 2+Armor 3]
Lin Bufan encountered a head-on collision with the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse and died in modern times.
But he was reborn in the armor world, in the body of Lin Bufan, who has the same name and surname.
Both parents died.
Adopted by Mother Yang and brought up.
As a esoteric cultivator inherited the year before last, Mother Yang taught Lin Bufan the cultivation of Ares' thoughts, the art of Ares's voice transmission from a thousand miles away, and the art of Ares' prediction since she was a child.
Because he couldn't stand the entanglement of his younger sister Yang Yingying, he went to work at the D City Scientific Research Institute.
It didn't take long.
Then he encountered a supernatural beast committing murder.
In order to test how strong the Shura armor in his hand was, he immediately summoned Shura and used the evil ginseng beast as a target.
Lin Bufan: "Shura Armor - Fusion!"
Shadow Protector: "Damn it, where did the Shura armor come from? It ruins my good deeds."
Li Xinnan: "Is that Shura Armor? I am so weak in front of him!"
Beimiao: "I want to become stronger, I want to surpass him!"
Reader comments
I feel that some parts of this book are too fast, for example, the handling of the emotional line, the part where Binger fell in love with the protagonist in the gym was too fast. Why do you like the protagonist? Just by saying that there is no pressure to stay with the protagonist, no need to pretend, no need to be on guard, you fall in love with the protagonist? I know what you're trying to write, but it's so fast that it feels like child's play.
Also, after obtaining the Shura Armor, the plot has not yet begun, so the armor does not show its strength until Chapter 10. I feel this is a bit slow. And this is the armor world. The priority to write should be the theme of armor. For example, Kaiyi's team problem, how will Hui solve it after the protagonist is gone? And the branch plot can be about how you convinced those female protagonists.
Secondly, there is the issue of shaping the protagonist. For example, after meeting Bing'er in the gym, it seems that Bing'er took the initiative to find the protagonist, right? Now that they have struck up a conversation and have been working out together for so long, the protagonist still has a cold attitude no matter what he says. For example, the chapter where Bing'er goes to the protagonist for dinner. The protagonist was willing to go, but still replied in a light tone, "There is still one more class, I will go find you at noon." I know what you want to write about, but it doesn't sound like that.
Come on, I believe you will get better and better
I hope the author arranges a female protagonist
A solid assistant director and a smooth plot. The ugly character of being beaten will appear throughout the text
Focus and become stronger, attitude is very good, not bad, not bad
@Zuoqianhu I hope Bing'er won't be possessed by the Shadow Guardian. When will the protagonist take Bing'er back?
I feel that some parts of this book are too fast, for example, the handling of the emotional line, the part where Binger fell in love with the protagonist in the gym was too fast. Why do you like the protagonist? Just by saying that there is no pressure to stay with the protagonist, no need to pretend, no need to be on guard, you fall in love with the protagonist? I know what you're trying to write, but it's so fast that it feels like child's play. Also, after obtaining the Shura Armor, the plot has not yet begun, so the armor does not show its strength until Chapter 10. I feel this is a bit slow. And this is the armor world. The priority to write should be the theme of armor. For example, Kaiyi's team problem, how will Hui solve it after the protagonist is gone? And the branch plot can be about how you convinced those female protagonists. Secondly, there is the issue of shaping the protagonist. For example, after meeting Bing'er in the gym, it seems that Bing'er took the initiative to find the protagonist, right? Now that they have struck up a conversation and have been working out together for so long, the protagonist still has a cold attitude no matter what he says. For example, the chapter where Bing'er goes to the protagonist for dinner. The protagonist was willing to go, but still replied in a light tone, "There is still one more class, I will go find you at noon." I know what you want to write about, but it doesn't sound like that. Come on, I believe you will get better and better
I hope the author arranges a female protagonist
A solid assistant director and a smooth plot. The ugly character of being beaten will appear throughout the text
Focus and become stronger, attitude is very good, not bad, not bad
@Zuoqianhu I hope Bing'er won't be possessed by the Shadow Guardian. When will the protagonist take Bing'er back?
More heroines, more heroines, more heroines.