Curse Return: the Elder Brother of the Chanyuan Family

The author has studied the original work very thoroughly, especially the name and role of the field set for Xia Youjie that I just saw. It is a very good fanfic in itself. Although many people think that this book has shortcomings and think that it is the same whether it has a protagonist or not, but I think this is one of the reasons why this book is particularly good. There is no arrogant protagonist, only a senior who everyone can rest assured. Focusing on the description of other characters except the protagonist makes me feel that this is really a world of magic, and the characters are not biased. I personally think it is much better than those works where the protagonist immediately changes the world and uses the system without brainstorming.

I feel like this book has many merits, but I don't understand why the rating is so low. The protagonist is well portrayed, and every word is just a gag or joke. The overall words and deeds are in line with the world view, and the character is calm and cautious. He chose the most reasonable way to deal with the corruption of the magic world, which is to join the top management and carry out infiltrative reforms, instead of resorting to force like childish "Long Aotian" The strength of the spells is reasonable, not supermodel, and taken from the original world view. There is no collage of settings from other works. The protagonist can develop simple spells to the extreme, which is very imaginative. The protagonist's strong physical fitness is also explained later. The plot design is excellent, the overall tone of the story is serious, the protagonist has changed a lot, and it is difficult to reconcile. At the same time, the influence of these people on the plot changes is reasonable. The story line has been changed without collapse, and after adding new combat forces, it has not formed a crushing trend. It can still describe the crisis and fierce battle of the situation very well. The transformation and strengthening of the characters are traceable. The description of friendship is warm but not excessive. The scale is reasonable and there is no random CP, which is more suitable for the taste of male videos. It can basically be said to be the best book I have ever read on a spell fic. I would like to add that the author's design of all new techniques and new areas is very good, and the names are also very particular. Some even have allusions. Occasionally, you can see the original book setting pictures provided by the author in the paragraphs and comments as a basis.

The original protagonists are not time travel or rebirth, but are born in this world. They are the same geniuses as the original trio. The story of four people attracting each other and supporting each other to grow continuously! We are close friends! It's like watching a story from another parallel world! Nothing out of the ordinary! ! It's not a mindless article that points out the spoilers of the script, but it's because of us that we can make up for each other's regrets, original style! The plot doesn't drag out and is very enjoyable to watch, and the writing is super good! ! I don't want to read the unfinished parts of the article. If nothing happens, I'll just check out how many chapters the author has updated today! I didn't want to read Unfinished at first, so I just checked out some of the author's updates! !

I've almost finished reading it, let me tell you my feelings. The author's setting is good, the naming style of the spells and fields are very suitable for the curse, and the writing style is not bad. It makes people feel comfortable to read, and there is no OOC. Overall, it is a good novel, but there are many shortcomings. The first is the problem of the participation of the protagonist. The participation of the protagonist is still a bit less. Even if you want to write a group portrait, it should be extended under the influence of the protagonist to reflect the role of the protagonist. There are several in the plot First of all, the protagonist is completely ignored to describe the supporting characters, so it makes people feel that the protagonist's existence is not high. Secondly, the protagonist's growth curve is deliberately downplayed, and he becomes stronger inexplicably. There is no specific explanation or only a few strokes to mention it. The readers have to figure it out by themselves. There is also a mistake that many fan authors make. If you want to expand the world view, to be honest, just write about local things. If you write too much, it will be easy to lose control, and it is easy to involve certain topics that lead to flow restrictions.

Although the original person in the astral body incident is still dead, overall I can accept the changes in the plot. The best change is the Xiayou line. The plot of the Shibuya Incident has also been filled in. The character of the protagonist is also very good. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

What can I say, the plot is generally a bit bland, but I like the writing style very much. It is just right for bookworms who have been reading for more than ten years. Also, there is not much audience for this style of writing in Tomato. It is not suitable for Tomato. I feel that it would be better at the starting point, just like the book "Goblin Heavy Dependence" by the Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2025. The author's writing style is very similar to that book, but the plot is a little less interesting, but in general it is a good fanfic and worth recommending.

It's really good. The characters are not OOC, and it's very Japanese-like. The original characters can actually promote the plot reasonably and avoid the original tragedy without knowing the plot. They are not the kind of time-travelers who spoil the story every second. Yes, it's very good.

It's really excellent. I'll write a long review when I have time. Only such a novel can be called a fan, and it truly finds another way to make up for regrets on the basis of respecting the original work. I admire the author's restrained, sophisticated, calm and sophisticated plot design.

It's obviously very good-looking, but the addition of the protagonist changes a lot of things, and not without warning (spoiler alert!!!) Many people don't accept the four in the day, but I think it's good. The astral incident made the protagonist and Gojo grow up, and this is how the protagonist later reformed the magic world. Especially the current Death Return Chapter, the plot is getting better and better, and the plot development can be said to be the best among the fics I have ever read. Please continue to update it!

This book is okay, but I don't understand why a small number of people say that Tian Nei is dead (the original book seems to be dead as well), so I give it a low score. At least for fanfics, every fanfic should have its own points of interest, otherwise who would read a mediocre article with no points of interest? Although this book does not always revolve around the protagonist, the appearance of the protagonist seems to be a way of maintaining it, and it feels a bit like a group portrait, which is good. The protagonist's emotions have always been stable, but his contribution to some things is huge. There are no awkward points or super strength like other fanfics, which also shows that the protagonist is not invincible, they are on the same line. The author did not impose a role on Minggo because he was his protagonist. Instead, he gradually integrated it into the story, as if he really was a character here. Not to mention that I just like this kind of light and affectionate protagonist. The appearance of the protagonist has a better effect among the original three people. Reason and calmness are like synonyms for the protagonist. Cheers to the author! Although I am only an ordinary reader and may disappear at any time, at least now I will read this book. This book is rated higher than you think! The numerical value is just a number. The real rating is determined by the readers who read the book.

Don't judge whether a book is good or not based on its ratings. Some people only rate it based on whether it suits their taste, not the quality of the book. It feels very good to watch. It has the flavor of a youthful and passionate novel in the early stage. In the early stage, the three of them, the protagonist and Gojo Satoru, have the unbridled enthusiasm of young people. There is also the sincere relationship and unparalleled trust between them. The only flaw is the protagonist. There are not many descriptions of the growth of his abilities, and it makes people feel that he is a bit inexplicably strong. Although it is similar to the progress of Gojo Satoru in the original series, after all, the protagonist of this fanfic is Zenin Shingo. It is based on the spell return battle and written around it. Also, this book really makes up for a lot of regrets. I especially like the warm and cozy atmosphere between the protagonist and his partners.

It looks great, but Riko is a non-staffer... In fact, when the protagonist killed the demon Xu Luo, the way he killed was a little wrong. Just increasing the output efficiency of the flame will be quickly adapted to Moxuluo. I don't know if the author didn't understand Moxuluo's setting or something else.

How many more surprises will this book give me?! I personally think there are two reasons for the low rating: I accidentally read this novel, and in the early stage, I saw that the protagonist's trio was singled out by Shi'er even though they knew there might be Shi'er. After the story of the trio's experience in the early Huaiyu chapter was written, I thought that the rest of it was basically the original Shuizhang. The protagonist's expressiveness was too weak. He almost died after hitting 15 Finger Two-faced Demon. This can basically confirm that they are I want to read the kind of book where the main character is popular all over the world. The other kind is to join in the fun and give negative reviews. It is obviously not the type I like, but they still want to leave comments and write their own [correct] evaluation after reading the book. Generally, the reviews of the books they read do not exceed three stars. If it exceeds, it can only be said that it is just right for their taste, or it is possible both, this is the answer.

It's a good Curseback fanfic, but unfortunately there's very little description of the protagonist's growth, and a lot of time has been skipped for the sake of the main plot. Overall, it's quite good. It was fine before Death Return. After it started, live barrage and other settings were introduced, and it looked very bad.

This is not a cool novel in the traditional sense. I feel that the protagonist is just a little butterfly that stirs up the plot. Not every tragedy is saved by him personally, but the source of salvation in every tragedy is him.

It is a very excellent fan work. It is top-notch in terms of understanding and shaping of the characters. The narrative style and rhythm without delay and the many small ideas interspersed in it are very enjoyable. Tasting it makes me happy physically and mentally. It's just... I have to keep updating, the author [shy]

What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! What a joke! Please rewrite it. I don't want Li Zi to go offline [crying]

It's so pleasant. I will probably never forget you in this life.

I quite like the writing style at the moment. Although Tian Nei is still dead, which is a bit uncomfortable😣, at least Jie is not dead at the moment, and his body should not be taken over in the future [sending heart]. I like Shingo's character very much! The kind of person who is calm and rational but not lacking in emotion, I eat eat eat [admiration]

I like it, it's a cursed fanfic that I like very much. Jingo's character design is really good. The author also has a thorough understanding of the original text. And the domain names are really like the original work. It feels like I'm reading the original work.

It's nice to look at and the character of the main character is well created.

This novel has been quite successfully adapted based on the original version. The plot is reasonable, the combat power is reasonable, and the analysis is reasonable. Coupled with smooth plot and rich emotional experience. A masterpiece, a masterpiece.

I am very satisfied. The world of magic is not a showcase for one person. It does not let the glory of others pass away because of the arrival of the protagonist. Instead, it cleverly uses the butterfly effect and no spoilers to advance the original plot to a great extent while ensuring the original charm of each person. This is the main highlight of this book.

It's very well written. It's a top-notch fanfic. It's not like reading a chronicle. The quality is guaranteed through updates. (It's so rare. Every time I push for an update, the book stops updating. I'm really happy this time.) I'll keep up with the updates. I hope the author can write better and better. The best fanfic I've read in the past year or two.

It's really not bad. The author is not just trying to make a living, but really wants to write a good story and save the bitter summer of breakup.

After reading the first few paragraphs, it was okay, but Riko Tenuchi seems to be dead.

There's nothing poisonous about it. I hope I don't have any knives.

The main character has too few roles, but the others are pretty good. This one has a 7.5 Rating. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's not very bad either. [Thinking]

It's very interesting. I read the latest chapter in one go. Good luck to the author.

Book review record—— It is very similar to the original work. The protagonist and the world of Curse are well integrated. When reading, it feels like there is such a person in the original work. I respect the setting and combat power of the original work very much, and it feels calm and comfortable to read.