Inquisitor Who Runs a Women's Prison Part-Time

The author, - although I don't know if you have seen it or not - is just some humble opinion: the rhythm of the writing is moderate, the level of words and sentences is at least above the average level of online writing - let alone Tomato -, and the rare enlightenment and progress of ideas (a discussion after the execution of the earl, and only from the ideological point of view , it has a certain degree of dialectics and moral sublimity - at least I think so); almost no one talks about artistic techniques in online articles, and I am not here for this, so I won't go into detail about this - and anyway, I occasionally find some artistic embellishments in the articles, which I like very much ;——Those who read online articles should read them for pleasure.——I don't deny those who read online articles as serious works, but I don't agree that serious reading is mental work and very energy-consuming. This is not the limit of online articles, and almost no online articles are qualified (in terms of ideological, artistic, and emotional depth). (Above) Compared with serious literature - I read dozens of chapters, and I didn't feel very happy. What I saw was a depressed protagonist, but because this protagonist was more or less three-dimensional, and interspersed with some complaints and jokes, I continued reading - but I still didn't feel very happy, or even completely unhappy. There are two main aspects of male pleasure, one is women, and the other is strength, and the pleasure conveyed by the two must require the dynamic nature of the expression of the two - that is, the protagonist should be stronger when he becomes stronger than when he has always been at the same level (the failure of many invincible novels lies in this kind of fatigue). If you must write the latter, you must use another word. A progressive refreshing system is used as the main line. For example: if you have played Minecraft, apart from being excited about everything new when you were a child, we often lose enthusiasm for the creative mode after our minds stabilize. Once the survival mode is opened, we want to start it again, and then it becomes boring - it is too easy to get. At least in the first few dozen chapters, I did not see a progressive main line. Instead, I kept opening dungeons - women, characters, settings, enemies, but there was no gradual development in any of them. After dozens of chapters, there are more and more female protagonists, but the relationship with any female protagonist has not progressed. This will only make people more and more miserable, just like downloading many videos, the task bar is getting more and more, but the progress of each video is almost unchanged - this is a very unwise choice. I highly recommend those who eat one first at the beginning. Although this kind of horizontal mountain may cause problems in other aspects - such as the collapse of character creation, such as the antipathy of the code within the code - but at least it is not difficult to deal with, and it is far less fatal than sitting around and waiting like fishing. "When will there be development? When will we have to eat?" This question was all over my mind. "It seems too far away that I can't even wait." This is the answer I got from watching it. The male protagonist is almost invincible from the beginning. Maybe the world view will be expanded later, but in the atmosphere of still invincibility, other main lines are indispensable. According to the subject of this book, the emotional line is obviously the best choice, but I saw some comments saying that I couldn't finish more than 90 chapters. Isn't it too boring? That's it. I came here to enjoy it. Unfortunately, I didn't enjoy it. But because I saw some concepts and other details in the book, I felt a little pity (for lack of a more suitable word) for you, the author, so I will say more.

Chapter 182: I was amazed by the author's lion-like language system. Even though many of them are just superficial descriptions, there is such a straightforward, concise and concise article that really made me black-eyed (not in a derogatory sense). In terms of the rest of the plot, although there are restrictions on the strength of the male protagonist, there is no such painful plot where the strength cannot be used. It is also very decisive and quite comfortable. There is no hiding the meat. The various thundering voices of the goddess and the heroine coupled with the unclear gameplay are still very delicious.

Invincible is invincible, where is the tasting? In more than 100 chapters, no one has to eat it. You have a reason for saying that the succubus can't eat it right away, but what about other things? The characters are being added but their relationships have never been advanced.

A very good book, the writing is considered to be very good in Tomato, the content and subject matter are also very novel and attractive, the driving is also very interesting, and the character development is not bad. Currently, I feel that it can be about 9.0

Looks so familiar! Kind of like the warden guarding the witch!

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Invincible and pure, the basic settings and character creation skills are guaranteed to be at the lowest level, so the starting point is not low. How good it will be in the future depends on whether it can continue to keep the excitement, or if other factors that attract readers are added, as mentioned above. I have to say that the high-concept elements do need to be patched in, but is that a bit too much? I think most people don't like to watch a plot-driven work that keeps talking about "spaghetti needs to be mixed with No. 95 Concrete" and so on.

It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings. The male protagonist is more of a succubus than a succubus. It's just a cool story. I feel like the protagonist is very strong but there's no specific comparison to know how strong it is. Also, I need to see some training [anger]

The characters in it all have the same language system as thunder, watch it and cherish it

Frog fun, frog fun, frog fun. It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting and attractive Western fantasy. The setting is very consistent with my imagination. Although Western fantasy is not easy to live in Tomato, I can still write so many chapters. The completion rate is very high and I can follow it. The protagonist setting is cleverly hidden to attract readers' interest in reading.

As a harem novel, it's quite enjoyable. I don't think it has any negative points. The one star deduction is because the whole world view is too grand, with high dimensions and low dimensions. There is also a meeting to decide the direction of order. If you don't say it, it has no reason, but it is like forcing a bunch of truth on you.

This book is really amazing. The plot and writing are both good. Although it's a bit like Aiden's book, this one is better written than that one, but so few people have read it.

The worldview structure is very good and the narrative is very comfortable. When reading this book, I feel like it was written by some great god.

Not bad. I personally think the plot is very good. When I first started watching, there were a few hundred people, and now there are hundreds of thousands. Again, not bad [admiration] [blowing kiss]

Yes, the plot is very similar to a comic, but that comic was cut in half, and I really hope this novel can stick to it. (Also, is this really not Liu Bei? The author gave it to Shen He? This can be done.)

It's very good. The protagonist's rationality and sensibility are well reflected. He is very elegant and powerful, and has invincible combat power. It is a very good and refreshing article. Although Chapter 146 is the real story, the daily thunder language is very exciting. Afterwards, the author got excited about it, and I knew I was right to read the western fantasy novel.

It's really well written. The characters are well drawn. Come on, the author of Little Emperor Uncle

It's still the same thunder language system, it's still the same as elbowing Shen He, it's still the same, while other authors are still making repeated revisions because of Shen He's obstacles, this novel still refines Shen Ke. It's rare to see such a powerful novel!

The plot and cars are good, the fights and the world view are good, but I still can't understand the combat power˚ʚ₍ ᐢ. ̫ .ᐢ ₎ɞ˚

It's very well written. It's a hidden master. Big boost for the author. ૮₍ˊᗜˋ₎ა

Although there are some logical flaws, I still like it overall. The protagonist is well portrayed, at least not pretentious. There are also people who understand everything [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Come on, keep at it

Boss, is this too obscure? Can you write it more realistically? [Laughs] (Invincible wording)

I boldly predict that this book will be a hit. The author's outspoken style is definitely rare. The style is invincible (at least I've read almost 200 chapters in which the protagonist pushes past), daily writing, the main content is the daily life with various beautiful girls, occasionally kicking away the little monsters who don't have long eyes.

Good book. I have been reading Tomato for 2,000 hours. This is one of the few books that I think is good in the Cthulhu worldview system.

You have to eat and kick me

Full of faintness, must be full of faintness

That's it. Why did you go straight into the dark room after writing this?

I personally feel very happy, but it just came out and there are a little few chapters.

The warden, the multi-racial girl, the little succubus who fell in love at first sight, and the blood clan escaping from prison, how come it looks like the plot of a comic book. . . Tribute or that?

The writing, story and character development are very good, and can reflect the feeling of a different race. It is a bit too difficult for the male protagonist, who is the world's top combat power, to be afraid of being sucked dry by the succubus. However, the newer chapters have also added some settings, and it is not like before that the male protagonist is nourishing his stomach ().