Traveling Across Time, Erba, Let Me Guard the Relics

I was once an ant in Bibo Pond, Even death is not remembered. Until the emotional system enters the body, All sentient beings are my ladder to heaven. Stealing the remains of the dragon girl, breaking the foundation wall; Breaking into a car, Chi Fengyun changes the situation of destiny; Set up the Wanxiang Pavilion leading to the Tianhe River, With the benevolence of a doctor, he gathers tools from all directions. An invitation from the inspiration king? That was the sacrifice of Hualongchi. A chess game filled with gods and Buddhas? This time, it's up to me. Eight hundred miles leading to the Tianhe River, the tribulation energy gathers. I had my hair straightened and my face slimmed down, and I went to the appointment. Four thousand updates a day, watch Ba running around—— From a bitch to a demon saint. Dear readers, I am very sorry to tell you that in order to refine the content of the first volume today, I revised too many words, which triggered the platform update limit. It is temporarily impossible to update new chapters today. This modification is to make the plot smoother, the characters more fleshed-out, and give everyone a better reading experience. It is really helpless to stop updating for one day. I will update it normally tomorrow. Thank you everyone for your understanding and tolerance. Take away Benbo'er Ba Yours sincerely

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good

It feels okay and worth watching. The pace is quite fast and the writing is okay.

The writing is smooth and the story line is layered. I feel that the protagonist has a lot of room for development in the later period.

I've only read three chapters, and I think it's okay, but the number of words is still short. I plan to read more.

The first volume is very fast-paced and good, worth reading I added it to the bookshelf very early. Because the word count was too small, I kept reading Volume 1 without reading it. I even wrote a short review for Volume 1 before. I suddenly picked it up in the past few days and followed it for several hours to catch up with the updated chapters. Now I am writing this long follow-up review. To be honest, when the first volume was just finished, I was still shocked that the protagonist survived a desperate situation through some operations, but after reading the latest serialized chapters, I must say: this book is getting better! If Volume 1 is an exciting foreshadowing for survival in the cracks, then the Chaos Golden Elixir and Talent Enhancement plots updated in the past two days are definitely the high-energy starting point of the book, especially the water-spirited god, which is simply a 6-turn. What surprises me the most is the protagonist's growth line, which is no longer a simple golden finger crushing, but a hard-core advancement that involves both IQ and force. Especially the games where the protagonist faced high-level monks, the plot twists were extremely subtle, and my adrenaline was soaring. The author's control of pacing is really amazing! After the tense and exciting fighting scenes, delicate foreshadowing recycling can always be arranged to buffer it. I especially like the protagonist's tenacity to jump over the dragon's gate even if he turns into a fish. It's really poignant. In addition, I have been fascinated by the foreshadowing laid in the plot, such as the system's function ban and sudden outbreak. Although the second volume is a little slow, it can be felt that the author has really paid attention to the details, the world view structure is also relatively solid, and the designed three realms of earthly immortals are also innovative with the traditional realm of immortality. It is highly recommended for book friends who are still hesitating to jump in directly! This is definitely a masterpiece that gets better and better the more you read it. I hope the author can speed up the update and make the story more exciting!

Very good, very good. Very good. It's time to reach the dragon transformation stage.