People Are Falling Apart, Aha Sent a Pair of Glasses at the Beginning

It's quite interesting. The author did a good job of textual research, but it's a pity that the justice of the theme is a bit forced. It's a simple adaptation of the original work, with some hot spots such as the feelings of family and country forced in. The details are not handled well. There is an inexplicable smell of diaosi (such as the formal diction on certain occasions, etc.) The front is awkward, but the so-called hydrology in the back is not bad. The daily routine is to my liking.

It's a good book, but I can't stand it anymore. There's no problem. It's just my personal lack of enjoyment. Well, I hate the feeling of powerlessness when the protagonist is weak, especially when the plan (even if it's successful) is placed in front of me. It's even more uncomfortable.

Overall, it's okay, but the length of Xianzhou seems to affect the viewing experience a bit. I want to watch the dungeon plot, but the daily life of Xianzhou is a bit too long. I think it can be shortened appropriately I'm really convinced. If there is still a fairy boat in the daily routine, can you please stop foreshadowing it for so long? I can't follow it anymore. Too annoying

See Chapter 81. The protagonist is a time traveler who became a native of Xianzhou. He became lame when he was 18 years old. With the help of netizen Aha, he found a completely open and immersive game (actually it is a fun and interesting job, allowing the protagonist to possess other people's bodies and control others to pass the game). The protagonist didn't know the plot, and then he possessed Bronya in the first world of ice and snow. Then the protagonist relied on his superb gaming skills to greatly enhance his force. At the same time, based on what he saw and heard before traveling, he quickly became the Great Guardian. Create a society where everyone is like a dragon. Because the energy of the star core was abused some time ago, the energy signal generated attracted the two extermination armies, Xing Xiao and Huan Wu. In times of crisis, the protagonist's ideas attract many Star Gods. Preserve, harmonize, and hunt. But the protagonist gave up the opportunity to choose to become an envoy, and made a great wish to the gods, giving a little hope to everyone in crisis. And he became. He also understood why he was lame. Maybe it's because of balance, or maybe it's because of something else. The price is these legs, and of course the God of Fun will be able to exert his strength during this period. The result is the cause Although he did not become a commander, the hunting brother used his strength. He assisted the protagonist by firing a hunting arrow and summoned a large number of patrolling rangers. (Of course, I have encountered this situation before. In the game that the protagonist thinks he is, he initially set up a way to save the civilization of the ice and snow planet, which is to compete for the position of the great guardian, and then unite everyone to break the ice and snow and rebuild life. After going offline, he was dreaming, dreaming There are also these few star gods who can watch around and initially agree with the protagonist's ideas. The protagonist also becomes a general by the way. In fact, the hunter shot him nine arrows. He thought he had made some mistake, so he asked the general and the like, and then he became a general inexplicably) It's really good. The protagonist of the novel takes the route of ideal and practical socialism, and the route of redemption that reorganizes the civilized order. I feel like this is pretty good, a high-quality grain.

It's really good. In fact, I don't really like the type where the protagonist doesn't know the plot. But this book is really well written and there are basically no poisonous points.

The writing is very interesting. The story runs on two parallel lines, and the protagonist completely implements the thoughts of a player. Although he controls a female character, he is not obscene at all.

It's very interesting, I really recommend reading it, especially if you are in a book shortage. There are some truths to it, and it's quite comfortable to watch. It makes people feel warm [sends my heart]. I'm not going to lie to you. Give it a look. I can guarantee that the first and middle stages are very interesting. The later part depends on the author's level, but it feels good to do this level, like opening a trumpet [Thinking]

This article is quite good. It has some abstract and secondary elements. You may forget it if you don't read it later. You can read it without paying attention to the settings. It's a fanfic that can be easily read. There are many themes for operating game characters, but they are rare in Star Iron. It has a certain freshness. The protagonist has never played Star Iron, and has only heard of Time Traveler.

This book describes the story of an old woman who went to the toilet but couldn't poop out. The first paragraph shows that the old woman started squatting in the pit, but then the screams became angry, expressing the old woman's hatred of constipation, and then became sad, expressing the old woman's helplessness and despair of being unable to go out. Then she lengthened her voice, roared, and then fell into sadness again. Then she made a devilish cry, indicating that the old woman was determined to fight against constipation, but she still couldn't pull it out. She fell into sadness again, made a series of roars and finally got stuck in ten thousand years of phlegm, and died of suffocation. [Sinister smile]

I have read 72 chapters so far, and the content is humorous and the protagonist's character is in line with my expectations. I hope that later authors will not reduce the quality of the entire novel because of speed. In this fast food era, there are really very few people who can finish a novel to the end.

I am Shennong and can be eaten🤓

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I like the author's intention, it's really popular. I know it's very idealistic in the context of the collapse of iron, but isn't that what we read in novels? And who can refuse to carry forward our ideas in another world? And this article does not focus on development, but really walks the path of the protagonist. Although I like the Star Train family, it would be a waste of money to not use such a powerful variable as the protagonist! Do you understand how valuable it is that the protagonist has never played Bengtie, but he can figure out the ins and outs with his own brain? Jing Yuanyuan of this article: I got a UR card! The future of Luofu is promising, I can retire! Oh, although Jing Yuanyuan soon knew that the protagonist was not in his own class (laugh, General Shence, go to work!) I'll quote an original text, which can be said to be the protagonist's PV. Due to the word limit, it has been slightly shortened. For more details, please go to Chapter 73: General Tianshu has arrived, and the chess game is not even half over. The winner has been decided. "Dear readers, today we are not going to talk about General Jing Yuan's skillful combos, nor are we going to talk about General Fei Xiao's single-handed breakthrough of the formation. The world only knows that God's will is hard to violate, but they don't know that God's unexpected surprises still have people's hearts. Today we will tell a story about a young hero who played chess with the sky and defeated half of the gods." "This young man has been smart since he was a child. However, his legs are disabled. Everyone in the world knows that this child has a difficult life, but they don't know that the way of heaven is lacking and the human heart makes up for it. The body can't walk, but the mind can travel thousands of miles. This young man uses his wheelchair as a horse and his broken body as a boat to travel around the world. With the heart of nine deaths and no regrets, he has given the word 'justice' to his hunting patrol!" "Since then, the boy has played chess with the sky." The storyteller's tone became distant. "When a child falls, it is because of the youthful spirit and desire to compete with God." "When the two sons fall, they bring warmth and comfort to all the people. I am willing to carry the mountains and rivers with my body." "When the third son falls, the fire will be passed down from generation to generation. Even if he jumps to death, his will will never die." "The fourth son, the fifth son, the sixth son, one son after another, every son is this young man's life, every son is this young man's heart!" The storyteller's voice suddenly became deeper. "Heaven has its rules, and everyone has his or her destiny. The young man played chess with the sky, and the sky gave him nine sons." The picture suddenly became clear. The white-haired young man was sitting in a wheelchair. His long fingers were holding a chess piece firmly, hanging in the air. On the chessboard, the situation has reached the most critical moment. The figures on the opposite side keep alternating, and with each alternation, the chess game changes. But no matter how it changed, the boy's chess pieces were always firmly nailed to the chessboard, and none of them were captured by the opponent. The storyteller's voice echoed. "At the middle of the game, the sky dropped the last piece. The whole game was alive, but one corner was left, which was the life of the young man." But the white-haired young man smiled. He pushed the chess piece in his hand forward, and the chess game changed instantly. "General." The moment the chess pieces fell onto the board, a majestic figure slowly emerged behind him. He just held a long bow with the string fully drawn. On the bow string, a light arrow condensed and formed, the light was dazzling, as if it was going to illuminate the entire universe. The light arrow shot towards the constantly alternating figure on the opposite side of the chessboard. The scene is frozen here. The storyteller's voice sounded for the last time. "The hatred has no boundaries, the conquests have no borders, the star sea is hunted, the righteousness eliminates evil obstacles, the arrow is on the string, and the power is everywhere!" "General Tianshu has arrived. The chess game is not even half over, and the winner has been decided."

At present, it seems that it is a very good Bengtie fanfic. There is no trace of AI writing, and there is no common characteristics of soul tattoos and regular fanfics. It uses "people" as the main theme of the article to save Beloberg. The writing style is sincere and outstanding when describing the big scenes. Unfortunately, the daily life is a bit watered down. Everyone basically wants to With the savior as the main content, I personally feel that it is a bit slow to get along with each other in reality. In short, this is a book that can basically refresh readers of Bengtie. No flaws are left under the excellent writing. I hope the author can make the plot more compact and capable. I am very optimistic that this book will become my fine food. Long live the people.

Lao Da, this Bengtie novel is the most touching one I have ever read. Hello to the protagonist, hello to everyone, and hello to the Star God! I really like this book, it really made me cry! ! So pretty! !

It's very beautiful, very interesting. It's so beautiful. I want it. I want to update it quickly.

The title format is very novel and it's a very interesting novel. It's a pity that no one has read it.

The novel is really good. Damn it, it turned me on. Speaking of which, so much has changed in the past few years. An era of struggle has arrived. But now our next generation and this generation are not ready. . .

It's so beautiful. I don't know how other people feel about it. I feel quite happy myself, but it's really uncomfortable as school starts tomorrow [crying] Personally, I still hope that the other side can have more, so that it looks good when I come back from the holiday. Can I consider six updates a day? [Laughter]

The plot of "Give a Heart" is an interpretation of Lao Mi's plot, and there are some additional expansions of "Giving Two Hearts", and the protagonist is shaped by "One Heart". As for the author's writing style... I can't say, I skipped reading, but the author likes to write "the apple muscles twitch up and down" and "a picture of me thinking seriously" starting from Chapter 439. You can write it, but don't write it so frequently, and if you write it at the end of the first chapter and the beginning of the second chapter, it will make people feel bad. However, Lao Mi's analysis of some settings and plots is very good, and he also adds his own opinions and insights. I think this is very good. There are some points that I didn't think of myself.

The author pays great attention to the original work. It is more comfortable to watch. It is better than what I have seen before when an ordinary person can compete with Kafka 50-50, who has not paid any attention to the original setting.

The protagonist is in a wheelchair! ! ! It's really a wheelchair

It's pretty fun to read so far, but I just wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist. My suggestion is that this kind of novel is best without a female protagonist☺️

So far it's pretty good, nothing particularly bad. Starting to feel humorous

It's a very good book, it has that feeling [Like]

It's beautiful, five stars is the author's reward for updating five times a day [laughing]

It's good to watch, but at a certain stage you will feel powerless and don't want to watch anymore. After you get through this, you can continue to watch with interest...

It's very touching. Now I see the people of Belloberg dying towards death. Everyone has faith. It is a detached perspective but does not deviate from the people's practical line to save themselves and the world. I personally think it is the best line to save one's own will other than the Star Railway version.

Who is the heroine, Yanqing? [Eating Melon]

Why is the score so low?