After Being Abandoned by the Hero, I Decided to Work for the Devil

This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's Qtu with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on! . ~Meow

The writing is very good and belongs to the industrial revival genre. I always feel that the author does not look like a novice. There may be some flaws, but there is no denying that this is a good product, especially the tomatoes. It is highly recommended. Other people's comments are secondary. You can read it and try it yourself. [Like][Like][Like]

It is a good farming article among tomatoes, and some minor poisonous points are acceptable. Use less AI expansion so that the subsequent plot can develop smoothly. Don't force some stuck points. Just keep the plot straight. 72-83 The protagonist is offline for ten chapters, and most of the subsequent plot is about the fox businessman. If the author wanted to write a group portrait, I would have run away without saying anything. I only read it for the protagonist's development of farming and the plot of the devil. If the author doesn't want to write a plot like the group portrait, it's not as good as the entire extra chapter. Now the main text is only about 90 chapters, and the fox man's plot accounts for at least 30% of the whole content. If he writes like this later, he might as well make this fox man the protagonist. Let's raise books first No, after watching the fox-man plot, I have no motivation to watch the rest of the plot. I am afraid that this is all the stuff and the brothers will run away.

It is a very heart-warming book. The author has written a different world of demons. The protagonist and the demons work together step by step. The three chapters of Qingming Festival delicately depict the withered demon lord. The combination with the real festival makes it more three-dimensional and makes people look forward to the stories of other demon lords. What is surprising is that the author did not deliberately vilify the brave man, but deliberately wrote about his growth process, and wrote about his step-by-step growth from arrogance and rudeness to a real warrior. From this, it seems that the author must also be a very good and gentle person in the real world.

Classic themes, novel writing methods, well, the number of words is a bit short [laughing and crying]

This is the best otherworld farming series I have read so far. The author is very good at grasping the group portraits. The supporting characters such as the merchant swordsman are very well portrayed, and the relationship with the protagonist is excellent. It is a kind of alliance of interests, knowing people and making good use of them, and a sense of mission towards the same goal. You can feel that everyone is working towards a better future. To move forward together, the general group portrait will more or less reduce the length of the protagonist's plot, but when writing the plot for other supporting characters, the shadow of the protagonist can be seen everywhere. What's more important is that although the protagonist is the core, the others are not giant babies, but will follow the blueprint to create the cornerstone after the protagonist has established the framework.

The plot is very good (=゜ω゜)ノThere are no brainless villains, and each character has a distinct personality. Everyone in the demon clan is very tolerant of the protagonist, the swordsman is also a gentle person, the elf queen is willing to make an exception to bless humans for the sake of the little elf girl, and the protagonist is barely a person.

A book worthy of five stars. It's been a long time since I've seen in a book the survival of a race and the personal brilliance of the race among the ethnic groups who are shouldering the burden for the development of the race. The writing is great, there is no villain, there are just issues of stance, and the protagonist is also great. Come on, author, well done.

At first, I thought it was an ordinary brave demon king routine, but I didn't expect that the protagonist Renn would take an unusual path. He has no magic power but relies on wisdom and strategy to make a comeback. It's really cool! To fight a war is to fight logistics, economy, and information gap - this line is simply magical. Watching the hero abandon the protagonist arrogantly, and finally being crushed by the protagonist with his IQ, that kind of reversal is so depressing. Moreover, the setting of the protagonist going to work in the Demon King's City is also very innovative. It is not just about fighting and killing, but more about economic warfare and strategic games. It is very enjoyable to read. Currently updated to chapter 78, the continuous updates are very stable, the writing is smooth, and the rhythm is tight. I can't stop following it! Friends who like anti-routine, battle of wits, and western fantasy themes should not miss it. Five-star praise, author, cheers! 🔥🔥🔥

The writing is very good. If you just read the introduction, your first impression is that this book is another kind of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. But in fact, it is not as the introduction says. The devil looks down on the protagonist, but takes it very seriously. Moreover, the author's writing style is also good, and the character development is also very clear.

It is now 4.46 In the morning. I spent about 3 hours catching up on the latest chapter. This is really an unconventional, logical and philosophical farming novel. Although there are indeed traces of AI, the author's ideas and the general plot are complete, and the ratio of details and double lines has also been allocated. I have read more than 4,000 hours of reading for both large and small readers. I think this is an excellent novel. Of course (currently I have seen the Little Queen of Education here), some "accidents" or even knives can be added to the plot in the future, which will bring this book to a higher level [Top post] [Please update] The setting of the protagonist at the beginning is a bit strange. I wonder if it will be modified later.

Give it full stars, it's a very good group portrait. I found another good book while flipping through it, and I stayed up late again today [laughing awkwardly] Each one is well written, flesh and blood, and the growth is also well written. However, there are some flaws and repetitions in some places. This is not a cheating or revenge story in the traditional sense. It is a group portrait story focusing on development. If you want to read a fun story or a quick revenge story, try not to read it, because this is a group portrait type and the pace is slow. Basically everything has a process of realization, starting from nothing. You only need to read half of the author's introduction. It is easy to misunderstand the following half and think it is a cheating article. [Laughing and crying]

Not bad, a story about the reversal of good from evil [laughing] I love deleting comments so much, but it's not an illegal comment. Goodbye [smile]

The AI ​​is quite heavy, but the creativity is not bad, and it is more readable than other AI writing.

The story is okay, the characters are very reasonable, and the specific plot is difficult to reveal, but it is definitely no problem to attract people. The shortcomings that appear now are (minor spoilers): some of the plots around the railway construction in the later chapters are too monotonous. Although I can see some of the author's ingenuity, I am still very discouraged. It is recommended to read the summary. The current climax is still focused on the second meeting between the brave and the sage. This section is very well written. The author's writing style is still a bit green, but I can intuitively feel some progress. It's good to continue writing. I should always support you.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. Some places are too Riddler, and the plot connection is not natural. Then let's talk about the advantages. The concept is very good. The multi-perspective narrative allowed me to see various flesh-and-blood characters. As the plot develops, I also have different perceptions of various characters. This is a story about growth and adventure, but the protagonist of the story is not just Wren. Wren It is a button that connects the protagonists of this story together. Humans and gods, royal power and divine power, nobles and common people, and the barriers and tolerance between races. This is a big world view, but the author is able to sort out the story in an orderly manner to a large extent. I prefer to view this world view as a group portrait like Zhenyao Pass rather than as farming.

The content is very novel. The protagonist, as a time traveler, wants to use his own advantages to spread machinery and other technologies, but he is expelled by the church in a very realistic way. He lives a difficult life in the stable and is disappointed with the church. When the brave team came to persuade me to refuse, I understood this choice very naturally. And the description of the brave is not a static and brainless character, but has improved through the winter experience (of course there is still a lot of room for improvement) There is no fixed perspective in the description of events. What I have a very clear impression at the moment is that the plot at the end of the previous chapter was described in the way that the demon lord who collected intelligence read the letter. There was no very detailed description, but the details were appropriate and interesting. [If abbreviated under the circumstances at that time, it would not be able to support the content, and this writing method was used to better transition to another scene] Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the author's next creation [Blowing Kisses]

Highly recommended if you like to see the type of farming development. The development of the plot is reasonable and well-founded, and the pace is a bit jumpy but still one step at a time. The author has an in-depth understanding of the world, which is reflected in the written words, which makes it very comfortable to read. The writing has foreshadowing, explosions, and plot descriptions that make people cry. It's very good. All in all, I highly recommend you read it!

Five stars! Absolute praise. The author's group portraits are really great. All the characters have their own writing style and personality characteristics. With more than two hundred chapters, I have already learned about many characters with distinctive personalities. I think the emotions between the characters are also very delicately portrayed, such as: The acquaintance of the unappreciated Renn and the Demon King, the development of the Demon World, and the people no longer have no food to eat. The development of the other world is also the attractive part of this book; Nick and Lane are a copy of a pair of underappreciated talents, and the character of Nick is very vivid and ambitious. He can suppress himself and seize the opportunity to develop when the time is right. He is full of ambition and ability. He has been using his talents for the development of the devil world for his sister; The brave Gareth and the brave team are also the interpretation of growth in this book. From the previous unruly arrogance and prejudice to the current self-recognition, kindness, and compassion for the people, in order to save the refugee children and drawing the sword against the church messenger, they have become true braves (it has to be said that the goddess does have her say in choosing people). The only shortcoming of this book is that there are too few of them so far. I hope the author will work hard orz

So far, the description of the group portraits is very delicate, and the villains are not intentionally made fun of. The author's description of the battlefield is very measured. It is very novel for the Western fantasy theme. Although it is a bit dull in the early stage, it can still be read. Overall, it is good.

I have probably read more than 200 pictures. Generally speaking, there are many advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are 1. The worldview is well constructed, with different races, cultures, geographies, and histories. It is relatively rich. However, there are some minor shortcomings. The descriptions of most races are only mentioned when they are useful, and there are only a few major large maps that go back and forth. Maybe you can try branching plots to slow down the too fast pace of the main line. 2. It has educational significance, which is a very important core point in this novel. The hero who is constantly growing, the protagonist who is thoughtful, and the many supporting characters and NPCs who work hard to survive are all described with clever ideas. 3. The characterization is very good, not to mention top-notch, but it can be seen that there is a personal soul and self-character, but the main character is too repetitive, but it is not so obvious. For example, when comparing the characters of orcs and dwarves, they have more than half the same characteristics. If you want to create some special characters, you can portray them from more things and angles. 4. There are some shortcomings. There are too detailed descriptions of some political contents in the book, such as taxation and policy systems. Instead, it gives a sense of déjà vu rather than reading a novel. It is a bit too numerical. Of course, it is deliberately reduced later. 5. You don't need to be too anxious about promoting the plot. Setting up too much suspense and too many pitfalls will make the plot a bit leaky and confusing. The novel is a story, and you may be able to write stories that follow the main line to fill in the gaps and better understand the overall story. 6. I hope there will be a standard description of the combat power system, but after all, it is a farming system. Maybe other systems can be improved. The above are all personal opinions, but they are my most authentic post-viewing experience I hope the author can see my suggestions and comments I hope you will write better stories

It's a fairy tale, the writing is exquisite, and every character is full of emotions. The logic is clear and breaks through the inertia of thinking that exists in most farming articles. It's a very good-looking work, but after reading so many passages that describe the hearts and delicate emotions of each character, I deeply doubt whether the author will make a big move later.

The writing feels good, there are no major problems, and there are few poisonous points. I feel that the hero can be whitewashed before the ending, for example, let him truly realize some truths, and then point the sword at this corrupt dynasty, and then HE can be done, the dynasty is destroyed, the ending is peaceful, and all races are peaceful and stable. Now Chapter 137, these chapters describe the brave man well. Later, you can add some scenes of buying a wandering knight, such as joining a caravan or something. When you get to Hearth, you can ask the caravan to give some help to the brave team. Also, no one in the Brave Team is confused about the bugs? The author must see it. Can you please write it down?

Kudos to the author, the quality is pretty good and the subject matter is also very good. But there are a few points that could be improved. The first point is the change in the male protagonist's character before and after. The bad character at the beginning suddenly turned into a working man. Then the demon suddenly trusted the male protagonist. Another thing is that this industrialization process is a bit too fast, and it feels like there is no process. For this industrialization, you can refer to Gou Cangyunbai's book. There is also the emotional line, which feels a bit fast. It seems that a lot of processes are omitted, and the favorability of the protagonist is directly increased.

The writing is really good, I expect the rating to be around 8.5 To 9.5. The group portrait writing has a better portrayal of both enemies and allies, especially the brave ones. There is a big difference between the early stage and now. But there are two disadvantages. First, the hero at the beginning was a bit... Although it can be seen later that the intention is to create a sharp contrast, it is a bit too discouraging, and some readers may not read further. The second point is a little too good, that is, whatever technology the protagonist wants to develop, he has the materials, and it develops too fast. Although it is true that the Demon Realm would not be able to compete with the Empire otherwise, it is a bit false and does not seem reasonable.

I have read Chapter 166 so far, and the author's writing style is quite to my liking. But starting from the accounting plot, the AI ​​flavor is a bit too strong. It's not necessary to know whether this is AI, nor does it mean that AI was definitely not used before. But starting from those two chapters, between the descriptions, the characters lost their aura, and they just acted and spoke strictly according to their own personality labels. The perception dropped sharply, and there were also a lot less comments visible to the naked eye, because there were basically no highlights. Looking forward to improvement, the setting of this book is still good, and I really hope that the story can come alive again until the end.

How can I put it this way? It's very good. I also read other comments and I don't know why they say AI flavor. To be honest, I can't feel it. What impressed me the most is that many of the supporting characters in it also have their own personalities. I thought at first that it would be a slap in the face of the hero and the goddess in the face, a useless counterattack novel. But after reading more than 200 chapters, which is the latest, I saw the hero grow from an unreasonable aristocrat to a real brave man who thinks about the people. I saw the protagonist working hard to make the demon world more prosperous. The demon world has slowly moved closer to the modern system from the primitive society at the beginning. The most used thing is probably the white description. There are no gorgeous descriptions or exaggerated descriptions, but it is straight to the heart. There are very few books that I am willing to pursue and give as gifts. I hope the author can continue writing. Come on. I feel like some of the comments are purely meant to belittle others. There are more than a hundred pictures and branch lines, which makes people feel that it is not very interesting and even makes it difficult to read. However, after reading that part, it is quite interesting to look back and connect them in series.

I came across this on the recommendation list on the Tomato homepage today. There has been a shortage of books recently. There are no good books and I don't know what to read. I always look for books in the recommendations and read the introduction of the book. If you are interested, read it. If you are not interested, just read the next one. To be honest, I was attracted by the white-haired and red-eyed Loli Demon King in the introduction, but I was also attracted when I started watching it. I watched it for 7 hours in one breath, and I also finished reading all the chapters that have been updated to today. Regarding the four main characters currently portrayed, Ren, Brave, Nick, and Swordsman, I think the portrayal of these four characters is very profound. Everyone has their own responsibilities and responsibilities for their actions. You can also feel their character characteristics when reading the book. I personally like this narrative style very much. Regardless of whether he can reach the end of the journey, I am already on the road. I hope the author will not stop updating, and I also hope to see Leo and the Demon King come together.

This one gives me a different feeling. This is not a cool article like Long Aotian's. It can really be read as a group portrait. It also has a warm and daily life that makes people feel warm. But why is the rating so low?

So far, it's a pretty good book. The elements are all old, Brave Demon King, and Farming Style, but the integration is very new. Except for some of the sensational parts in the early stage that were too dramatic, everything else was okay. The strength of the writing gradually improved, and everyone was changing, and the most important thing was perseverance, perseverance to one's heart. Change is more like a child growing up than a villain changing his mind. This is very good. Bonus points, this kind of change is not called whitewashing, it is a deeper interpretation of a person, the determination of "I wake up, I know my mistakes, but I can't change and I don't want to change. Someone must do this kind of thing" is much nobler than most whitewashing. There are shortcomings, including but not limited to the plot being too deliberate and the writing being too plain, but overall it still has many advantages. Since it is still being serialized, I give it four to five stars.