HP: Atypical Dursley

Super pretty! I've read enough fanfics praising Snape's purge of the White Snake Yard, but this one has no such problem at all and fits the original work very well. Harry is not an idiot and Snape is not a arrogant, tolerant and honest person. Harry's poisonous tongue and Snape's double standards are both real. I originally thought the heroine was more quiet, but she is actually very lively and even a bit aggressive. She gets along with the original characters very naturally and is not artificial at all. (Speaking of which, my OC is also Harry's cousin. I was worried about the setting, but I feel that the author handles the plot much better than me.) She handles the conflict between the Dursleys and Harry very well. She loves her family very much and helps Harry as much as possible.

It's so well written... As an overseas student, I especially resist seeing scenes where flower growers are repeatedly depicted in fan fiction to shock foreigners because it's too embarrassing [crying] [face covering] (only personal experience), but the author portrays "the heroine is Chinese" in the most natural way, which also reflects her unique character. She is very warm and stable at the core.

The teacher's writing is very cute! I finally came across a few articles that don't praise Snake Yard. Many articles have to be vague and whitewashed even if they don't praise Snake Yard. I also read the teacher's character analysis in some chapters, and I can see that there are serious analyzes from the original work and character biographies.

I don't mean to say that the negative review is wrong, I just want to summarize it for new readers. The main reasons for the current two- and three-star ratings are as follows: the pace is slow, the heroine is too perfect, and she is too young. Out of curiosity, I went in and took a look, and found that their standards were really high, and there were only a handful of books that I could read. I felt a little sorry for those authors. It's up to you to judge whether these evaluations have any reference value. I can't judge anyway. Maybe it's because I've never eaten dragon meat, and I don't know what kind of HP fan fiction can be written, but for an ordinary reader like me, the plot, details, and characters of this book are already very sophisticated. Settings that are relatively common in fan fiction, such as "Pure-blooded Noble Malfoy", "Elegant and Noble Slytherin", and "Snape the Cellar Snake King", may not appear in this book. If you prefer this style, you may need to adjust your expectations first. To be honest, the lightning protection in the first chapter has been done quite clearly. This book is indeed not a refreshing one. It spends a lot of space on the characters' psychology, perspective and relationship changes. If you like the rhythm of "three chapters of slap in the face and five chapters of counterattack", you may not find it suitable. Malfoy's unique unbeatable energy in the original work has been restored to the point, as if he came directly from the book. I have read some CP stories about Muggle-born heroines and Malfoy before. The more common ones are to downplay the bloodline discrimination as much as possible, or to put it down lightly. But this book does not do this, but carefully retains this point. So when you watch them break up, you will really feel both painful and happy😋. Regarding the evaluation of "young writing style", everyone may have different standards. I read some European and American children's literature when I was a child, but I think it is quite a sign of skill that the author can retain the style of children's literature in the previous works when writing HP fan fiction. This way of writing is actually difficult to grasp, and it is a pity to call it "young". Of course, if you are not good at it, you may not feel it. Daisy is indeed a very good little girl, but her kindness is not fake, but very human. It reminds me of the kind of good friends I met when I was in school. Maybe readers who like good-guy protagonists will resonate more with her. I personally like this kind of heroine. I don't understand why a "perfect good guy" can become a highlight. Maybe it's because my taste is more traditional. By the way, this book is quite female-friendly. In addition to the original characters, most of the self-created supporting characters are women with positive images. I have read another HP heartthrob fanfic before, which used the word "cn show" for Qiu Zhang's Quidditch debut, which left me speechless😅. In contrast, this book has no similar problems at all. If you care about female friendliness, you can read it with confidence. I also missed one thing. I even opened a special chapter with some jokes. I will also interact and answer questions in the comment area from time to time. There will also be analysis about the original work every few chapters, so there is basically no need to worry about OOC. That's it for the moment. In short, if you like the original work, this book is very, very suitable for you🥰. If I have to talk about shortcomings, it is probably that the update is relatively slow. However, I can understand that slow work leads to careful work, and since I am not in good health and have work to do, it is indeed a bit hard to catch up. 😭

The writing is very good, and it can be seen that the author is very close to the original work. With the author's supplements, I learned more about the original work. Because I only watched the movie version. Some details are actually understood from the common settings of fan fiction. What the heroine does is normal. She will help Harry live a better life with the Dursleys within reasonable limits. It is simply a ray of warmth in winter. It was a natural progression for Harry to like the heroine. And the heroine will not ignore the feelings of her relatives because she helps Harry, because her relatives also love her, but no one is perfect. Really well written. Not OOC at all. Tasty. I get along well with Gemini. [Full]

It's good-looking, and the introduction is very attractive to me. Muggles have no obligation to tolerate pure-bloodism. The part where the heroine was worried about traveling through time in a fan novel was so funny that she shot a lot of them [laughing and crying] The heroine helped Harry pass the North Point Grammar School and it really warmed my heart. Harry's value is not only in the wizarding world, he deserves a bright future no matter where he is. But maybe because I don't like Draco personally, he's so arrogant and weird, the heroine always feels like she's coaxing a child when she's with Draco, and she's so tired that she can't move.

A heroine like an angel, a story like a fairy tale. Textual research enthusiasts are invited to join! Lovers of excellent writing are invited to join! The proportion of daily stories, heart-warming stories, delicate emotions, and stories about people getting along with each other is much higher than the main plot of the original work. In fact, I usually don't review books so early. I usually like to write book reviews when the novel has reached about 200 chapters, so that I can write more comprehensively. However, the author seems to want to be encouraged, and Daisy Little Angel is really, really good, so I am willing to write it earlier. The author is a very rigorous textual researcher. He has been digging out various details of the original work to conduct an objective analysis of each character, in order to ensure that all characters are not OOC. It is really very friendly to serious readers. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. The whole article has a very gentle fairy tale style, like the prose he loved to write when he was a student. It has a lot of detailed descriptions and emotional portrayals, which is very suitable for reading sentence by sentence. The little angel Daisy is my favorite among the Dursley stories I have read. Just as written in the previous chapters, Daisy should be a princess who escaped from the fairy tale world. She is gentle, kind, beautiful, and occasionally playful and stubborn. It is really rare to see such angelic heroines nowadays. Except for the part with Draco that I didn't particularly like, all the other behaviors and character traits can be said to be perfect. Really, only in novels can such a perfect girl appear. Daisy is like a princess. She always sees everyone's thoughts so delicately, loves her family and friends, but never forgets herself. She learns her favorite musical instruments and sings her own songs. She doesn't care about the wizarding world's discrimination against Muggles. She wears her favorite dresses and dances her own ballet. She even takes Hogwarts courses during school and studies Muggle courses on her own during holidays because she wants to go to a Muggle university after graduation. She is a free, beautiful, loving soul. This article is written in the first person. It is also the first time I have read the first person, but it is not surprising, and the author often switches perspectives. It will not only be the first person of Daisy, but also the perspectives of other characters. Daisy herself has a gentle character, so in the clips from Daisy's perspective, the article will appear gentle and delicate. When the perspective is switched to Harry, the article becomes a pure humorous comment, which is particularly interesting. Switching to other people's perspectives will also become lively. But don't worry about whether Daisy has no other characteristics besides gentleness. I need to explain here, because I read a lot of Japanese comics, so when I say the word "gentleness", it may be closer to the meaning of "Asashi" in Japanese. It means that Daisy is very attentive to other people's emotions and very kind. This does not mean that she is a virtuous girl without edges. Daisy got into several fights in the text and was caught violating school rules several times. However, she has a very gentle background, is gentle to her friends, is very good at life, and has a sense of delicacy like a bodhi leaf, so I think she is "gentle". This kind of naughty and stubborn tenderness is common in various princess fairy tales, so I say Daisy is a "princess". As for other characters, the author's research and polishing of the original work are very effective. Every character is not OOC. Especially, I like Harry very much. I give Harry a vote here. (Ps. Said is also good)

Looking at it now, this can be said to be the most comfortable fanfic I have read in recent years. The cold and humorous writing style is very original, and the author's creation of the original heroine is also very interesting. I was originally not interested in this kind of novel with a heart-throb theme, but this one is really very good, and I couldn't help but want to read it. I kept trying to figure it out while I was reading. The author's words are great, and he also has his own thoughts on the original work. It is a very good article! It's just that it's very painful to follow the series. . I want to see the end as soon as I open my eyes😌 It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the serial 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️ It's so painful to follow the series 😣😣😣 but it's good to watch ☺️☺️☺️

It's very beautiful, the writing style is just like the original work, and it will leave you silent for a while. None of the characters are OOC. The author is very particular and has studied the original works carefully. He also has a certain awareness and can write words such as " jealous" and "mom and dad". I see that there is only one place where the widowed variant "I'm going" has appeared. The other places use words very comfortably [Adoration] Who would have thought that this is the author's first time writing a novel. The writing and plot are very beautiful. The future is promising, but don't stop updating [Adoration] [Adour] [Adoration]

I like this book so much... Every character is written vividly... I especially like Harry. The child has had such a hard time, and I really hope that he can really be loved, and the character is well handled! ! The longing in the heart of a child who lacks love, the subtle inferiority complex, and those sour feelings are written in a particularly vivid way and are incomparably delicious. I especially like the kind of pure emotion where I can't distinguish between family affection and love, but just hope to be with this person forever... Moreover, the heroine's character is also my favorite among the many novels I have read. She is kind but principled, capable of action, and warm to watch... The recent Gemini line has also exploded in deliciousness and romance! !

Mary Suven, but the protagonist's personal charm is really strong, she looks very sour and refreshing, and she doesn't abuse the heroine. The book is very good at detail description and psychological description, and the plot does not completely follow the original work. The heroine has her own plot, and the character is neither negative nor whitewashed. All in all, it is delicious!

The author is really very attentive and tries his best to create a balance between the creation and the original work in shaping each character. Our baby Daisy has the three-dimensional qualities that match the protagonist's status and character, and she also has the behavior and thinking of a young human being. Growing up, she had been able to understand the huge difference between Petunia being her mother and Harry's aunt, and she did not stand still just because she was wearing a book, and she did not become a suspended and critical passerby. The facts are there, but Daisy is in it. She maintains the judge's rationality, but does not issue a summons like a court. She is not arrogant. Be it mother or cousin, she does not ignore anyone's existence. Her efforts and sincerity are the gifts she gives to Harry as a visitor from outside the world in this world where the overall situation cannot be changed. Moreover, the characters of the Dursleys are not rigid villain puppets. They are all alive with care, acrimony or growth. The author Baobao creates that everyone values ​​the connection between psychological activities and behavioral activities. Our baby Daisy can pick it up and put it down. As a romance novel, it is a story that is destined to be different from Draco. There is no lengthy lamentation, dissatisfaction, resentment, or sadness like that garbage bag that is reluctant to run away in the river and is entangled with water plants. It just proceeds so naturally, with a drop of tear evaporating in the eye socket. With great strength, she fights and fights. Who doesn't like to praise me when I see it?

It's not bad. I personally don't really like some of the plots, such as Malfoy's affection for the heroine. (It's not that the writing is bad, it's just that I don't like this style of love. Especially, I feel that the heroine is completely backward compatible...) The heroine can be portrayed with care, gentleness and kindness, and she starts to feel more... Like Hufflepuff, I feel more and more like Gryffindor in the future, but maybe it's because the characters in the original book are particularly well-written and delicate. In comparison, I still occasionally feel that the heroine's core is missing, not serving the original work's own pursuits, and that she doesn't care about herself too much?

It's really well written🥺 It's the closest to the original novel in HP I've read recently, it's very great... I haven't seen such a right Harry in a fanfic for a long time, I'm so moved that I want to cry, it's such a pure and delicious poisonous tongue, I'm eating it The setting of Daisy is actually very interesting. On the one hand, Daisy has lived to be 15 years old in her last life. In addition, in this life, she actually has a tolerant mentality towards the people around her, which makes her behave like an elder sister (). But it is also because she only lived 15 years old in her previous life, so in fact, she is still a little girl who will reveal her fresh moments after coming to Hogwarts, which is very charming... The portrayal of Slytherin and Draco Snape is also very normal. God knows how touching it is... Anyway, I am very, very lucky to read this book.

It's very interesting. This is not the first time I read such a mediocre article. This novel is not like other novels. It strictly follows the plot, mainly to highlight the protagonist's heart-throb kind. Although it is very enjoyable, just read it without thinking, but I still like this novel. This novel is relatively slow-paced and has the feeling of a steady stream. It can be seen that the author is very careful. He has been following the original work. It is not like a movie. Every few chapters there will be a description of the protagonist's heart or the psychology of other people. It is very careful. The logic of this novel is also very online. Even if the plot changes, it is not abrupt at all. There are few novels in Tomato that can make me calm down and read again. It is like I am reading a physical book. The immersion is not like the feeling that other novels give me. The previous novels gave me a very anxious feeling. It's not that I'm anxious to see them slap in the face, or that I'm anxious to see the protagonist attack those characters. I think it's a kind of fast food. I can't explain what it feels like. Do you understand? Well, highly recommended. Very nice. I hope the author will not give up

It's so good-looking, it's so good-looking. I'm super satisfied with the character design. I've always wanted to find a little Ha who is dark, sensitive, occasionally venomous, but also kind-hearted and brave. It's so perfect. The baby heroine is also so charming. This is the heartthrob! ! ! I like! ! ! Ah ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. Why did you get to the first Philosopher's Stone? Teacher, I beg you, you must keep reading! ! ! I am willing to give you all the little money I earn from reading novels on Tomato! ! ! Ced and Draco love it too! ! ! Delicious! ! !

I haven't commented in a long time until I saw that such a great book has not been discovered yet! A very well written book! The language is natural and humorous, and the character setting is also very relevant. It just magnifies the "damp" side of Harry when he was a child (not the vulgar kind of dampness, the author handles it very well!). My favorite part of the fandom is "Young Ha's Companion". I especially like the interaction between the heroine and little Harry. I personally like it. If you don't like Xiao Ha's a little dark side, pay attention to lightning protection. The language has a little bit of the original feel, which is enough to make this book stand out! Maybe I shouldn't say a little hahahahaha because it's really, really good-looking, but the fanfic and heartthrob settings prevent me from saying it's very similar to the original work hahahahaha The Dursleys are indeed very complex in their portrayal. They are not whitewashed or beautified, but they do not skimp on the maternal love and fatherly love for their children. Their pursuit of face will implicitly force the heroine to work hard to make money. If you see too much of the high demands on the heroine, it seems that they will ignore their love for the heroine, but in fact it is not the case. The Dursleys actually still love the heroine very much (dally is still kissing her baby). In this book, I saw that Petunia was moved by the heroine's initiative not to go to Hogwarts. I can really understand Petunia's complicated psychology. Wuwuwu. In the end, she chose to let her daughter go to see the magical world for her. Wuwuwu. The writing style is really delicate, the psychological description is very detailed, and the psychological grasp of the characters is very good. All in all, it's very, very good! I have five chapters left and I can't bear to read them. I beg for more updates. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Super pretty! It is a very original novel about a heroine. The heroine has a very good personality and is very intelligent. She is simply a naturally kind-hearted version of Slytherin (even though she went to Gryffindor) The writing and plot are very good, the wording is friendly, and the stance is very neutral and kind (?). It never favors any character or faction. I like the description of the Dursleys in the article, it's almost like the original (surprise)

The description before entering school is particularly delicious. It's rare to see the Dursleys written so interestingly. I feel that the author is particularly able to grasp the psychology of the characters. Who wouldn't like such a charming sister/sister/daughter? The plot of the heartthrob who is about to enter school is not broken either, and Brother Drag is written with a lot of emphasis on innocence and arrogance. But the most delicious thing is Xiaoha, the poisonous tongued ghost Xiaoha is simply a delicacy.

Give five stars to encourage new authors. The writing style is quite funny and the writing style is pretty good. The male protagonist currently appearing is Harry, and his psychological activities are quite similar to those in the original work. In the latest chapter, Draco appears. The author said that if it is written according to the original work, then there is a high probability that the opposite sex hates the enemy. If it is well written, it should be quite interesting. I look forward to it. Please don't stop [full] To add, maybe it's because of the first person, Daisy's character is very lively, and she has a kid-friendly sisterly feeling towards Harry.

It's so good. How many JK Rowlings did the author eat? The original work is very strong. Both the cold humorous metaphors and the character's personality are very consistent with the original work. The heroine's baby is also super charming.

At first I was attracted to the fact that the heroine is the daughter of the Dursley family. I personally think this book is very good! ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧ The Dursleys are not one-sidedly portrayed as vicious relatives (well, not much better for Harry) but they have more flesh and blood. They adhere to the old-fashioned and exclusive nature, dote on their daughter and son, and viciously abuse Harry. For Harry, it feels good to have such a sister, so that his childhood is no longer completely filled with darkness and roars (because Harry's childhood in the original book is tragic, ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ㅂᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀) As a soul who has traveled through time, the heroine has her own advantages and disadvantages. She's kind, brave, and empathetic, not cold-blooded (feels like Lily, to be honest) There are many, many reasons why I like this book. It is like a leisurely and warm afternoon, the mellow sunshine shining on the floral plaid cloth, comfortable and beautiful.

350,000 Words are being serialized. I feel that the author is the kind of person who has to repeatedly question whether he is OOC every time he writes a plot point, which is very nice. What can I say, I really like Harry in the book, the way the protagonist and Harry get along, and a lot of non-ooc characters. The disadvantage is that the update is slow. You can know the update time by opening the directory.

Very original flavor. The characterization of Daisy is also very delicate. The author carefully studied the original work. Every character is very vivid. Highly recommended. 👍👍👍The emotional line is also particularly down to earth. The only drawback is that it is still being serialized.

Good looking Daisy is really a very good baby. This article is exactly what the author said. Many parts need to be carefully reviewed. The main line is the original line and nothing else is added. The emotional line is very delicate. Daisy is a very awesome and considerate baby. She is very good at ballet, has good academic performance, and has certain physical attack abilities. She has a high sense of morality, so she loves her parents and feels sorry for Harry. She uses her own abilities to neutralize the relationship between the two. She feels a little powerless in the early stage. When she comes to the academy, she will be more self-conscious without restraints, because she is a middle school student, with an upright mind and full of risk-taking ability. She is very bold and unscrupulous, and her brain works very fast. She will show off her childishness when her family is not around, so she does not have to worry about the childishness judged by outsiders. For other characters, she is tolerant of children. Daisy is a heartthrob because Daisy is really gentle and easy to contact, and she is tolerant of Malfoy (although she is already sad about their relationship🥲). However, Harry still doesn't know that his home has been stolen (I am already looking forward to Harry's expression when he finds out) Very nice,

This fanfic is written closely to the original work. As the author's name suggests, the content is very rigorous and there are no particularly outrageous plots at all. The writing is also very good. The description of the environment is great. I can't forget the chapters where Daisy takes Draco on a night outing. It was particularly dreamy. It felt like I had really seen the quiet Hogwarts in the night, with the wind blowing by me and the moonlight shrouding my body. The writing style is a bit witty and humorous, and some of the metaphors are really unexpected and surprisingly appropriate. Emotions are delicate and gentle. Daisy is a kind person, which seems to be a rare trait, but I really like it. The heroine's help to Harry comes from her heart. The relationship between the two of them is very warm and loving. You will like this kind of light daily life very much. It is precisely because Daisy is a very good person that she has charm, which is not limited to her appearance, so she has touching feelings (Gemini is also a good match🥰). This article is like a fairy tale, and Daisy is both a princess and a knight, gentle and brave.

I have been looking forward to a fanfic with a Dursley family heroine for a long time! ! ! You must try this Harry line that has a little bit of puppy characteristics but is also sensitive and a little dark! ! It's great that cousins ​​can get married in the UK! The character image is really well grasped, neither licking the character nor whitewashing or blackmailing, and the introduction of the main characters is very natural, with the feeling that you should meet them at this time, and is truly integrated into the wonderful life of Hogwarts. This is something that many fan fictions cannot do in my eyes. I also like the character of Daisy, she is a kind and friendly person, I really like this kind of heroine. . . . And the teacher's writing is so good! If you are looking for a sense of atmosphere, love and ambiguity, you must come and taste it!

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that it will flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard well and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. Goddess update soon.

How shameless. No one is OOC, no whitewashing, no obvious factional tendencies (such as Slytherin fanatics, etc.), I respect the original work very much, and I don't write anything based on dreams. I personally don't like CP very much, everything else is very good, which does not affect my five-star praise. There are many beautiful descriptions of the protagonist throughout the text. The reader's acceptance of this depends on the author's writing style and plot direction. Most of the embarrassing descriptions would make my brain hurt when I read them. This book is okay, and the character of the protagonist makes me think it is quite worthwhile. She is worthy of such a description. It's not like showing off with rhetoric like a wife who frequently writes about a man's appearance.

It's so delicious, and I feel like everyone in this book has a strong sense of being alive. The heroine is very energetic, and everyone's characters are not broken. The night outing with Draco was so fun to watch. The heroine, Harry, and the Weasley twins are also delicious. Everyone has their own distinctive character, and after practicing Dudley, he becomes a human being. The author will also look at the story from different angles and different people. I long for this atmosphere of getting along between them. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. The description of some scenes, especially the description of the night scene, made me feel very comfortable. Some clips made me feel a bit immersive and shocking, which made me feel very comfortable. All in all, this is just a compliment. This book is really good. I recommend it. This is the first time I have written such a long review, I hope the rating will get higher and higher. I wish the author a lot of happiness! Yes, it's a mistake.