Aventurine's Journey Through Demon Slayer

There are too many places in Demon Slayer that are inconsistent with the original work, and there are even more unreasonable places. I have only seen 39 chapters, and overall it is very uncomfortable to read. Details are also very important, which affects the perception too much. If the details are too rough, it will make people unable to watch it, which will affect the popularity. But the characters are well written, not too OOC, and the interactions are very warm. The author is quite delicate in the emotional line, and the description of the battle is okay.

I think the rhythm is just right for me, the interaction between everyone is very warm, and the body feels warm. The combat aspect also gives me a good impression. The writing style is more delicate and it is a very good linkage article. Will more characters be added in the future? In fact, I have read a lot of crossover articles before, and many of them become very confusing after adding more characters. Most of the authors can't grasp the rhythm of group dramas. I feel that it's good for Sha Jin to travel alone. If you have difficulties, go back and ask your friends for some off-site assistance, otherwise a few random people will be smashed by the Ghost King with two punches. It is a pioneering journey that belongs to Sha Jin alone. He gets a change in another world and redeems others while also redeeming himself. It is such a romantic story. The current driving force is still looking for the broken cornerstone, and I am very much looking forward to some subsequent developments. I am just a little worried that the complete cornerstone will lead to a huge disparity in combat power between the two sides, and it will be awkward to watch the battle. However, I believe in the author's ability. After all, I can't write and can only read haha. Also, the cornerstones should be collected by rescuing some people who should not have died. However, we have collected almost half of the fragments as soon as we reach the Butterfly Sisters. Is there a bigger main plot in the future? I am also looking forward to it. Finally, I wish the author good health and happiness, and I will follow up with updates 😘

I don't know if there is OOC or not, but the combat power is indeed a bit harsh. And there are no important characters in the early stage, which is a bit like the single female protagonist of Zhen Shi. (Not particularly ambiguous, after all, she is young, but there are too many plots about her)

There are many shortcomings that novices have, such as the plot distribution is not in place. After all, the girl mentioned above is obviously not the CP, 🧐 and is not the only person to be saved, so there is no need to write so much, right? 🧐 If you want to write about family ties, then I don't have much to say, but if you don't have much contact with that place later on, you don't need to write too much. If you want to focus on the description, you can write a side story from time to time and go back and take a look at it. After all, there are several main lines, such as Spider Mountain, Knife Forging Village, etc. If you want to write a very long article, novices generally cannot persist, so it is not recommended to write so much. After you finish writing, if you feel you can write more, you can post more extra articles. And it has the same shortcomings as the article I read about Bengtie before, that is - the combat power pressure is too harsh! I don't know why it looks a bit OOC. In fact, there is no OOC in the character description, but Beng Tie's view of combat power is relatively strong, so there may be no need to focus on depicting Sha Jin becoming stronger. After all, his growth environment and other factors are destined, and his perseverance and other things will not be too weak. And Jingtu and Yiyong seem to be from the same batch, right? [What] did the author make a mistake? Or maybe I'm remembering it wrong. (I feel like the latter is more likely) 🤦 There may be some shortcomings in the characterization, and the cunning characteristics of gold dust can be highlighted more. In short, this article written by the author is very warm and delicate, at least you can see it from the front. At least every word is written correctly, there are no typos, and there are no poisonous points. You can basically ignore some of the above. It is highly recommended for those who like to read daily life. I hope the author will write better and better in the future!

This could have been okay, not so OOC, warmer, and placer gold is gentler? My body feels warm when you look at it

It's good to watch, but some parts are not very detailed and the battle descriptions are a bit sparse, but you can watch it if you like it, it's not poisonous and it's good to watch [Blow kiss]

It's great to watch. Good luck to the author. As long as there's no outrageous plot, you can get a good score [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Wuxian: Can you play without losing your strength?

It's interesting. There aren't many OOC places.