I Took over the Commission to Make Money After a Breakup, and All the Male Protagonists Fell in Love with Me

The online plot is very interesting and delicious. To be honest, I wanted to give up when I saw the heroine being slapped at the beginning, but the fate of the girl who was slapped later was very comfortable, so I continued to pursue it. Os hopes that the male protagonist will be a new character who has no exes, has no scandals, is a man of perfect moral integrity, and absolutely loves the female protagonist. . There are slight spoilers below: He fired the heroine's friend and wanted to force the heroine to regret it. This is very disgusting. I hope he is not the hero. Jiang and his ex-girlfriend have been childhood sweethearts for many years. I don't want him to be the hero. The rest have ex-girlfriends. Their purity is not necessarily certain. I don't want him to be the hero! ! ! Damn, this is all a novel. Can we not be so realistic? We want an absolutely clean male protagonist [almost crying] [almost crying]. Only then can he be worthy of our female protagonist's baby [crying] [crying] [crying] There is also a scene where the heroine's father slaps the heroine, which I don't like.

It looks good, with obvious pros and cons. Advantages: Well-developed characters. Not only Si Fu, but also several male characters such as Playboy, CEO, Police Officer, and Qi Ran Paranoid, there are also several commissioned female characters who are also good. Disadvantages, the slap at the beginning: Si Fu has no financial pressure (he does not pay off his father's debts, no one is sick), he only gets beaten for earning 1 million more, and his motivation is weak. Helian can be changed to pay in the form of gifts/money, which is more in line with his playboy persona. 2. Being beaten in the hospital: Helian can take the initiative to block, instead of repeating the "beating to make someone feel distressed" routine, which consumes the heroine's charm. 3. The Rescue: Jiang Lai Rescue once again promotes the plot of the male character at the expense of the female protagonist. It should avoid using the female protagonist to be damaged to set off the male. 4 Pricing system is confusing Helian's girlfriend (playing nature, easy to break up, not a bully): 500,000, increased to 1.5 Million after the heroine was slapped. Jiang's girlfriend Ye (well-matched, inspection CEO): Only 100,000. Core contradiction: Lack of unified pricing standard - based on the man's worth? How much is the woman worth? Mission difficulty? Or based on the degree of beating the heroine received? The blurred hierarchy leads to an imbalanced sense of value.

It's pretty cool and novel, but I don't want the heroine to be slapped a second time. The first time was an accident, and the heroine's way of handling it was okay. But in the future, I don't have to rely on slaps to make money. Just make a gimmick. As long as the heroine doesn't collapse and doesn't abuse her in the future, this is pretty good. Okay, the author is back to update again. Please keep the score for now. I will change the score after the update is discontinued. However family members, she seems to have stopped updating.

This is really the most down-to-earth boss I have ever seen. He can play billiards, buy his own coffee, and buy Ferraris in the same city. The story setting is also very similar to Cicada Girl. There are many plots that I don't understand very well. It's like the heroine working in a coffee shop. The boss looked at the heroine and thought, well, the heroine is different. She doesn't stick to him like other women. Although, the heroine is not at work. The author's writing style is okay, but it's a little immature, so I gave it five stars, hoping to see some eye-catching plots later on.

It's very beautiful, I especially like the heroine's character. I didn't feel interested in this title at first, and I felt even less interested when I opened the introduction. Then it was such a book that I was not interested in, but I became addicted to it. It is very beautiful, and the heroine is perfect. I especially like to read the character of the heroine. I don't feel aggrieved, because I still make a lot of money. And the heroine comes here purely for work, and her thinking is very clear and careful. She doesn't feel emotional. There should be a male protagonist in this book, but I don't know who the male protagonist is.

Why is it so delicious that no one praises it? Others write articles to tell stories, but teachers write articles to plant little flowers in my heart! Brainstorming is the seed, writing is the sunshine, and now my heart is full of gardens! I like the sober character of our heroine, the distance between her and others is particularly charming (⑅˃◡˂⑅)! ! Is Helian considered a bad man? I like watching him fall in love and cannot let go of Fufu Jiang Yu is a gentle and good man and has nothing to say. He is still looking for Fufu for two months (sos Jin Yue looks at the flowers of Gaoling and is also fascinated by our Fufu. This person pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger and is so obsessed with Fufu^^ I'll eat Qi Ran, this dank and yandere! I took the bait the first time we met and it was so cool (I want to eat green tea puppies too... Goddess, hungry, hungry🥺🥺

The foundation of this article is good. The heroine Sif is very shining in her portrayal. She is sober and independent, has clear goals, is capable, and works hard to achieve the life she wants. The atmosphere of the women in the article is comfortable, there is little female rivalry between the female characters, the best friends are always reliable, the portrayal of female friendship is natural and comfortable, and the subject matter framework itself has the potential to be outstanding. However, the low-level character flaws of the three core male characters in the book, combined with the author's eccentric whitewashing, and the plot design that continuously weakens the heroine's mind, create a fragmented and uncomfortable look: 1. Playboy Helian: His private life was chaotic, he frequently changed partners in the past, and he once left the heroine alone halfway. After breaking up, you continue to look for a replacement for the heroine. This is not love at all. However, the author deliberately arranged a large number of intimate kissing scenes to favor the character, and the foreshadowing was completely impossible to wash away. The scenes between the unclean character and the heroine were offensive and nauseating to the eyes; 2. Qi Ran, a powerful kid: a typical paranoid "damp puppy" persona, with no sense of boundaries (he has no identity, but he questions and forcibly pulls the heroine away when he sees her eating with others), frequently kisses and pulls the heroine, threatens the heroine to stay at the risk of his own life and death, and kidnaps his extreme emotions into the heroine. This kind of controlling behavior that puts pressure on one's life is full of suffocating horror when you think about it; and he actively attracts Sun Ling to be together, regardless of whether Sun Ling likes him or not. He took the initiative to guide Sun Ling to let the heroine seduce him, and then backpedaled in the plot by saying that he already knew that the heroine came to seduce him on purpose, and wanted to make the heroine feel guilty. I don't think anyone likes to be deceived or calculated. 3. Gentle CEO Jiang Yu: He and his childhood sweetheart Zhu Feifei have been together as an unmarried couple for many years. They have already made an agreement to get married after graduation. However, during their relationship, they took the initiative to cross the line and invited the heroine to dinner. They deliberately concealed the deception and said that they were just having dinner with a friend. He privately compared the heroine with his girlfriend of many years, "She is so sensible and considerate, and she did not embarrass him at all." After falling in love, he scrawled the end of the long-term relationship with "I only treat her as my sister." He also asked Zhu Feifei if she regarded dependence as love, which was similar to blame-shifting behavior. This is not Zhu Feifei's fantasy alone. He spent a long time as a lover consuming the other person's youth, and then immediately pulled away after falling in love. This is essentially a transgressive behavior based on changing his mind. Just imagine that it is really just a brother taking care of his sister. If you have a boyfriend and know that he has a sister who is not your biological sister for so many years, and you have been together as boyfriend and girlfriend for so many years, would you not mind it? In order to highlight the three male characters, the plot repeatedly weakens the heroine: the heroine herself is independent, charming, and has the strength to break away from unreasonable intimacy, but she repeatedly compromises when faced with the overstepping and control of her employer's ex-boyfriend, and is unable to decisively withdraw in the face of Qi's extreme threat of death. The employer's ex-boyfriend's fundamental problem is that he has crossed the line, is selfish, paranoid, and ruthless, but the emotional line is advanced by sacrificing the heroine's sobriety and dignity. Even though the heroine and female group portraits are eye-catching and the subject matter is acceptable, the three-dimensional flaws of the core male character have not been corrected and the narrative routine of sacrificing the heroine to highlight the men still greatly reduces the reading experience.

It's super interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that fascinates me so much. I've read it chapter by chapter. I've never read this type of novel before, but it's really interesting and fast-paced. The heroine's baby character is also very good. I don't know who the hero is at the moment, but I'm hopeful. It's clean, anyway, it looks good [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Update soon. It's good to watch. I love watching it. I really want to watch it. It would be best if this drama doesn't have a male protagonist. I just like to watch dramas with female protagonists. If you use candles, don't fix them, they can all be accepted. Hhhh

Is it better for the author to make 100 a day? [Crying] It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it. I like all the men who have appeared so far. I haven't met one with such an appetite for a long time. The female protagonist is also very good. She strives to be her best for the goal and is very charming. It automatically brings out the cold face and cuteness (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~

It is indeed annoying in the early stage, but it is much better later on. Although I still feel that some of the male protagonists are too annoying and the female protagonist will be restrained, but the female protagonist is really great and it is hard not to fall in love with her. She is gentle and confident, has a strong heart, has strong learning ability, and has great acting skills haha

It's pretty good. I hope the heroine will accept them all soon. I don't have a particular favorite character of the male protagonist, but Jiang's character is suitable for being a big house haha

It's been a long time since I've read such a wonderful article. Let's give up. I have four or five years of reading experience, and I gave up on reading a lot of books in the middle. There are at least more than 1,000 books. What I like most about this book is the detective captain and the heroine. The others are also very good. The author's writing is really good and very good. I highly recommend everyone to read it. I'm going to cry. What should I do if there are no other attributes after reading it?

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter. I love everyone and want to get them all. I finished it in one go last night, and I'll check out the update again today. Looking forward to the next updates. There are many details in the article that still need to be processed. The most impressive part is that there is a part where you are holding someone up horizontally. It is described as holding one hand on the back and the other on the waist. I have been thinking about this for a long time. What kind of weird posture is this?

It's so beautiful. I wish I had to keep watching it at work! The content is really attractive and the writing is also very good. I want to finish it directly and then watch the ending directly hahahahahaha

It looks great. Can you tell me who the male protagonist is? I really want to know [Sending my heart] If I don't know who the male protagonist is, I always wonder if the female protagonist can take them all. But at the moment, I still hope that the actor is the male protagonist because the author said he is the best-looking [laughs] (and probably the richest, hehe)

If you haven't read this novel, hurry up and read it [adoration][adoration][adoration] The women in the novel are portrayed very well, there is almost no intrigue, they all help each other! Very comfortable

Very good writing, the plot, writing and characters are all online, very touching. Let the author change the title of the book for the book test. If you change the name, it will be fine if Shiwan is reading it. If the name is correct, the audience will generally not click on it. Let me review it later. It is really beautiful. The character creation and plot are very good. It can be read in one sitting. The real author of the book title should consider changing it. It is difficult for female protagonists and CP party members to click on this title. Just choose a book title in the style of fishing/heartthrob/powerful/being a dog according to the style on the list. The author will update it very steadily, and the data will definitely be very good! ! ! For example, the heartthrob xx is hooking another person or the powerful person wants status? Queue! Anyway, if you write the attributes directly in the title of the book, more babies will definitely discover this good book!

I came to other platforms. I was a little dissuaded by the beginning. I just wanted to take a look. But the more I listened, the more I became addicted. I really like the character of the female protagonist. She is dedicated to her career, calm and rational, has high emotional intelligence and can control everyone. The main line of making money is clear. The male protagonists of all walks of life have fallen one after another. It is easy to relieve stress. The more I listen, the more addicted I am. The heroine is sober and makes money, yyds! The plot is light and refreshing and worth reading [Blow Kiss]

It's a really good book to read. The female protagonist has very upright views and a very clear mind. It really doesn't weaken the female protagonist at all. The author's setting is also great. The male protagonists are all puppies. I like this kind of book very much. Moreover, the author also writes the sister Bao in the same way, but it is very novel. , The content is attractive and interlocking. The younger sister is also taken care of by the male protagonists and heals the pain of childhood. I really like it. Is this kind of writing possible without cp? I really want to see the beauty of the younger sister alone. In the end, I begged for a big update. It must be cp-free, please 😐

The heroine is so dedicated. This kind of person will succeed in anything she does. She is so charming and special in strategizing. The hero's liking is also very natural. The heroine gives me the feeling that there is nothing she can't do.

Ah, this book is really beautiful. It really impressed me, okay? She is really that kind of heroine, she is gentle, but she is very calm, and she is very calm, so who is the male protagonist? Please answer: Such a good girl, she seems to have a good vibe with everyone [Sending my heart]

It's nice to look at. The heroine is really charming. I like the heroine, but I don't really want to like that playboy. I feel a little dirty.

……All in😭😭🤲🏻 I read the comments to see if they are 1v1 [crying] Can't there be more male protagonists? Damn, I haven't finished reading yet and I don't know the plot behind it. It's so hard to find a novel that suits my appetite.

Good-looking (๑• . •๑) Good-looking (๑• . •๑) Good-looking (๑• . •๑), The author must definitely keep going [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration]

This is so pretty! ! ! Don't stop updating the ball [love] [love] [love] I hope the heroine will get better and better Big cheers for the author! ! !

Shockingly delicious! Top three tomatoes (tied)! The setting of the heroine and the powerful core are great! The plot is reasonable, the writing is smooth, and the female supporting cast is not flat. The male protagonists are all very three-dimensional, each with a distinct personality. Except for the mayor's son who is very annoying, the other male guests are all worthy of being on the table! I really hope it's all... And I'm looking forward to tens of thousands of updates per day by the author.

Generally speaking, it is good-looking, especially the heroine is well portrayed. The heroine is really a very charming person, very charming (hard-working and motivated, beautiful and tenacious, strong and stable core, dual business online) Maybe it's because I can't accept the behavior of some male characters and some subplots. I hope this book has multiple men or no men (for now), because I feel that there is no one who is completely worthy of the female protagonist.

I feel that the structure of the story is quite good. The female protagonist is very sober. She is not silly and sweet. She believes whatever men say and is not dependent on others. Moreover, the male protagonists do not fall in love with her for no reason. She has perseverance, acting skills, and ability. She will make money with her own ability. I hope the heroine will get better and better.

What can I say? This novel is very interesting, with strong visuals and ups and downs in the plot. I saw the slices while watching the video. You can read it when you are bored. It is really addictive [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]