Family Bankruptcy? Then Start Collecting Witches!

This is the first time I've seen a book where the main character's name is mistyped in the introduction. The titles of Chapters 2 and 4 are inexplicable. Combined with Chapter 2's deal with the devil, it's so cryptic that I barely knew what it was about after reading it three times. Then before the first witch awakens, the male protagonist is suddenly killed by a little assassin, which is a bit poisonous. After the witch awakens, the battle in the lord's palace has too many forces and too many names, which is very confusing. The above are the shortcomings that are not painful, and the rest are advantages. This is the best pure Western fantasy novel I have ever seen. All characters, including supporting roles and even supporting actors, are fleshed out and vivid. The plot before the witch awakens is reasonably arranged and detailed. I can fully feel the vitality of the city and bring it into Lin Luoen's perspective. It feels like I am really being the lord of a city, which is very refreshing. And serious novels can also be mixed with some funny jokes to ease the readers' emotions. Even after the witch awakens, the battle scenes are written in too much detail. Everyone's motivations are very clear. Some are determined, some are adaptable, and some give in in time. It feels like the author has written so well. Although the current performance of this book is not very good, with 2,000 readers, it doesn't matter. A western fantasy novel I read before had 3,000 readers in the first few dozen chapters, but it was very well written. Later, this book has read hundreds of thousands, and now it is still reading tens of thousands. So the author should not give up, gold will shine, and this level will eventually become popular.

Hao Chi, whether it is the protagonist, the heroine, or the various passerby NPCs who appear, even the cannon fodder who looks like they come out, many of them have written characters that are very three-dimensional and have a lot of feeling. The interaction with the heroine was also interesting, although it felt a bit lacking. (Get more) Then, the pace of the story is actually not too slow if you look closely, but the overall progress is indeed very slow. Also, because the overall progress is slow, but the details and events are not slow, there are too many characters appearing in the same area, and most of them have established characters, so there are so many names and it is easy to forget which one is which. But also because the battle games of some characters are written in detail, there is always an uncertainty of the ending, so when you end or leave, you will be very emotional and regretful. All in all, it suits my personal taste, and Hao Chi loves it!

Ahem, let me say a few words. First of all, if you feel that there is something unreasonable or confusing about the plot, you can ask me directly - 24 hours a day random online quibbles! I always reply to book reviews, but there's nothing I can do about it being swallowed. Well, I hope it gets rave reviews () In addition, regarding the issue of updates, I have prepared a manuscript of 60 chapters before publishing the book. Even if it is 200,000 words now, I will still be 60 chapters ahead every day. You can rest assured about this. Then, when I read a novel, I really don't like it to end, so I have always had a long dream. As long as no one really reads it, I will continue to write it. As for witches, I already have more than ten templates in mind, and well... They are all delicious. As for having more female protagonists, will it cause the common problems that everyone worries about when reading books? Then please feel free to leave it to me! Isn't this the purpose of an author? Finally, welcome to the pit!

There are currently 114 chapters, and there are no obvious poisonous points in general. It is relatively well written among Western fantasy novels. You can take a look. (Epilepsy) I will not stop complaining and crying until my little loli with dark blue to light blue gradient long hair, with dark blue roots gradually transitioning to light blue at the tips, extending to the waist, with long and short staggered hair, and red pupils with bright red eyes, is paired with a blue and white intertwined skirt, which is composed of dark blue and light blue white fabrics. The skirt has a multi-layer skirt with pleated lace embroidery patterns on the skirt [crying]

Conclusion: This is an excellent lord novel. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are well portrayed. The character image can be said to be quite good. The two female protagonists currently appearing are both quite well portrayed. The female protagonist does not betray the male protagonist, and the male protagonist does not have a gui or licking. This is really rare [crying]. What I want is this kind of building a bond in daily life and then violently blowing up in the later period [laughing] At present, there are basically no major problems. It can be said that there are no poisonous points. The only problem that can be used to examine in detail is that the official empire's power is a bit weak. As an officially appointed local manager, and in a large tax-paying place, as a lord with official face, he was invaded. Isn't this a slap in the face of the empire? But after all, in the second This time, it is still only the protagonist who defends on his own without official support. So many people besieged a national city and made a big fuss in the lord's mansion. This is no longer an ordinary local security issue. It can be said to be a rebellion, and must be attacked with a heavy blow. Although the protagonist is about to be laid off, he is still an official official and regards the law as a mere fiction. I hope there will be a patch later. Please elaborate on what the official is doing at this time. You can't pretend to be dead now and just take over after it's over. [Thinking] In short, I highly recommend this book. Whether it is about lords or cultivation, it is very good and worth a try.

It's a good book, and I can see that the author has put a lot of effort into it. The writing is smooth, the characters are distinct, and the plot of the witch's awakening is comprehensive and layered. The worldview is relatively open, and there are already many organizations that have emerged. Is there a clear outline in the future to ensure that it will not be "lost"? You can speed up the tempo a little, probably to cater to Tomato's style. If it's more refreshing and not intensive enough, fewer people will watch it. I can't force the author to finish it, but as long as it's updated, I will definitely read it. Come on.

I finished reading it in a few hours. The writing and wording are very flavorful. It has the feel of an old-school Western fantasy novel and a bit of the author's own flavor. It is a book that can be called gold. I like it very much, and the descriptions of people are very accurate and vivid, even if they are only NPCs who appear in a few chapters. The descriptions of the people around him are also added bit by bit to make the characters more vivid. The only question is, author, can you be the donkey of the production team? It's really not enough. Please, please add another chapter! Even inside the cover! I can do anything! ! !

Not bad, a Western fantasy harem novel that seems to have great potential, or will it become a Western fantasy-style adventure travel novel in the future? But the only drawback is that after reading it in one go, I feel that the progress is still too fast. I mean the current activities and relationship between the two heroines are improving, which is a bit fast. If the author updates 20 times a day, there should be enough time to pave the way for the relationship? Let's take care of it for a few months. I hope it doesn't explode to death again.

It feels okay, but it's a pity that there is no part of burning witches that I like to see. It is an initial witch (not awakened). It reminds me of the story about a certain dragon and various witches (mature) that I read a long time ago (Loris is cute). There are more shrimp soldiers and crabs at the moment. It would be better if there is a holy court specifically for witches in the future.

The plot is good, but in the part about awakening the witch's power, so many new characters appear together that I can't even tell which names correspond to which characters.

It looks okay, but it's best not to introduce too many characters at the same time and place. It's hard to remember Western names. If there are too many names at once, it's hard to remember and it doesn't match up.

8.5/10.0 [Thinking] It's like a torrent in the tomato stone sea

The popularity is very low. The author uses his love to generate electricity. He will read and cherish the level. I will give it a good review and hope it can live longer. I have already seen too many niche things.

The characters are well drawn and the plot is good

Overall, it was okay. The prelude to the great changes in the city at the beginning was a bit well written, but many characters and plots felt light and airy, and the protagonist was a high-ranking character. The sentences were sometimes very complicated. I hope it doesn't become a literary youth. After experiencing it, the passion is greater than the plot.

The writing is very good, but there are too many names of important supporting characters, and they are all Western names, which are not easy to remember. Sometimes it is better to write a vague occupation and micro-emphasis on identity, so you don't have to remember who those names are.

I think it's still very good Ah, of course, but brother, I didn't expect it at 5 o'clock.

Very well written, keep it up

Good luck, good luck, written with great feeling

Fortunately, it was the long first heroine's awakening that made me very uncomfortable. Either I couldn't write a guard, or it was too long.

The second witch did not meet my expectations. Before awakening, her attitude towards the lord should be mainly respect and awe. After awakening, she would become more confident. The current attitude change feels too blunt (it can also be said that it is less vigilant and shows a bit of girlishness, but it is weird anyway) I like collectors very much, they are ambitious, bold and elegant. It's rare to find the protagonist's opponent in Tomato who is not an idiot. I hope we can meet again at the end

I've seen Chapter 70 and I feel pretty good so far [cool]

Very detailed description, the interaction between the protagonist and the witch is very interesting

Nice looking, Fire Tongs Liu Ming. The author is active

Very good, just a bit messy, but good readers will adapt themselves [cool]

The three golden chapters are well written and very attractive. They determine the main line of the article and expand some world views. Come on, author, enjoy reading and reading [top post][top post][top post]

Ignoring Some Minor Problems is a pretty good book on Tomato.

The volume is large and the content is full. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are described in detail, and the settings in all aspects are also very complete. I just can't write down the levels in detail.

I don't want to give you a five-star review [rolls eyes]

I just want to say one thing, the author is cute. The plot is also well-paced, not overwhelming or stressful. I hope the key moments can come earlier.