Rose: Stealing Huang Yimei from the Start

I was originally going to start a rant, but after thinking about it, the author in the comment area said that it is not easy to write a book for the first time, so please give me some advice. 1. The article is too plain, giving people the feeling of a straight line without ups and downs. It can be seen that the author is not writing a tomato-based article. However, the writing style is currently limited, and I don't know if the author has prepared an outline and detailed outline. There is no plot conflict in the whole novel, and some plots are inexplicable and very unreasonable. (Refer to the plot after Zhuang Guodong returned to China) 2. There is no bottom line in the word count. The same plot is staged seven or eight times, and the content of the dialogue and communication each time is roughly the same. (Referring to the conversations between several customers and the protagonist after the establishment of the company, it is not clear what emotion the author wants to express. Is it human nature in the harsh winter, trust? But it is obvious that this way of expression is not acceptable and consumes the reader's patience. Moreover, this repetitive and unoriginal way of expression in the article is far more than this plot. The heroine asks why fireworks are roses, the heroine's brother's temptation...) Come on

The first time I write, I have to think highly of myself 🤭🤭🤭🤭

It's okay, but why does the stock trading plot have to arrange a Lao Wang? He follows the protagonist every time.

Just imagine, just take care of you for me

Nice novel, simple

Very well written