Everyone's Gun Girl: Starting Contract S-Class Bolt-Action Rifle

To sum up in one sentence: competition articles that are more emotionally focused. The advantages and disadvantages are obvious, let's talk about the advantages first. No matter what the mother's background is, she does not follow the routine of being influenced from the beginning. Although the initial setting of the heroine is very classic and there are several previous owners, the subsequent emotional changes are very detailed and not abrupt. And after reading the latest chapter, it is obvious that it is reasonable for the heroine to be disliked. After all, Shuan Sniper has not yet seen the advantage of her performance. The competition is based on a points system, which inherently loses the advantage of Shuan Sniper to kill with one shot, so precision rifles and rifles are stronger. At the same time, the writing of the competition is pretty good, and the main points provided are up to standard. The shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, there is too much invalid information. For example, some data descriptions during the protagonist's training can actually be simplified. They don't need to be written in such detail. More words can be used on the interaction between the two people or the game itself, and even tactical allocation. At the same time, after reading the new chapter, I found that there is an obvious conflict between the two contexts. I just tested the accelerating bomb first, and then I said that I have not tested it before. Then I said before that the accuracy of the bolt action at 200 meters is higher, and the accuracy of the test came out, but later I said that the accuracy is not as good as that of a continuous sniper. I don't quite understand the reason for this. Is it because I have too many items that the previous article was newly revised, and the subsequent articles were written before? Or should we say AI? Generally speaking, I think it is a novel that you can try. Although there are a lot of invalid information in the early stage, the latest chapter has entered the competition, and it is still quite exciting [laughs] Another thing I forgot to write is what the world view of this game is like. I still don't quite understand how Gun Girl went to the battlefield with the Master. Can you explain this? Is it a possession or two individuals? Or turn into a gun and then possess him?

It's quite moist and looks very comfortable. One question is that when the protagonist participated in the competition point, he checked with the gun girl whether he could hit it, but the others seemed to be the contractors who were aiming and shooting, not the gun girl. The protagonist seems to be a gun girl aiming and shooting

It's very good, the writing is simple, it's a story about two humans and machines warming each other up.

If you find any bugs or errors, just @me. I have a lot of manuscripts saved and I am revising them as I go. There may be things I thought I had written or thought I explained clearly, but it turned out not to be the case. You can leave them below this article and I will read them all. ▰ω▰

The advantages are obvious, the emotional descriptions are delicate, and the characters have distinct personalities (in fact, I hope the heroine will be more innocent, and personal preferences will not be included in the evaluation reference range). Overall, it is obvious that the author has good intentions. There are also shortcomings. It is easy for novices to make mistakes. The rhythm is not well controlled. Sometimes the details are well described and sometimes too lengthy. For example, the psychological description of the protagonist does not need to be so complete. The meaning of thinking can be conveyed through small movements and eyes. You don't need to explain why everything happens. In this way, those who like to explore details can dig out their own to increase their reading pleasure, and those who feel bored and think there is a lot of nonsense can skim through it and understand the plot of the story more coherently. In general, the completed version or smooth implementation is about 9.0, Which is a conservative estimate. I hope the author will make progress as he writes. I'll give it a 5-star rating first. If the score is too high, I'll be asked to come back and make corrections.

Although the subject matter is a bit bad, the writing is really good and the characters are also good. In that kind of situation where comics and dramas are all about sexual transformation. It is simply a stream of pure water that purifies the heart. [Laughing] Shocking and delicious

Very well written. In the genre of "Girls", I think the author can be as good as Penguin if he doesn't paddle in the future. The only thing I feel is not very good is that the author did not explain how to turn the gun girl into a firearm. There are several transformations and so on, but there are no specific details. If you only brush it once, it's a bit confusing. I hope it can be improved.

This is my first review. This book is mainly about emotion. Although the protagonist is a time traveler in its original world, he has been a soldier for six years and has been on the battlefield. The actual situation shown in the article is that civilian soldiers with theoretical knowledge do not object. The calmness of veterans. Personally, I feel that a veteran who has been on the battlefield should be more confident when playing virtual games.

Although it is a book by a new author, the writing style is very sophisticated and the plot is very attractive. I feel it is a masterpiece. I recommend it.

I enjoyed watching it. Maybe I am naturally fond of things like bolting, sniping and single-shot spraying, which can kill people with one hit. It suits me very well. Male and female protagonists, human and machine, but very sweet, not industrial syrup, delicious

The plot is not bad, but I have seen too much of this type of subject matter, and I can already guess the subsequent plot [face covering] The interaction between the characters has a human-machine feel, but so far it doesn't feel too inconsistent. I look forward to the follow-up.

The reading is a bit stuck. I don't know whether it's because the paragraphs are too spread out or the style is a bit cold. It's not very smooth. You can see the warm feeling the author wants to express, but the reading is indeed a bit stuck, like the gears don't fit very well. I hope the author can fine-tune it. Each paragraph is too short. The novel is overall good, and the author is very thoughtful.

In short, great book Boss, what are you doing after not updating for so long? Come back, I really like your novel [cry][cry][cry]

It's very comfortable, and I feel like I finally took out gold from my shit.

Looking at Samsung from the perspective of a competitive novel, if it is regarded as a redemption love novel, full marks [laughs] [like]

It's very interesting to watch. The way the male and female protagonists get along is very interesting. I don't know why the score is so low.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, the plot is quite attractive, there's nothing poisonous about it, it's just that there are too few of them, the author should keep up the good work! Personally, I still prefer articles like this, which give people an intoxicating feeling. Come on, author, I hope you are good.

Super nice book

Delicious, love to eat #chewchew

It was good after reading a few chapters, but I was curious about how the machine girl was born, and how to preserve or control it (in captivity or otherwise). After all, the machine girl is also a conscious individual.

One of the things I really like about this is the pricing of the products, which are so detailed that even an ordinary person like me can relate to them. Sometimes I'm really dumbfounded by those mindless articles.

Damn it, I thought they said the book written by the new author was very good, but I didn't expect it to be so good Niu Fu 666

The protagonist points out calmly, which is very interesting. As a cool article, it's fun to write without thinking. Apart from being a little awkward at the beginning, there is no poisonous point anymore. I recommend reading Chapter 20 first.

The battle and daily scenes alternate well, and the description of the relationship between the two is very special and delicate. I can't say much more, but this piece deserves an A+

It feels good. Except for some traces of AI that can be seen in some places, there are no obvious shortcomings.

You can just lack this kind of subject matter, and you can read it The author's style is efficient communication in a short style. There is little environment and more psychological expression. It is quite delicate and highly recommended.

Very real, very picturesque

Superficially rational love

Personally I quite like it

Nothing else Just good looking