Reborn as an Immortal Clan, Ascending to Heaven with Green Plum Blossoms

It's obvious that this is a new author, the writing style is still immature, and the story is good [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Not bad, good, good, good. The writing is very delicate, and the most important thing is the single female protagonist + childhood sweetheart + pure love + daily life of cultivating immortals. Not bad, not bad, very good. The only shortcoming is that the plot relies entirely on daily advancement. This is not to say that it is not good, but it is a bit average. The main reason is that there are fewer climax points, but the flaws are not concealed. If the plot can be more exciting, it may not be able to become a hit. Come on, author, I hope you

The writing is quite good, but I don't really like reading group elephant articles, so I'm leaving now.

I personally think it looks pretty

The author writes well [like][like]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Although it is good for daily life, it would be better if a climax plot is added.

It's really beautiful, come on author🐶 Author, please update soon! I'm going to die.

A threesome with the male protagonist, female protagonist and a follower?