Protagonist: Lin Ye (traveler, sinister, fond of paddling, sweet-tongued and capable of cheating)
System: Naruto's full attribute chakra sign-in system (fire, water, wind, thunder, earth, yin and yang, gradually unlocked)
Reader comments
It looks okay, but the plot is too short, and many famous scenes and character backgrounds are not written. Those who have not watched One Piece will feel that the characters are added too hastily, and the plot content is not exciting enough. Those who have watched One Piece will feel that the characters have lost their vitality when watching the anime, and the plot content has been changed beyond recognition. It is recommended to follow the original plot. The protagonist can be weird, but for each node of the plot, how to integrate, how to make up for regrets, etc. It is necessary to think carefully, not only the impact on the subsequent plot, but also how to make the current plot more vivid, and even buy the anticipated foreshadowing for the subsequent plot. After the early plot is initially effective, the subsequent plot will be slowly changed. In addition, the story and background of the characters should fit the animation character settings, and it is better to get to know partners instead of letting them disappear out of thin air. For example, the author missed the Kerby whom Arrita met, but this is still in the later stage. Although his evaluation of the characters that will appear is not very good, you can plant the seeds to change his new state when he appears in the later stage. For example, Nami, this is a key character. With the setting of Nami hating pirates, if there is no trust accumulated by colleagues in the early stage and a different view of Straw Hat, how to integrate it. The author's golden finger for writing the protagonist is good, but the plot is a bit unsatisfactory. It is recommended that the author can better understand the pirates through these methods. Wang, first, watch the anime, second, look at the background and setting of each character who appears in the plot (including but not limited to the protagonist, the villain, people who have helped the protagonist, and other miscellaneous small characters), and dig into the unknown stories of each character. Third, the plot direction of the anime, key nodes in the anime, regrets left by the anime, famous scenes in the anime, moments in the anime that make people shed tears or laugh out loud, etc. Are all unforgettable plots.
To be honest, it was definitely written by AI. Often the story is wrong, and the two chapters cannot be connected. It was really uncomfortable to watch the new moves being used before they were obtained, and it took a few chapters to sign in before they were obtained. Moderately toxic!
It looks okay, but the plot is too short, and many famous scenes and character backgrounds are not written. Those who have not watched One Piece will feel that the characters are added too hastily, and the plot content is not exciting enough. Those who have watched One Piece will feel that the characters have lost their vitality when watching the anime, and the plot content has been changed beyond recognition. It is recommended to follow the original plot. The protagonist can be weird, but for each node of the plot, how to integrate, how to make up for regrets, etc. It is necessary to think carefully, not only the impact on the subsequent plot, but also how to make the current plot more vivid, and even buy the anticipated foreshadowing for the subsequent plot. After the early plot is initially effective, the subsequent plot will be slowly changed. In addition, the story and background of the characters should fit the animation character settings, and it is better to get to know partners instead of letting them disappear out of thin air. For example, the author missed the Kerby whom Arrita met, but this is still in the later stage. Although his evaluation of the characters that will appear is not very good, you can plant the seeds to change his new state when he appears in the later stage. For example, Nami, this is a key character. With the setting of Nami hating pirates, if there is no trust accumulated by colleagues in the early stage and a different view of Straw Hat, how to integrate it. The author's golden finger for writing the protagonist is good, but the plot is a bit unsatisfactory. It is recommended that the author can better understand the pirates through these methods. Wang, first, watch the anime, second, look at the background and setting of each character who appears in the plot (including but not limited to the protagonist, the villain, people who have helped the protagonist, and other miscellaneous small characters), and dig into the unknown stories of each character. Third, the plot direction of the anime, key nodes in the anime, regrets left by the anime, famous scenes in the anime, moments in the anime that make people shed tears or laugh out loud, etc. Are all unforgettable plots.
To be honest, it was definitely written by AI. Often the story is wrong, and the two chapters cannot be connected. It was really uncomfortable to watch the new moves being used before they were obtained, and it took a few chapters to sign in before they were obtained. Moderately toxic!
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