Battle Mage at Hogwarts

The writing is very good, and I really like the subject of iron magic. However, some of the plots are very complicated and confusing, which may be due to my own personal reasons. It's about the sisters and Leo. I hope the author can improve and better express the logic in the future.

Advantages: As a rare combination of MC and HP, it has a large number of original plots and characters, and the plot direction is quite interesting. Disadvantages: The author is rather jumpy when describing the plot, and lacks necessary foreshadowing and description in some transitional links, making many parts difficult and abrupt to read. I hope the author will not omit some background settings and foreshadowing. Readers may not understand some unpopular or original settings. By the way, the current front and side descriptions of original characters are basically background descriptions, and they generally belong to tool people. (There may be an original heroine.) Generally speaking, if you can accept a large number of original characters and plots and a jumpy plot rhythm, it is recommended.

It's a great Hogwarts story. I don't know much about iron magic, but it breaks out of a certain framework of Hogwarts without completely breaking out, and it doesn't destroy the original plot on a large scale (is it very intelligent to destroy the original plot and destroy your own prophetic ability?) I can only say that I saw a newer Hogwarts, and it doesn't seem to be exactly the same as the original work. It followed the original work and came out with its own style, which is very good. Wait, what about the main plot? What about Defense Against the Dark Arts? I have read more than 30 chapters, and I mentioned it before. Normally, the Defense Against the Dark Arts class should be a little before the Potions class. If I remember correctly, even if the author complains about it, the garlic smell will be fine. Please, the author, please don't destroy the plot on a large scale. At least follow the original route. After all, Harry Potter has fatalism, which refers to Harry Potter's prophecies and some of the curses. There is also a problem. Based on Malfoy's stupidity, and the fact that the two Death Eaters in the seventh-year Defense Against the Dark Arts class can teach Cruciatus, and the noble Death Eaters are generally like Lucius. They are trying to do a little more extreme things, but they are currently hiding underground. They generally will not teach their relatives the Unforgivable Curse, let alone use it in school. Has the author underestimated the deterrent power of the Unforgivable Curse? I personally suggest replacing the heart-wrenching one with the fainting one, which is more in line with the original work.

It looks great and feels quite interesting, and the main character uses Skadi's skin (white hair and red eyes are great!)

It was pretty good until chapter 25. In Chapter 25, I meet a woman. The protagonist already has a way to make a lot of money, but he still wants to be a model for 50 gold (I have already learned that the previous ones are all licking dogs. Of course, it is reasonable for the protagonist not to consider controlling, so I will just give in for 50 gold). Then he was attacked. The protagonist was of course immune-controlled, and then he didn't say anything about saving the girl's sister, nor did he say anything about the two of them controlling others. This operation made it impossible for me to judge the protagonist's situation (the good protagonist, of course, spoke out and solved the control problem, and the evil one, of course, gave them both a knife, at least the sister had to suffer). Maybe the sperm got into the brain, and they just let it go when they saw it. This is the only explanation [laughs]

The worldview is very well combined. It does not bring too many hard rules of the MC like other fanfics. It prefers the magic of the HP worldview. It weakens the Potter protagonist in terms of character relationships and writes some supporting characters that are not seen too much in the fanfic (of course there are many). The plot does not stick to the original plot. Although the latter has changed a bit, Iron Magic and Starlight Magic are well integrated with the HP worldview. Currently, the combat power of more than 60 cards is not too exaggerated. As for blocking points, it varies from person to person, but for me it basically doesn't exist.

Good luck to everyone who is tired of watching the plot of the original novel but still wants to see those characters appear! This book abandons some of the original characters and scenes of the original events, and replaces them with... Brand-new characters! A brand new big event! Not just a group with the protagonist, but a protagonist with the ability to act independently! How about turning Hogwarts into an Adventurer's Guild? Oh, poor Professor Quirrell, the taste of love potion must be unpleasant, right? About me doing a zombie horror movie at Hogwarts. Will mermaid hybrids have scales on their feet? When I was reborn in the last century, I established monopolies in the West and so on. That's natural. The advantage is that there are very few plots in the original work. The disadvantage is that there are very few plots in the original work. It's more about the author using this map and characters to tell his own story. If you mind, don't enter.

Although many new characters and MC modules make me a little confused, generally speaking, there is no feeling of confusion, and in many cases, such as the relationship between Jin Galleons and gold, a type of settings that should be common sense in the magic world gives a sense of reality. The protagonist is also the kind of player character, but it is not too chaotic. The plot sometimes jumps, or intersperses with some original plots, the pace is a little faster, and the overall sense of substitution is still a little weak, but the plot that combines some original settings and game mods is really refreshing. Moreover, it also wrote a lot of details and jokes that were not mentioned in detail in the original work, which made people curious and wanted to read it. It also maintained a relaxed atmosphere, just like watching a side story or a set collection.

Let me talk about the conclusion first: a rare good book in the HP circle. The author has a deep understanding of iron magic and HP settings. The components of iron magic are not overpowering, and the descriptions are very original. The current character descriptions are very close to the original, without any OOC, and there are a lot of HP-flavored jokes in the text. You can understand it even without playing the iron magic mod. The MC and HP double circles are highly recommended.

It's very good. It blends Iron Magic with Harry Potter very well, and the plot is also very original. It's not like most movies that just follow the plot and follow the text. However, I feel that the protagonist and some skill authors have intentionally or unintentionally limited iron magic. 80% Of the magic is very handsome in reality. However, the author feels that he is deliberately avoiding those that are more exaggerated. It is more obvious in the early stage. 80% Of the hundreds of magic are very strong, but the protagonist always gets some single-target damage or auxiliary magic. I think it will be much easier to add a big stone pillar in the early stage. More than 60 chapters later, group attack spells appeared.

This is really good. The last good book I saw was Professor Kaisen Alchemy.

The funniest MC fic I've seen recently, and also the funniest Hogwarts fic. Good luck, more to come

Not bad. The biggest controversy in the ratings is the handling of the siren sisters. I think you can say that the author's handling of this plot is indeed not good, but the comments are all half-full. What does it mean when a kid says it's a turtle? Why, in your eyes, girls are inferior, so the male protagonist is a turtle? What logic? Also reviewed.

The book is pretty good overall, and it is definitely not an AI text. After all, the AI ​​would write about Quirrell feeding a toad a love potion [laughter]

Apollyon has become a scumbag... What else can I say? I'll give you the ring of promotion😋

I feel like the author didn't quite understand the setting of Apocalypse of Witchcraft.

Great brother, great. I originally wanted to give it four stars. The advantages are that the characters interact with each other interestingly, it contains a lot of jokes and is not obtrusive (a personal bonus), and it has good attention to details. The disadvantage is that after adding the module content, it may be difficult for people who don't understand it to understand. In addition, the hp world and the MC magic module were not well integrated in the early stage, and it felt like it was in the clouds. Personally, I feel that the magic principles are a bit too detailed (can be solved with more updates😃), and the main storyline is slow to advance (can be solved with more updates on the basis of more updates😃) As for why I gave it an extra star, it must not be because I played T. O. The Expansion of New Magic, Iron Magic, T. O., A Song of Ice and Fire, Twilight Forest, Calamity, Sea Spirit Story, Mechanical Power, Flesh and Blood Recast, Brittle Bone Disease, The Fool's Finale, and I haven't played Star Magic. (I have never played Xinghui...)

Minecraft? Awesome! Hogwarts? Awesome! You are a smart kitten. Before I opened it, I was still thinking that Steve's synthesis was too powerful and that this subject would be difficult to write about. I didn't expect to just throw away the synthesis, but it became more interesting. The follow-up is to use ritual instead of synthesis. This idea is really imaginative and really good. I'm optimistic about you.

A rare interesting mc story, Iron Magic really goes well with the Harry Potter series [laughs]

It's awesome, needless to say, the protagonist's character is very appealing, and the author's narrative style is also very humorous and interesting. It's top-notch food. Those who love watching HP and playing MC are in luck😋😋😋

Can the author add an attachment to iron magic? For example, musical magic. There are always cataclysmic attachments. If you have played Bounty Hunter, you should have been exposed to English magic. By the way, the phonetic magic module has magic pets.

It's not bad so far. I just want to ask if the heroine is Hermione. Hermione is really tired of it. If there is no best, MC has enough fun. It's good if they can be friends.

It's not like it's written by AI, it's not like it's written by humans, it's like it's written by God.

Note⚠️😡This book has incorrect pedigree and there is no iron hat king

I hope the main character is not a gift boy. I also watched the main character in Harry Pokotli use magic from other worlds, but ended up teaching it to others casually.

The writing is really good. The author has a high understanding of Harry Potter's world view and iron magic. It's a pleasure to read.

The writing is very good, especially the localized acquisition of MC items. The ritual trials are also okay, but they are a bit Riddler-like to me, which is acceptable. Also, the plot jumps are not divided, and the previous scene is often written immediately after the next scene. That's it

It's a very comfortable novel and the content is well matched.

This is the second book about Hogwarts and MC that I have seen. I must give it a thumbs up.

Exquisite magic theory, Mr. Goose, I am happy to read your work.