[Male channel] [Harry Potter] [Snake Yard] [Single female protagonist, with female supporting role] [Lao Liu, make up for the last blow] [Build your own family] [Low sense of system presence]
Travel into the world of Harry Potter.
Hephaestus Prince awakened the system of many children and many blessings.
? ? ?
The sky is falling! ! !
In Harry Potter, many children are blessed?
What is the difference between directly giving a big gift package and then the system disappears?
Oh, there are still some, which is equivalent to becoming a natural master of Occlumency.
Fortunately, the gift pack is very powerful, including high-level knowledge and domineering, high-level overlord domineering, high-level animal affinity, and top magic talents.
Then because of the rules of the world, Heffy discovered that his overbearing lust could not dazzle anyone! ! ! ! !
Can you believe it? If you can't stun people, what do you call your overbearing color?
This is the story of a sixth child who started from scratch and built his own castle, his own family, and a zoo bit by bit!
Reader comments
It's very interesting. I've read nearly 6,000 books and nearly 10,000 hours on Tomato. I reviewed a book with five stars for the first time. Although I like Hufflepuff, this protagonist fulfills all my fantasies about Slytherin. We Come from the Quagmire
We sing in hell
we crave rights
we are full of ambition
We are strong and calm
We are elegant and self-possessed
we never regret
We are forever noble and pure
Slytherin
Slytherin will help you on the way to greatness.
Slytherin will help you reach your peak!
It's pretty good. It's one of the rare high-quality novels among Harry fans so far. It's a pity that I was delayed by the title of the book. I came across the title several times, but when I saw the title, I had no desire to click in. After I clicked in, I saw the two contradictory labels of "Many Children, Many Blessings" + "Single Female Protagonist", so I quit again. It is recommended that the author think of a better title, change the introduction, think about the issue of "single\many", and prepare in advance whether to plan for a single Harry world, or to seek the magic of all the worlds later. Based on the current progress of the protagonist, I feel that if I don't travel to all the worlds and stay in the Harry universe, it will easily reach a bottleneck. At the same time, if I don't add water, this book of one million words will be almost the limit.
After reading Chapter 63, except for the point about having many children and being blessed, the author has done a good job. A rare perspective on the identity of the protagonist, which fits the character of Snake Yard I think. To avoid spoilers, just read it if you find it interesting. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work!
I saw Hermione turn to the snake yard to comment. It's a very interesting book. Even the story of Hermione going to the snake farm, I felt it was very reasonable when I followed it and saw the plot happening. This book has become a permanent part of my bookshelf. Good luck to the author!
Wonderful setting, one of the best in the fandom. I feel like it uses AI assistance, but many of the details are the author's own wonderful settings. It's one of the best in the fanfic. I feel that AI assistance is used, but many details were considered by the author himself. Pure AI will never be able to write such a thing.
Not bad, not bad, not bad. It's a new book with potential. I like the character of the main character and the strength is strong enough. However, the beginning of the chapter is a bit bitter and grudge-filled. It's written like this. When you become stronger in the future, I won't be a Dark Lord and cleanse the pure-blood family. I'm sorry for my childhood experience [laughs]
I've finished it, and it's really good so far. The male protagonist is really cool, and it's really fun to watch. However, I agreed not to make too much trouble with the female protagonist. The writing of Hermione is a bit dangerous. Don't make her the female protagonist later. Just arrange her as a follower of the Dark Lord like Rozier and Bella.
It's a very good Harry Potter fanfic. It's a bit rough in the early stages, but the more you write it, the more interesting it becomes. The protagonist really studies after entering school, instead of following the protagonist's group to fool around. The author really pays attention to the description of magic. I hope it will be better in the future.
The setting of the protagonist is very unique. I have read a lot of HP fanfics. There are very few people like the protagonist who has a grandmother who loves him, shoulders the burden of reviving the family, and lives hard. When I read the previous chapter, I really wanted to say why not just kill those assassinated families, but think about it. He is only a 12-year-old boy, and the soul of an adult has a role in a strange world, but not much. The Sorting Hat said that the protagonist is a real Slytherin, and did not misinterpret the meaning of Slytherin. Even Hermione's subsequent re-sorting did not misinterpret it. This is really a very good work. I hope the author will work hard and not stop updating. I look forward to the follow-up plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
To be honest, I have been reading novels on Tomato for so long, but among Hogwarts fan fiction, this one really stood out to me. Although he is set in the Zi era. But he did not follow the main plot like many fan novels. He participated, but not in the whole process. He had his own innovations, and like the protagonist, his background was also very good. His subsequent studies with Merlin were also well-founded.
After reading Chapter 169, I personally felt that it was a bit inappropriate for me. Most of what I read was that other hospitals had some misunderstandings about Snake House. I felt that it was too Snake House and not suitable for me. (Personal opinion, for reference only, don't blame me if I'm right or wrong) [Sending my heart]
I thought it was just okay because there were not many people watching it, but I didn't expect it to be okay.
If you haven't read a good book recently and want to read a fanfic, this one is still good. I generally don't rate it much. I will only rate it if I encounter something that makes me happy, or if I really want to complain.
You can use it as a reference
The smell of AI is too strong, brother
It's great, the writing is also good, and the most important thing is that you are diligent! Lao Deng, come on, update 80,000 times a day!
The author's character creation is excellent
It's not bad. Although it's not as good as top fans like Gray Wizard, it's not bad either. It doesn't matter if you write slower, but don't let the plot collapse.
It's very well written. If the author doesn't write about fan fiction, he can write other types of books as well.
It's okay, the content is similar to a fantasy novel in Hogwarts skin, but the setting has been changed a bit. There are very few poisonous points, which do not affect reading.
I haven't read the original work, but just read a few fanfics. So far, it seems that the Tomato fanfics are relatively good.
Not bad, I rarely review, this one is not about Threesome
It's really good, but at the end, I don't know if the author was influenced by the book reviews and didn't want to write it, but he didn't want it to end. Gave an unexpected ending
I've only read the first twenty or thirty chapters. It's really good. The writing is very good and the emotions are rich. It's very good.
Not bad, it looks very comfortable, and the literary talent is also good
It's very interesting. I've read nearly 6,000 books and nearly 10,000 hours on Tomato. I reviewed a book with five stars for the first time. Although I like Hufflepuff, this protagonist fulfills all my fantasies about Slytherin. We Come from the Quagmire We sing in hell we crave rights we are full of ambition We are strong and calm We are elegant and self-possessed we never regret We are forever noble and pure Slytherin Slytherin will help you on the way to greatness. Slytherin will help you reach your peak!
It's pretty good. It's one of the rare high-quality novels among Harry fans so far. It's a pity that I was delayed by the title of the book. I came across the title several times, but when I saw the title, I had no desire to click in. After I clicked in, I saw the two contradictory labels of "Many Children, Many Blessings" + "Single Female Protagonist", so I quit again. It is recommended that the author think of a better title, change the introduction, think about the issue of "single\many", and prepare in advance whether to plan for a single Harry world, or to seek the magic of all the worlds later. Based on the current progress of the protagonist, I feel that if I don't travel to all the worlds and stay in the Harry universe, it will easily reach a bottleneck. At the same time, if I don't add water, this book of one million words will be almost the limit.
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After reading Chapter 63, except for the point about having many children and being blessed, the author has done a good job. A rare perspective on the identity of the protagonist, which fits the character of Snake Yard I think. To avoid spoilers, just read it if you find it interesting. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work!
I saw Hermione turn to the snake yard to comment. It's a very interesting book. Even the story of Hermione going to the snake farm, I felt it was very reasonable when I followed it and saw the plot happening. This book has become a permanent part of my bookshelf. Good luck to the author!
Wonderful setting, one of the best in the fandom. I feel like it uses AI assistance, but many of the details are the author's own wonderful settings. It's one of the best in the fanfic. I feel that AI assistance is used, but many details were considered by the author himself. Pure AI will never be able to write such a thing.
Not bad, not bad, not bad. It's a new book with potential. I like the character of the main character and the strength is strong enough. However, the beginning of the chapter is a bit bitter and grudge-filled. It's written like this. When you become stronger in the future, I won't be a Dark Lord and cleanse the pure-blood family. I'm sorry for my childhood experience [laughs] I've finished it, and it's really good so far. The male protagonist is really cool, and it's really fun to watch. However, I agreed not to make too much trouble with the female protagonist. The writing of Hermione is a bit dangerous. Don't make her the female protagonist later. Just arrange her as a follower of the Dark Lord like Rozier and Bella.
It's a very good Harry Potter fanfic. It's a bit rough in the early stages, but the more you write it, the more interesting it becomes. The protagonist really studies after entering school, instead of following the protagonist's group to fool around. The author really pays attention to the description of magic. I hope it will be better in the future.
The setting of the protagonist is very unique. I have read a lot of HP fanfics. There are very few people like the protagonist who has a grandmother who loves him, shoulders the burden of reviving the family, and lives hard. When I read the previous chapter, I really wanted to say why not just kill those assassinated families, but think about it. He is only a 12-year-old boy, and the soul of an adult has a role in a strange world, but not much. The Sorting Hat said that the protagonist is a real Slytherin, and did not misinterpret the meaning of Slytherin. Even Hermione's subsequent re-sorting did not misinterpret it. This is really a very good work. I hope the author will work hard and not stop updating. I look forward to the follow-up plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
To be honest, I have been reading novels on Tomato for so long, but among Hogwarts fan fiction, this one really stood out to me. Although he is set in the Zi era. But he did not follow the main plot like many fan novels. He participated, but not in the whole process. He had his own innovations, and like the protagonist, his background was also very good. His subsequent studies with Merlin were also well-founded.
After reading Chapter 169, I personally felt that it was a bit inappropriate for me. Most of what I read was that other hospitals had some misunderstandings about Snake House. I felt that it was too Snake House and not suitable for me. (Personal opinion, for reference only, don't blame me if I'm right or wrong) [Sending my heart]
I thought it was just okay because there were not many people watching it, but I didn't expect it to be okay. If you haven't read a good book recently and want to read a fanfic, this one is still good. I generally don't rate it much. I will only rate it if I encounter something that makes me happy, or if I really want to complain. You can use it as a reference
The smell of AI is too strong, brother
It's great, the writing is also good, and the most important thing is that you are diligent! Lao Deng, come on, update 80,000 times a day!
The author's character creation is excellent
It's not bad. Although it's not as good as top fans like Gray Wizard, it's not bad either. It doesn't matter if you write slower, but don't let the plot collapse.
It's very well written. If the author doesn't write about fan fiction, he can write other types of books as well.
It's okay, the content is similar to a fantasy novel in Hogwarts skin, but the setting has been changed a bit. There are very few poisonous points, which do not affect reading.
Well, good! Very energetic
It's okay so far, no poisonous spots
A very good book
Why does it feel so similar to Shelby's book?
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It's pretty good for this subject matter.
I still prefer Shuangwen
I haven't read the original work, but just read a few fanfics. So far, it seems that the Tomato fanfics are relatively good.
Not bad, I rarely review, this one is not about Threesome
It's really good, but at the end, I don't know if the author was influenced by the book reviews and didn't want to write it, but he didn't want it to end. Gave an unexpected ending
I've only read the first twenty or thirty chapters. It's really good. The writing is very good and the emotions are rich. It's very good.
Not bad, it looks very comfortable, and the literary talent is also good