Daming: How Come No One Suspects That I Am a Fake?

There is a sense of déjà vu in a paper. You can read it, but the point of interest is where is the key point? I have been giving examples of how this should be done and whether it should be done like this. It is written here. Summary: 8.7 Points: The writing is good, although it is a bit confusing.

The writing is brilliant, and the writing is not boring, nor is it the kind of ignorant writing that is illiterate in history, nor is it the nonsense of those time travel novels that regard the ancients as idiots and arrogance. The author's writing style is sharp, the protagonist is cautious, and the various reactions of the ancients are as real as real. The description of ancient society, including prices, road guidance, the social form of three religions and nine streams, and the ecology of the official system and subordinate staff, are all accurate and consistent with the historical background. Very good, keep up the hard work! Come on

Poisonous, too poisonous. There is a big poisonous point. There are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, which makes the process of the article very slow and protracted. But fortunately, I have a plan to make the article dark and clear. The author can just update one more chapter every day! As long as one chapter is updated every day, the progress of the article will not be slow, and the psychological description will be considerable! As long as there are more updates, it won't be a big deal and everything will be solved! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Attribute: Male channel Point of View: Male Protagonist Emotional relationship: The male protagonist has wives, but there is no emotional line, and there is not much focus on it. Type: Multi-time travel, Jiajing period of the Ming Dynasty, seizing power, multiple parallel plots Evaluation: The latest chapter 237 has been reviewed. It is a very novel theme. The time-travel history text combines elements of royal intrigues, rivers and lakes internal skills, maritime trade, multiple time travellers, and the protagonist's own golden finger abilities. Moreover, these elements are integrated quite well. It unfolds bit by bit with the plot, and is not just a pile of settings for you. In the plot, the path that the male protagonist takes is from a fake "illegitimate son" to a prince of the royal family, and he should eventually become an emperor. There is also a plot of maritime hegemony. It has been foreshadowed now. Several time-travelers have appeared later, and they have taken different routes. It is very interesting. Overall, the plot rhythm is very tight and the absurdity (?) Drama is very strong. It made me tie the game in two days, which is quite satisfying. However, the author's writing style is quite unique. He will use a lot of psychological descriptions to reflect the different views of various forces on the same thing. Some people may not be used to it. Then there is the main plot process. The early description is very good. It is obvious that the first hundred chapters are about the identity of the protagonist. However, after becoming the prince, some new settings were introduced, which made it difficult for me to understand what the main plot is. It seemed that the perception was not as good as before, but it got better after that. The main plot now is the plot of the cult's rebellion. I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It's absolutely exquisite, and the attention to detail makes my brain almost orgasm. It's so cool. This kind of book was only available in the old version of Qidian. Com, and it had to be at least a great writer. As long as it doesn't crash or feed later, it's absolutely fine, but there are too few updates.

Not brainless and logical × Everyone is thinking about the Great Emperor √ The initial speculation has some basis. At least Grandpa Sun of Dongchang really went to Wang's tomb for on-the-spot investigation. Of course, it is still far-fetched. The following Shen Baihu was even more outrageous. He had never met the emperor or asked his superiors. Just relying on a piece of paper to directly contact the emperor, and purely making up the strange things, it can only be said that the author's big hand is working hard. The whole article is just a fantasy with a plot inside it. The protagonist doesn't really do much, and most of the text is just a fantasy describing different characters. I read in the comments that there are time travelers and ghosts in the back. I didn't see that part, so I won't comment on it. The author explained in the comment area that because the label was changed, his content was changed accordingly. I don't know much about this, but from a reader's perspective, I can only say that the author abandoned those early readers who came in because of history and martial arts, and chose future readers who like the new label "brain hole".

This book is quite interesting. The main character has the power of self-defense such as telekinesis. He wears clothes that look exactly like the Jiajing Emperor when he was young. He also pretends to be Lu Bing's half-brother with the help of a guide. A lot of people are making up his life experience and want to curry favor with him in advance. The writing is very humorous.

The front is really interesting! Hahaha, the supporting characters are so imaginative, everyone is interesting! The descriptions of male and female supporting characters are also equally treated, without any frivolous words or inexplicable admiration. Don't worry that the appearance of a female character will start to make people dream of the past. The protagonist's short-term goal is very clear, and the key point is that the main line will not deviate. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the other characters use their imaginations to cause trouble later on. [Laughing evilly] The protagonist doesn't know that the most outrageous imagination is chasing him.

It's quite interesting and worth watching. The protagonist and the supporting characters are all a bunch of brainiacs. I just don't know why the score is so low. I think it should be around eight or nine. Author, take a look at what you wrote next. Does it have anything to do with the title of the book? Don't you know what the people who click in want to see? The score has dropped to 6. I am still pouring water and have no desire to continue reading.

Originally, I read it for a long time and it was full of stream of consciousness, and the story recommendation was super slow, but the further I went, the more I couldn't stop. The male protagonist has various identities superimposed, and now he is about to grow up. It was so enjoyable to read, so I will update it quickly [laughs]

The plot is very interesting, and the plot has twists and turns. Maybe the author wants to use God's perspective too much, which makes it a bit verbose. But now there are too many people who have brains and don't use it. If they don't use it, I'm afraid there will be no market. Hahahahaha, the requirements for writing skills are quite high. Come on.

The writing is very good, the author has strong writing skills and a good grasp of the plot. Everyone in it has their own thoughts and characters. There are many inner dramas but they are not mentally retarded and can be absorbed into it.

The score is low, but the setting is still very novel. It is created based on the history of the Ming Dynasty. The protagonist's way of making money is reasonable and reasonable. Unlike some time travels, which only purify wine. To be honest, making money by selling wine is not that fast. Production and sales are restricted, and it must be spread widely enough. The protagonist's first pot of gold is to be a gangster, and the second pot of gold is the casino. Later, he makes glass products and mirrors, all relying on maritime sales. There are channels and reasonable prices, and the logic is self-consistent. The protagonist's entire survival plan is also reasonable. From the beginning of leaving a way out in Biyang to the subsequent Lin Ji industry, all explanations are also logical. When I arrived in the capital to supervise the country, I didn't do any tricks. I just practiced martial arts in the palace and didn't make any innovations... For those who traveled to the late Ming Dynasty to carry out reforms and eliminate traitors, it was a great feeling, but the internal logic did not support it. Chongzhen has a lot of trouble under his control. If he really needs another emperor, will he say that the civil servants are harming the country? The people who were loyal to the capital were actually eunuchs. The armed system was so bad, how could they change their fate temporarily? The shortcoming is that there are too many descriptions of various reasons for analysis. It is a "brain dialogue" between characters. It is necessary and needs to be explained. However, some of the protagonist's own words can really be streamlined. I skipped such descriptions in the early stage. A good novel is worthy of encouragement if its setting can be novel and unconventional, and its logic can be self-consistent. Seeing that Chen Furong wanted to be a concubine, I felt that the author's logic could not be consistent. He wrote so many self-inferences, which seemed to be logical and convincing, but it was just letting himself go. Let's not talk about Chen Furong. It is so whimsical to bypass the emperor and become a concubine. Let's just say that Chen Furong's choice to stay in the palace is a certain death situation. If she leaves the palace, she may hide among the people. Anyway, everything about her background is fake. She had the handle to restrain the queen, but the assassination of the palace maids was under her jurisdiction. This was inseparable in any case. How could the Jin Yiwei not intervene in the assassination of Jiajing? After the intervention, the whereabouts of the families of the palace maids must be suspicious. Zhang Jinlian was with her, so how could she escape from the pursuit of the Jin Yiwei. Even if Jiajing died and King Ying supervised the country, Chen Furong still could not escape the pursuit of Jin Yiwei. Once found out, she would have no way to escape in the palace. What's more, the assassination of Jiajing and the assassination of King Ying were basically carried out at the same time. This cannot be a coincidence. Chen Furong herself knew that he was one of the six masters in the sect. King Ying was not dead, and Jin Yiwei took over. Will the assassination of the emperor be isolated? It must be combined with rebellion. In this case, in addition to Duan's master and apprentice, there must be other internal agents in the palace. All the related palace maids are dead, and the remaining area is very narrow. How could you, Chen Furong, escape. Finally, King Ying is the prince who oversees the country, so he can use that little leverage to control Queen Fang, but with King Ying, there is no possibility of saving his life. Supplement: I decided to give up the book, and all the good feelings I had at the beginning were lost. Starting from Heimuya, the logic becomes more and more inconsistent. From the assassination case, to the siege of Heimuya, to Chen Furong's concubine, a series of speculations are logically problematic. I am too lazy to write a long article, so let's leave it like this...

It's okay, but there's a bit too much psychological description, and the author doesn't connect the paragraphs well, so don't use it. . . Yes, the plot is quite interesting, you can watch it It's still the same problem. There are too many psychological descriptions, and if they are too detailed and have too much nonsense, they will appear to be watery. You must learn to leave appropriate blank spaces. Just delete those dispensable words. Otherwise, it will be very tiring to read. Read more books by those great masters to learn more. The plot is okay, but the problem is the writing, which needs to be improved. By the way, is this book a historical novel or a martial arts book? It looks a bit strange. I read a few more chapters. Is this martial arts, internal strength, and Jin Yong? I thought it was purely historical. Let's read it again. I'm obsessed with history. I don't like watching martial arts.

Certified as a 20-year-old bookworm, there are few books on the Internet that balance both excitement and logic. I have been following the book since the last "Notes". It is a pity that the last book was changed a lot due to the sinking of the river in the later period. I hope this one will go well~

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can't help but comment: This is definitely a high-quality novel. The writing, setting, and plot conception are all top-notch. It is unconventional in the historical genre, with a twists and turns in the plot, adding elements of time travel, supernatural powers, martial arts, and fantasy, but it is integrated very well! First of all, the writing is very good! The writing is smooth and every chapter is addictive. It is considered a cross-border work in the historical genre, and it truly embodies the charm of cross-border. In addition to the must-write struggle for hegemony in the historical genre, various elements are also integrated seamlessly. It does not feel fragmented like other novels, such as the plot where the supporting characters are invincible but are willing to be driven by others for an inexplicable reason. Every character in this book is more three-dimensional, and the little characters also have their own calculations, not like an NPC. The protagonist's time travel is full of daydreams and whets the audience's appetite, at least it's not unreasonable; the golden finger is just right, and it's not a pile-up of settings like those of other mediocre writers. The golden fingers of other protagonists make people look like the deathbed fantasies of fat people; the martial arts elements are particularly well written, much better than other novels dedicated to martial arts. After reading this book, you will simply not be able to read other martial arts novels; This book also slaps junk historical and martial arts novels in the face. It is a rare good book for Tomato. It's just that the update is too slow. Come on, author!

The structure is clear and the logic is closed, step by step. If you look carefully, you will have a refreshing feeling. This is not just a God's perspective, but sitting and using proportions to help us drive us. I don't know what the next step will be, but the step-by-step process of hair extensions is very exciting. This is a different kind of historical novel, and I think it is well written. My son doesn't understand Japanese [cool]

How can I put it this way? The book is a good one, but it is too complicated. It has a little bit of history, martial arts, machinations, and group costumes. The character creation and relationship description are very good, and everyone's position and motivation are very clear. But first of all, it is too complicated to be accepted by a certain type of fans. Because it is too difficult to balance many things and be good at both. Not only is the author's knowledge required, but also many plot arrangements are difficult to be comprehensive. In this way, it is not as good as a single-fine article, but the problem is not big, and most readers can accept it. Secondly, It's a good thing that the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, but the inner activities and group portraits unfold too quickly, giving people a very confused feeling. It feels like after reading many chapters, either this character is being portrayed or that character is being portrayed, and there are too many foreshadowings, but I didn't feel much later. Don't remember it, it's all about the characters, and the emphasis on the secondary characters will cause the plot to unfold slowly. For a book that is still being updated, it is easy to lose track of the book because the plot cannot be developed and there are no explosive points. I believe it will be more exciting to read it after it is finished.

The plot is well written, the pacing is well controlled, the characters are quite decent, and the content just feels like a manual. The words are too dense and too insistent on explaining things thoroughly, resulting in insufficient white space. But the flaws do not hide the virtues

The writing style is great, I feel that the author is very professional, the history and language are very good, the whole world view is huge and complete, the chapters are progressive, the characters are full of wisdom, showing a real journey through time [Like][Like][Like]

After waiting for a long time, I finally waited for the author to open a new book. I support it. The author's book is particularly logical. Everyone can be self-consistent in his or her own thinking. It is a good read. Readers who like to read this kind of book are very logical and can confirm each other. Readers of this kind of wonderful book must not miss it. Support it! !

I think the author really writes by hand without using AI. The writing is also very innovative and the logic is very careful. I just want to avoid describing everyone's heart in such detail. It's a bit tiring to watch. In fact, the readers' brain-filling ability is also very strong. As long as the author writes out the point, we can automatically complete it. But this is just a small flaw, so I still hope that the data of this book will get better and better, and I will send you five-star praise.

The rhythm of the plot is superb, the characters are lively and lovable, the writing is smooth and not sluggish, and the more you watch the whole process, the more you get hooked. It is definitely a good work worthy of five-star recommendation!

So far so good, the identity of the protagonist is the biggest suspense, and the battle of wits and courage with other time-travelers is also very innovative, but there is too much imagination and the word count is too long. I hope that in the end, the author will fill in all the holes dug before and not end it badly.

The rating is too low. It comes from the author's last book. It's really good! This book is also very exciting, at least at the level of 8 points. It may not be suitable for the rhythm of Tomato. The plot has a lot of wits, but it is definitely worth reading! Come on, it's really hard to find novels that I can read. I hope I won't stop updating them.

All members have online IQs, are attentive to details, have no loopholes, are logically fluent, and have rigorous reasoning that requires careful reading. There are a lot of branch lines, and the framework is too big. I wonder if the author can handle it later. I haven't read the whole book yet, I hope it won't be too watery or unfinished in the future.

Awesome! The writing is smooth and expressive, and the narrative logic is clear. It is a rare masterpiece! [Like][Like]

The setting is very interesting and can be rounded. It depends on the landing and appearance, and it has been speculated by everyone, and various accumulations have been completed. The gold finger is also very suitable and not too big.

I've finished reading Chapter 72, it's so good! The author has a lot of research on ancient history, and the underlying logic of the protagonist's survival and living environment is very correct, making it easy for readers to understand. Especially for older people with historical knowledge and life experience who encounter "déjà vu" storylines in the book, thumbs up! It's so good. I read Chapter 178 in one go. There's another time traveler. I'm really looking forward to it.

The author has rigorous logic and cleverly describes the reasonable inferences of various people based on the known information. Together with the protagonist's own operations, they jointly compose a wonderful story that is in line with the intrigues in the Ming Dynasty. The relationship between the characters is quite confusing, but it is really exciting [Learned] I recently listened to a song called "Bai Wuyou" and it fits perfectly. If it can be adapted into a drama in the future, this song can be used as the theme song [Chigua]