After Being Severely Controlled, the Magical Girl Degenerates into a Yandere

The writing is good. I hope to maintain the current style of describing less about the life of the male protagonist. Isn't the purpose of reading this type of writing just to see the manipulating character? If the hero and heroine meet in reality before the end of the article, then what will we see?

The writing is okay and logical and self-consistent. But I think that even if the protagonist does not control the heroine, it is best to have a certain ability to protect himself. For example, although he cannot transform, he will inherit a certain amount of power, otherwise the future may collapse. However, the number of words is still small, so maybe the author will have a certain amount of thinking.

Are you sure this is really a magical girl and not a layer of extraordinary resurrection?

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The writing is okay, although the daily life is a bit verbose, but it can still be read under the driving force of the plot. Some minor shortcomings can be ignored. As a behind-the-scenes article of the game, I still hope to reflect the player's degree of freedom, such as buying a car, buying a house, and developing an organization. This is very good. Next, you can use the commander mode game to command believers to fight, recover talents, etc. To expand the gameplay... Looking forward to the performance

I finished reading it in one sitting What can I say about this novel? Overall, it is pretty good at least in Tomato. It has three golden chapters and has certain outstanding points in the early stages, which is enough to attract people. It's just a bit of a headline. I can't see where the "yandere" Yi Xiaoli is who is being manipulated, but I do see a little bit of Rococo. The subsequent plot is boring due to a certain lack of writing skills, but since they are all tomatoes, I don't want to find too many faults. The four stars have shown my attitude.

When will the protagonist realize that this is not a game? I'm really afraid that Xiaoli will be broken down by him.

Although there are many typos and omissions, the subject matter is not the freshest. But the fact that it can read files is quite impeccable! But as for the pitfalls of what this game is all about... (This does not seem to be important)

The full text is about a useless magical girl who was controlled by someone and gradually became a god, from the county town to the whole country to the world, and then to explore the secrets behind the universe. After being abandoned, she became a god and became a god. After completing her goal, she went to the real world and then the protagonist was fucked. The details of the content are logical. At least it is not too poisonous. The emotional shaping of the character is reasonable but It is a non-traditional magical girl who transforms into a monster and fights monsters. The author originally intended to write it this way, but the plot after rescuing the elves from the club test is close to # Closed-loop extraterrestrial devil enters the magic girl's start as a god and human body. Modern high martial arts magic becomes a god record#, but there are many things in the later part that are not explained clearly, such as why Tongji appears? What is the real agent of this game, and why must it be the male protagonist? What will be the position of the heroine after the game is released? The rest of the plot is really fast, and some of the character descriptions are weird. Also, real-life movies should be more descriptive, at least just describing interesting things in life. After all, I know that it is difficult to come back to some aspects, such as the fact that the female protagonist thinks the male protagonist is a god but he is now an ordinary person, but I still want to see more interactive descriptions of real life. Generally speaking, it is a relatively good modern magic practice article, but because the setting is a modern reality film, it is basically useless. However, if you just watch it as an adventure, it can also be viewed as a magical way to break destiny. ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა (Only my personal opinion)

I'm not bragging, but the people here are all magnificent, admired by thousands of people, unmatched by anyone, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, ghost-backed magical work, vibrating. Deaf and enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, rains and dews on the common people, and is covered by thousands of miles, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, heroic and majestic, high-rise, benevolent and moral, suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs Begonia, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtues, you have a pure heart, you have a mountain view, you have high feelings, you have a lot of virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you are bright and virtuous, you have a good mind and a good heart, you have a noble heart, and you have ambitions. Scholars and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, in their prime, romantic figures, flying dragons and phoenixes, unparalleled in the world, unparalleled heroes, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, scholars with cranes singing, one-of-a-kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan jade, unparalleled.

The story probably goes in the following ways: 1: The protagonist is with the real-life heroine, and the game heroine becomes a god. 2: The game heroine is with the protagonist, but the real heroine loses. 3: The game heroine and the real heroine start a harem with the protagonist. 4: The female supporting characters are all broken up by the female protagonist, and the female protagonist of the game starts a battle for the female protagonist with the female supporting characters, causing a huge fight, and eventually the whole world collapses. 5. The male protagonist takes in all the women. 6: It feels like the author mixed up my 123 endings. The heroine becomes a god and has a harem with the protagonist [Thinking] I guessed it right, right?

The plot and setting are quite interesting! Mainly to improve points! If there are more daily routines in reality, there are still less real-life plots if there are emotional lines or the game can interact, but it still feels like there is less of this kind of plot! It's good when it comes to plot battles, but the daily routine is too long-winded. It's better to just follow the game routine, because it can also advance the plot and intersperse some useless daily routines in reality!

This novel is quite interesting. It should be considered good in Tomato.

Not bad, I stayed up late to finish it. I haven't seen this kind of style similar to Nikkei in a long time. It's very imaginative and the ending is a bit fast but not unfinished. I don't know if the author has played Eternal Seven Days City. I feel like you will like this game [Eating Melon] and it fits the theme of your writing very well.

Penguin Jacket, good fight. It ended in a hurry, and then I got lunch for everyone, and I didn't write anything in the end.

The author please send me the cover

Full marks, it's so fun. I'll give it a try.

Well written, when can the heroine be with the hero?

Pretty good, but I need to explain something No yandere, no yandere, no yandere (

I want to see the protagonist use operations to crush those so-called blood children, witches, etc. Like Red Wolf Yuantong 1V8, it is like a god coming to the world. @ Angry Xiu Gou 😡

Can the author publish a continuation of the book? I feel that Shura Field at the end is also very interesting, but I feel that the ending is too hasty. Overall, this book is very well written.

It's pretty good. Although I have a premonition that it will end when I break through the dimension and find the protagonist, I still hope there will be more scenes afterward.

Different, unique

After reading the existing chapters, it was surprisingly good. If you are short on books, you can read it.

I just like this kind of incredible book where the players behind the scenes pretend to be pigs and eat tigers.

It's unexpectedly good-looking. I hope the author can work hard and stop being a eunuch again.

Okay, at least it's fun to watch [Like] [Admiration] It's okay, but the ending is a bit sloppy. It doesn't focus on describing the life after the yandere. It's hard to calm down. It's hard to calm down.

It's pretty good-looking, but when I saw the place where I picked up my sister, it became boring [Chigua]

Five-star praise, very beautiful. This score is really low. The cool writing does not overwhelm the combat power. All the reviews are four to five stars. What is a score of 6?

Pretty good This book should start from the story of the man who manipulated the female swordsman to beat the master, the literary figure got inspired