After Collecting the Twelve Talismans in the Bear, I Want to Lie Down

After reading a few chapters, the writing is still very good, but I can't accept two points. One is the first-person perspective. I am used to the third-person perspective and feel uncomfortable in the first-person perspective. The other is that the reward charm is not integrated into the body, but a physical charm given to me. This kind of charm is very insecure and can be easily snatched away. Anyway, come on, author!

The content is not bad, but the first-person perspective is uncomfortable to watch.

It looks good, but let me change it to the third person. And if you use that talisman, shouldn't it be integrated into your body? If you leave it outside, it will be easy for others to get it. Even if you don't integrate it into your body, you should add it to your leisure system. If the charm is taken away, you can retrieve it with one click. Sorry, I didn't read the next few chapters.

As for this novel, I give it a five-star rating because it is a novel about memories and a novel about childhood. It is full of a sense of going back to the past, just like when I was a child, sitting next to the TV eating ice cream or watermelon, watching the bears and laughing.

I think it's good, because the examples are very rich, and they are connected to multiple entertainment settings, usually based on the main protagonist's junior high school adventures, and some real settings. Some of them have also been changed. The author still has some imagination. I hope to do more, but it will be a bit slow.

Dear book friends, I sincerely recommend this book to you. The way it opens may make you a little unaccustomed to reading it for the first time, but as long as you get through the short transition at the beginning, it is really very small. The subsequent content and plot are particularly brilliant. I really implore you to support it when you have time. Please help the author again. I really don't want this book to disappear. It's rare to see some good books about bears infested in such a long time.

It's good, but sometimes the first-person perspective feels weird [thoughts]

In this book, Naya may have appeared relatively late. There may be many parts that are not understandable in the first person, but she has a strong sense of immersion. It is not a simple story telling, and the characters are all consistent. I have never seen Naya appear like that. I hope that I can write as well as Naya.

I just saw that the author could give himself a five-star rating

This book perfectly fulfilled some of my fantasies. I feel that the first person before the end of the fantasy space is the most interesting, but the later ones feel a bit lacking in flavor. The sense of immersion in the first part is too strong. Also, Naya is the best as the heroine. She is my favorite female character after watching Bears for so long.

Thank you, the author. This novel is very meaningful to me [I almost cried] Come on, I hope you will perform well in the future [Like]

It's a good casual novel.

I am a newbie writing a book, but I can barely read it and give it 4 stars. Please work hard.

This book seems to have a female protagonist

It's good-looking and worth recommending, but the author updates too little. Beautiful and worth recommending, but the author is slow to update

It's pretty good. I felt pretty good when I saw it before. Personally, I feel pretty good after seeing it now, and there's nothing wrong with it.

Although it's in the first person, it's so cool [laughs]

You must keep writing it, the big brother who writes books [][] A great fanfic that fits my idea of casual fiction.

It looks okay, but the constant switching between the first person and the third person affects the perception a bit, and it feels weird when listening to the book [face covering]

It's very beautifully written! [Eat melon]

I personally think it's very beautiful, I recommend it. I have now seen Fantasy Space. Well, now that I have seen it, I find that the protagonist has a problem. He does everything carelessly. This makes me uncomfortable to watch, but it is still very interesting.

It's okay, I hope it can be more daily

Great, very relaxing and healing

Full of childhood memories

Looking back on my childhood, please help me see

You must keep writing [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart]

By which chapter can I collect all 12 spells?

It's very good, but why hasn't the heroine appeared yet? ? ? ? ?

It's okay, but it feels a bit like writing an essay

Come on, keep following the author and don't stop updating.