Sword Repair *********

It's beautiful and well-written, and it has a different feeling from the other book where Bibi Dong is redeemed at the final battle point. The author can write another time-travel novel to redeem Bibi Dong as a girl or as a child. She will not be deceived by Yu Xiaogang for spiritual sustenance due to lack of love and care due to environmental pressure. She will not go through Qianxun's Secret Room Douluo, and she will not lead other female characters to be doted on by stinky men [Thinking]

It's okay. The focus is on character portrayal. There is basically no plot. It just keeps building momentum around a big battle. It makes the rest of it a bit tired and procrastinating. It gives people the feeling that they haven't thought about how to write it later. But now that the fight has finally started, let's watch the follow-up plot.

It's well written and the setting is delicious. However, in some places, the wordy words are repeated over and over again, which affects reading.

It's beautiful. It's better to move the water of a thousand rivers than to disturb Taoist people's hearts. This process is the tension.

It's very beautiful. Come on, please don't deceive people.