Jianlai************

I really like the description of Qu Qingning protecting Cui Dongshan when he was seriously injured, and the detailed description of the male and female protagonists caring about each other step by step. It is really poignant, and it fulfilled my fantasy about Cui Dongshan's other half. Such a resourceful and thoughtful genius boy, what kind of girl should he like? It turned out to be a girl who is sincere and kind, with a mind as clear as water, and a charming girl. Although the heroine is written too purely, she is a bit silly. Overall very good. But why there are only 4 stars? Because "He seems to have said something and yet seems to have said nothing" and "He has done something yet seems to have done nothing" are too many, too many! There is also the word "like", which appears too frequently. There are at most 5 words in a page. It can be replaced by such as, if, like... Of course, I am not teaching the author to do things. The author's writing style is very good, but I really can't understand this kind of low-level mistake. This way of writing is very interesting at first glance and fits Cui Dongshan's character, but after reading more, it becomes...

This is the first book by Cui Dongshan that I saw. I didn't want to click on it at first, but after reading a few chapters it became more and more interesting. I hope the author will update it soon [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love]

It's very interesting. There are really few books written by Cui Dongshan!

It's really beautiful and feels like a pull. I'd like to thank you for that.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! I will keep following the updates... The character design is not OOC! ! ! Excellent article! 😋

The author is very [aggrieved] It looks good. I just need more updates.

It looks good. It looks so comfortable. The water flows smoothly. The baby girl is so cute.

It's really good-looking, and the author's writing is also good. I knew that when Qing Ning was practicing Wuwei Avenue, the big white goose kept testing Qing Ning, and when she didn't care about her, my lips never dropped. I'm looking forward to the development of the plot later. The author greatly cheers for the update [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's so awesome [sending my heart] it fits the image of Cui Dongshan in my mind [shy]

First of all, I think the image of the male protagonist is well established, and there is no sense of violation with the original text. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is also very natural, and it fits the style of the original text. It is very natural, and I can't help but make my aunt laugh. Secondly, I might find it a bit incoherent. In the original Sword Comes, I only saw Chen Ping'an finding where Ning Yao gave away the scabbard, so I may still have an impression of things that were not explained in the previous chapters of this article, and can also relate to the plot. I have no impression of the subsequent plot or have never read it. When I look at some of the plots and the characters that suddenly jump out of the book, I feel that it is very abrupt, and I want to follow the plot of the original text. The plot is quite jumpy and inconsistent. This book is suitable for fans of Jianlai, but for the author, if he only targets Jianlai's fans who are interested in fan fiction, there will definitely be relatively few. I hope that the author can write a fanfic that is an independent novel about Dongshan and the heroine. For other fans who have not read Jianlai, they can read it coherently without any plot obstacles. Generally speaking, just watching the interaction between Dongshan and the heroine is quite sweet. Moreover, Dongshan's character has not changed and there is no sense of violation.

It is written in large letters with great feeling, and the flow is smooth and tense. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good and he carefully depicts the characters. If you have not watched the anime, it will not affect your reading of this book. If you like Cui Dongshan, you can buy this book. The emotional lines are smooth. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

Why is it gone? [Crying] [Crying] I want to save a few more chapters to read next month [Crying] Can we see the story of Cui Dongshan and Qing Ning again? [Crying][Crying] It's really beautiful

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking.

Looks good! Author: As long as you are not banned, I don't ask for anything else! You are the one who found the sword in Tomato novels that suits me so well! Don't be blocked! Come on!

It's very beautiful and the author writes it very well [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is really great! Come on come on

It's really beautiful, that pulling feeling, that flowing emotion. Looking forward to the next development of the plot, I will keep following it

Yes, baby, that's what it says [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Why are you getting more and more AI? [Fear][Fear][Fear] But I do have a good grasp of the character.

Looks good, the style is so fresh

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's so well written, the author must not get tired or rest [laughter]

It looks good. I recommend it.

The writing is super delicate! ! ! Highly recommended! !

Full marks. It's huge and beautiful. I hope the author can write 100 chapters a day, hahaha.

Author, please come on [laughs][laughs]

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

Really beautiful

Just this delicate feeling is so refreshing

It's so beautiful that it's worth it.

It's good to watch. It would be better if there were more female protagonists in the back~