Above the Dust-Sealed World

After reading more than 70 chapters, my biggest feeling is that if this book is refined, it will definitely be a good book, and the subject matter is quite interesting. But the shortcomings are also obvious: first, I seriously doubt that the author has put all the outlines, drafts, etc., And there are many repeated fragments that seem to be described from different perspectives; second, I feel that tolerance is not about being submissive when encountering bullying, but a bit like taking advantage of others. For the protagonist, her behavior style should be compromised at best. After all, a normal person should not cause trouble but is not afraid of it. In the fruit stall scene, the protagonist can use illusions, memory modification, invisibility, teleportation, and many other methods to solve the problem; there is also Lingji Pavilion, a large organization, and information on major events should not be so closed and should not know everything.

Why do I always repeat what I said before and then later, which makes me feel bad after reading it. If I have the guts, I will read it again on the repeater [laughs awkwardly] Author, are you forgetful? I keep repeating a plot, and I see that there is no exciting plot now, and I am always in a fish farming state, which is not very interesting [Thoughts]