Siheyuan + Space + Low Hostility + Warmth + Twenty Years of Bookworms Have Tried the Poison
, The 20-year-old bookworm has tried the poison, so you can buy it with confidence. If there are good-looking courtyard houses, you can recommend them. What is a good book? Personally I think it can make you linger and keep reading.
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The previous chapter was good. When I saw Chapter 27, Dajiang entered the factory, why did he enter it again? Changed author? Or did you switch to AI writing? The golden ten chapters. After more than twenty chapters, I started to write articles that were confusing, repeated plots, and repeated verbatim. Such a good idea, I cherished it very much. After reading more than ten chapters, I thought I had discovered a good book, and insisted on reading to chapter thirty-seven. As a thirty-year-old reader, I admit that I was deceived by the first few chapters.
The writing is a bit messy, but the combination of ideas is still good.
Didn't Dajiang already enter the factory earlier? It was also written that he entered the factory
The background character setting is very novel, and the old Orion's dexterity and wisdom at the beginning are well depicted. I like it very much. But there are also many flaws. Starting from Chapter 25, the character names are always wrong, which greatly affects the reading experience. The boss, Dajiang Mingming, had already become a quality inspector, and later took the blacksmith exam. There are a lot of questions, but this theme setting is very attractive to me, so I'll keep reading. Get through the chaos of chapters 25 to 35, ignore some shortcomings, and the rest will be fine.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking