Wandering in the United States, He Took in White Sisters at the Beginning

Urban plus genre mystery, a new extraordinary path? The protagonist and the women he accepts will be on the forgotten path, and others are on the regular path. The paths that have already appeared are: regular: athletes, doctors, killers, priests, nobles, politicians, and businessmen. The protagonist is a beast master. The first beast is a knight king, the second beast is a priest, and after being conquered, he may turn into a human saint, and the third beast is a fallen angel. Star Fury Snow Elf. The speed of the car is a bit fast, and it is better to catch up. Forget it if you are a bookkeeper. If you go around the small dark room, it will not be smooth.

Okay, okay, okay, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good [shy] Author, you really don't care about the readers' feelings when you write the plot?

The author may really like Dumao [smile] Personally, it seems that the author has a good mix of social background and extraordinary route, and I am still looking forward to the follow-up development. The author's thoughts reflect the author's level

I feel that Jiang, the heroine, wastes too much pen and ink, and has too much emotional foreshadowing. The main palace does not have as much as her, so I will make a bold guess, is the author the same as Jiang Nan? Can't you love your senior sister? Hahahaha, I'm just kidding, the author should update it soon, I'll feel itchy if I don't read it for a day, and I won't be itchy for a whole day after reading it [laughs][shy]

Chapter 24: Show me your passion. Will you build power in the future? No, the actual four stars are higher. The protagonist talks so much about justice, but what he does is too divisive. Since Tiantian Zhengengeng is mainly written in the United States, let's not mention Dongda. On the one hand, it is easy to be blocked. On the other hand, the writing is not good, and the writing is very licking, just like deus ex machina.

It's not bad to support it. It's a pity that there are toys, which I don't really like

It's okay to chase your wife, but if it goes to the crematorium, I'll give you a 7-star plus report. Jiang's portrayal is okay, although it's not vivid but tangible, but it doesn't make Shuangwen alienated into that kind of work. It's still fun now, but it seems that there is a tendency to be unhappy [laughs] People A little kind, with a bottom line, loyal, smart and a little misunderstood, perseverant, able to endure hardships, able to persevere, tangible, but they all exist as a subsidiary body of the protagonist and have no independence. It should be said that apart from the protagonist, they have no independence, so they can be killed and played. 666, It feels too cruel

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel it's okay. In the first few chapters, some people thought the protagonist was a turtle man because they couldn't get the Huashan School's secret skill, the Dragon Claw Hand. [Sneaky laugh]

I have finished reading Chapter 78. It borrows part of the Mystery Lord. The concept is good, but it is still lacking in the depth of the characters, but it is good for a new author. But in some aspects, it still cannot get rid of its bad habits. Some sequences in the book are called forgotten sequences. Judging from the current performance, they are quite strong, but since they are strong, why are they left behind? History is on the rise, and only the weak and inconvenient are abandoned. I hope this hole can be filled in the future. The quality of the whole book is pretty good. There is nothing irritating except for this missing sequence. You can take a look at it.

This beginning gave me the feeling of Yakuza 7 and 8, the various professions and Kasuga Ichiban's Brave Bat.

It looks good, although it's a bit confusing, but it's still in line with current events, haha

It's quite cozy, much better than ordinary fast food. Eat deliciously

Yes, it's a very unique idea, there's nothing sinister about it, and the writing is pretty fluent.

Even if you don't read current affairs, you probably won't be able to understand it, but it's really amazing to understand it.

Okay, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on Jiang Ran has been pulling for so long, wanting both "pure love" and "degraded training". In Chapter 106, he was misunderstood and decided to choose a fallen angel. The chapter commented that he would pursue his wife after he found out the truth, and it felt like he was pulling again. The artistic content was too high and I couldn't appreciate it, so I withdrew it.

It's okay. I originally thought it was a one-man-only invincible novel. After reading it, I found that the world set in this novel is quite deep. It's just that the literary youth disease has become a bit serious recently.

The most interesting sequence I have read so far, a novel that combines beast control and harem, and it is a perfect integration of logic and self-consistency. Just when will you go to the giantess to satisfy the special xp?

Okay, but why did you change the title of the book?

The materials produced in small workshops are fierce [shy][shy]

Come on, write about the emperor's uncle's big brother

I admire the author's imagination very much. At the beginning, I thought it was just a combination of beast control and killing line, but it turns out that there is a transcendent path later. Can the pace be faster? It's really not good enough.

Let me put it bluntly, it is simply the best among tomatoes. Not much to say, time will prove it. I'm at a loss. Although I think it's pretty good-looking, why do you want to write the male protagonist as a person who is both bad and bad, good and good, and I don't understand? It looks so uncomfortable. Forget it, let's just make do with it.

The writing is not bad. Come on, author, don't be too similar.

I want to see Jiang r severely ed. The harem can't be all bright and pure. Let's have some fallen angels or something. Jiang Shi really writes it so well [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

Generally speaking, the fun and novelty are online. Although the rhythm control is lacking, the potential is good.

I just want to ask where I can find the deleted parts.

It can be seen that the author typed it by hand, not AI.

Well enough. I just want to collect less "Like That Russian One" from now on

Full of faints, a hundred faints, so worthy, fried chicken so worthy

Why are my saved book reviews gone? ! ! Come on, good luck