Honkai Impact: If You Work Hard, You Will Become Yaoguang's Toy

The author should have used AI assistance. After reading a few chapters, the words that AI likes to use appear frequently, such as "looked for two seconds" and "paused". I personally cannot accept it. It is very awkward to read, but there are not many with the same theme. I will give you 4 stars to encourage you. All in all, it smells like bean buns, but that's what the tomato environment is like. The writer's assistant comes with its own AI. Overall, this book is okay. If you're interested, you can read it.

I will use the most truthful and objective version. . First of all, in terms of the subject matter of this book, the only other one in Tomatoes is Bai Qianqu. As long as the author keeps writing it, he will definitely get a 9.2 Secondly, the author has a good grasp of the overall rhythm of the article, very, very well. Whether it is the emotional line or the career line, there is no so-called "high-energy" Shura field throughout the whole process, so that the article does not highlight the key points, but depicts the highlights in the ordinary and comfortable daily life; there is no pure brainless cool article that soars into the sky, which makes it a pity to abandon it after eating it. Instead, it has three years of unsystematic accumulation and a logical career curve. Then there is the important aspect of character design in fan fiction. Heita is still a genius, but she is no longer a genius who walks among the stars in the game. She has become a gold medal genius writer. She has not experienced aging in the game, has no achievements that can change history, and lacks some "proud capital" in her superficial image, but her inner self has not changed. She is still a proud girl, with high attack and low defense, and she will maintain the image of a boyfriend in the eyes of her friends. She is still the same Heita, without OOC, including other character images. I would also like to mention here that the male protagonist is neither a stallion nor a pure piece of wood. Overall, this book gave me a very comfortable feeling. I also hope that the author's creative level and platform data will get better and better and reach a higher level. Attached: Heita stocks must win

What should I say? I haven't found this kind of subject matter for a long time. The last one was Bai Qianqu by Scrambled Eggs @ Scrambled Eggs World No. 1 [Face covering]. But this guy got addicted to asking for leave and stopped updating for a long time. The data of the later books was gone, so no one read it, and it was useless to update more. Moreover, he updated very little. One chapter is only 1,000 words, so the author must not be like this guy. It is not easy to find a book that I am interested in.

Well, as someone who loves to read harem stories, the writing is pretty good. It's been a long time since I've read a Bengtie novel in one go. Although there are only a few in total, there are many themes about Bengtie. This is my first time reading such an urban theme. Keep up the good work! It will get better. I remember I had the white one last time.

It didn't feel like a harem, but rather like a stock trading article. Later I saw that if it was really a stock trading article, it would pull the various emotions of the characters and tease me. Then I will give my cordial greetings with the author himself as the origin and the radius of 18 generations. This is not a stock trading article. After reading it, it is about two heroines, Heita and Yaoguang.

It is very beautiful, the plot is ordinary, and it is very warm. There is one shortcoming, which is very serious. Is it the author, can you update 99 chapters every day? Not enough.

Very pretty, okay! ! ! !

It's a daily fanfic. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm, and the characters are also very realistic. There is no OOC, and the emotional lines are also in place. I hope to see the author update it soon. The big sister settings of Heita and Yaoguang are still too beautiful [crying]

I finally saw this kind of subject again, give it a five-star support [please update]

Not enough to eat, teacher, I'm going to starve to death

Very nice, support it with five stars

I feel very comfortable now

It's still pretty good, just too little.

There are not many texts about arrogance, embarrassment, and urban collapse. This one can be considered as fine chaff. The description of the emotional line makes people look very comfortable. Shura Field looks cool. Is this book about stock trading or multiple women? I want to know [Thinking]

Yeah, that's good. The relationship line and career line are about 7:3. Describes more of the trivial things in life

Black tower candy and Yaoguang candy are very sweet and bursting👍🏻

Everyone can write it, but the emotional line of this book is definitely ranked in the top three among similar books.

It's nice to read, the writing is very good, and it's very comfortable to read. Needless to say, it's really good-looking, the emotions are dealt with smoothly, and the details of daily life are complete and complete. The most important thing is that the character settings suit me, and there is no one who can reward me for being certified by a great person. When I wake up this morning, I am no longer on the list, even though I am a free prostitute [laughter]

It's okay, but I'm still not used to watching this type of thing, especially when I see the lyrics and the name of the song, it's hard, and when I've heard it, it's even harder [face covering]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Worth recommending, very nice [eating melon]

Don't often give up a lot of great things because of other people's comments. After all, "When you cry because you missed the sun, you will also miss the stars."

After seeing so much shit, I finally got the guarantee.

It's very well written, why don't you update it more?

It's very well written, and there's nothing outrageous about it.

I read it in one go, it was really well written.

Personally, I think it's very good. The author has good taste. As a black tower and Yao Guang double chef, I agree.

This is a pretty good slow read. It's just that the author is a bit slow in updating. There are only one or two updates a day, which may be related to the quality of polished works.

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