Mortals Cultivating Immortality: Start Cultivating Immortality Thirty Years After Death!

The writing is good, the storyline is exciting and creative, I love reading it. It looks really good from the front. The dead people crawl out to practice, which is very creative. I also especially like the Zhengzhen disciple of Danzong, his character is really well written. But after leaving the sect, it felt like someone else had written it. There are more and more poisonous points, and the writing becomes more and more messy and incomprehensible. There is a lot of information that the protagonist does not say, so others know what he does. The logic doesn't make sense. I gave it up and stopped reading.

Compact version of the story one (general heartfelt short review) The writing is delicate and warm, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is interlocking without deliberately piling up bloody plots. The structure of the whole work is complete, the foreshadowing echoes before and after, the growth trajectory of the characters is real and natural, and the three views are correct and not distorted. The plot advances well-founded, with both ups and downs to watch and touching details. Aside from its entertainment attributes, it also has ideological value and is worth reading over and over again.

The subject matter is very attractive, and the reading is smooth and enjoyable. I read dozens of chapters in one go.

The writing is fairly fluent, the world creation is reasonable, and the contradictions and conflicts are clear. However, the plot design is a bit childish and the correlation is light. To give it an above-average rating is not in vain for the author's hard work.

The theme is interesting, and it is acceptable as a story about cultivating immortals. The descriptions of machinations and morality are pretty good. But as long as she is a woman, she likes the male protagonist. It is the woman who takes the initiative and the man who is passive, and she also improves her cultivation level; she passively accepts the great opportunities (such as the plot where the beast core is directly integrated into the male protagonist)... You get a big deal for nothing but look innocent, but in fact it is you who benefits. This is what happens with male videos.

Read twenty chapters! The process of an old man cultivating, the plot is not dragging, and you can watch it! Sorry, please comment after listening [Like][OK]

It's very interesting. I like this kind of refreshing story about going from mortal to holy step by step, 👍

It's quite good, the start is fresh and attractive, the content is reasonable with some plug-ins, and the operation is standardized, and the operation is easy to upgrade later.

Very exciting, worth watching, highly recommended! Hahahahahahahahaha, I'm so happy

The writing is good and the storyline is good. I originally wanted to give it a 5, but I hope it won't be unfinished. I'm curious about the protagonist's development line. It's already 700,000 words long. Ye Changsheng is still in the foundation-building stage. When will he reach the golden elixir stage, the Yuan Ying stage, and the god transformation stage? It's been a long time. I hope the author will update it quickly. I want to read it. I want to read it.

The setting is very novel, that is, can the female immortal cultivators here be as interested in the protagonist as if they have never seen a male before?

The content of the story is ups and downs and exciting. The author has just the right grasp of the rhythm of the story, which is progressive, interlocking and fascinating. Although the content and details of the story are not full and perfect, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and it is a rare masterpiece! Recommended reading!

I was also wondering why the rating was so low. It turned out to be a new book. After reading it for a while, I found that it was okay. I would like to encourage you first and hope it doesn't end badly. The last one I supported so much was the family sacred tree, but now it's much better.

A good book, worth reading

The writing is very good, I read a lot in one sitting!

The plot rhythm of ju'qing is simple and natural, and the description is delicate, making people feel as if they are actually there!

It's very beautiful. I recommend everyone to watch it together.

The story is pleasant and the characters are delicate. It is worth recommending! Now he is 50 years old, and now he is 30 years old. His face is full of ravines and wrinkles. I don't know what the author is thinking.

It's so good that I stayed up late to watch it until 2 o'clock. Come on, author! You can't give me a bad ending to this book [Adoration]

I have seen a beauty turn into a skull, and I have seen bones attract a beauty for the first time. The author's circuit is really novel [Like][Like][Like]

It's really well written, with rigorous conception and fluent language. It's a masterpiece.

The content is novel and the storyline is fascinating

There are foreshadowings in Chapters 1 and 2, and the chapters are well connected and the writing details are very good. So far, it looks good! The author is great, remember to write with your spiritual consciousness, don't be too exaggerated, use good beads to fill in the holes!

After reading it, I found it really interesting. The author's writing style is slowly improving. It's a great work.

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The structure is clear and creative. Lai

It seems like a good novel, so keep reading.

It's very good. I think it's very good. [Why] isn't it popular? And the author will update soon! ! [Sending Hearts]

Super beautiful, five-star rating and 9 points upwards

This book is as beautiful as the cornucopia. It is a passionate book worthy of being sought after and recommended by lovers of cultivating immortals.