A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Began Cultivating Thirty Years After My Death!

The writing is good, the storyline is exciting and creative, I love reading it. It looks really good from the front. The dead people crawl out to practice, which is very creative. I also especially like the Zhengzhen disciple of Danzong, his character is really well written. But after leaving the sect, it felt like someone else had written it. There are more and more poisonous points, and the writing becomes more and more messy and incomprehensible. There is a lot of information that the protagonist does not say, so others know what he does. The logic doesn't make sense. I gave it up and stopped reading.

The subject matter is very attractive, and the reading is smooth and enjoyable. I read dozens of chapters in one go.

The theme is interesting, and it is acceptable as a story about cultivating immortals. The descriptions of machinations and morality are pretty good. But as long as she is a woman, she likes the male protagonist. It is the woman who takes the initiative and the man who is passive. She also improves her cultivation level because of it; she passively accepts the great opportunities (such as the plot where the beast core is directly integrated into the male protagonist)... You get a big deal for nothing but look innocent, but in fact it is you who benefits. This is what happens with male videos.

Compact version of the story one (general heartfelt short review) The writing is delicate and warm, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is interlocking without deliberately piling up bloody plots. The structure of the whole work is complete, the foreshadowing echoes before and after, the growth trajectory of the characters is real and natural, and the three views are correct and not distorted. The plot advances well-founded, with both ups and downs to watch and touching details. Aside from its entertainment attributes, it also has ideological value and is worth reading over and over again.

The writing is fairly fluent, the world creation is reasonable, and the contradictions and conflicts are clear. However, the plot design is a bit childish and the correlation is light. To give it an above-average rating is not in vain for the author's hard work.

It's very interesting. I like this kind of refreshing story about going from mortal to holy step by step, 👍

Read twenty chapters! The process of an old man cultivating, the plot is not dragging, and you can watch it! Sorry, please comment after listening 👍[OK]

The setting is very novel, that is, can the female immortal cultivators here be as interested in the protagonist as if they have never seen a male before?

It's quite good, the start is fresh and attractive, the content is reasonable with some plug-ins, and the operation is standardized, and the operation is easy to upgrade later.

The content of the story is ups and downs and exciting. The author has just the right grasp of the rhythm of the story, which is progressive, interlocking and fascinating. Although the content and details of the story are not full and perfect, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and it is a rare masterpiece! Recommended reading!