Aether's Journey Through the City of Teyvat

Not bad, the only thing that is a bit watery is the poetry, the characters, are they necessary? It's like we don't know what his image is like when we read the fic, so at worst we can just post a picture. It's best to accept them all 🤦 Fischer wants to accept them, Mona also [laughs evilly] and Ruonawa! 😏 [Admiration] There are also Raiden Movie and Raiden Shin, Yae Shenzi, and Xiaomiya! Kamisato Ayaka, Kuki Shinobu! Kujo Sora, Clolinde [Adore] Chiori [Adore] Farushan [Adore], Nelu, Desia and Nico [Adore] [Sneaky smile] Lisa, don't forget, yes, I almost forgot, there is also Noel 🤦 and Site Lali, Carnegie, Columbia, Valesa, Silk, Icofi, Lynette 🥰, Arecino and Doll 🥰 As for what I didn't say, you said those characters will be accepted, so I won't write about Fonina. It's best to accept them.

Shaoliu: It's very beautiful, the writing is very delicate and just right (and I'm afraid the author has not written any Journey to the West, the rhymed poems are so wonderful, I love reading 🤔) Great support to the author ^0^~[Top post] To be honest, it's really fun to watch [top post] but I'm not willing to have just a few brains 🤭🤭🤭

I have to say, it's really good to eat on an empty stomach!

I hope it won't be delayed

Not bad, hope to continue writing

Good quality, worthy of praise