No golden fingers, no time travel, no cheats, no conquering of many Pokémon, just the counterattack of a low-level Pokémon without even a proper name.
Reader comments
Dude, the biggest taboo in writing fan fiction is OOC, and you've already committed this. After all, the Zhenxin Town Alliance will not allow such a thing as a slum to exist where Dr. Oak lives. I can understand that you want to make the Pokémon world a reality, but there is no denying that the Pokémon world is a utopia.
Also, the second setting is too unrealistic. You can't let Japanese people have Chinese surnames.
I would like to advise you that this book needs to be overhauled to change some OOC places, or you can try to write about the integration of the Pokémon world and reality. After all, if this is the case, your novel only needs to change a small part.
Dude, the biggest taboo in writing fan fiction is OOC, and you've already committed this. After all, the Zhenxin Town Alliance will not allow such a thing as a slum to exist where Dr. Oak lives. I can understand that you want to make the Pokémon world a reality, but there is no denying that the Pokémon world is a utopia. Also, the second setting is too unrealistic. You can't let Japanese people have Chinese surnames. I would like to advise you that this book needs to be overhauled to change some OOC places, or you can try to write about the integration of the Pokémon world and reality. After all, if this is the case, your novel only needs to change a small part.