After Slaying My Disciple to Prove the Way, I Fell Flat on My Face

The psychological portrayal of the characters in this book is generally good, with human contradictions, stubbornness, sensibility... Etc. It is not a cookie-cutter cool novel or a sadistic novel. The protagonist is not a black and white one-sided character. The supporting characters also have their own thoughts and considerations. They are not "cannon fodder" who simply serve the protagonist. They are vivid because of their complexity. I like the story of the second unit the most. There is nothing wrong with everyone's point of view, it just depends on what choice they made in the end. Some people may think that the protagonist of this book progresses too slowly, has a mouth but does not speak, and does not explain conflicts. But I want to say that most of the time, relationships are not mutually understood after being talked about. Everyone is just trying their best to care for and love others in their own way. It will be a long time, I hope we can all give each other some time. (A little suggestion can be deleted if it strikes a chord.) You can lay some foreshadowing before the story happens. For example, in the second unit of the story, a lot of truth is explained at the end, which makes the protagonist feel a little confused when exploring. Also, although the psychological activities of the protagonist are quite sufficient, they are sometimes too cumbersome and often take up to two pages to write. In terms of writing, I feel that the author has improved and it is getting better and better as I read it. Overall, it's a minor problem. I really like the subject matter and the characters, which are rare in Tomatoes. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better and be happy every day

The author's writing is so sacred. I haven't seen such a pure and non-tacky novel in a long time. Come on, gold will always shine. This book is so good that it will become popular sooner or later.

Who knows so many books about cultivating immortals, and finally read one that is normal 😭 It has a kind-hearted and righteous protagonist. After the protagonist died and escaped, the apprentice did not turn into a black man, and he did not become a demon because of love, hatred, and failure. Who knows that both protagonists are righteous and have a sense of redemption!! The disciples of each sect also work together to fight without too much intrigue and calculation (this is the real disciple of the immortal sect). Hundreds and thousands of people are not killed at every turn, and human lives are finally not cut off randomly like leeks. I haven't finished it yet, so I hope there won't be a bloody story in the future 😘 (The author has a great outlook on life, and it can be seen that he is intentional in many places. He hopes that some logic can be stronger, and the strength of the Three Saints is not very outstanding) Just to add, I hope the author will make some distinctions in the table of contents of each chapter 🧐 so that each chapter will be more memorable.

I found a treasure, I originally wanted to change my taste, and then I accidentally saw that the subject matter attracted me, so I clicked in. Unexpectedly, my eyes lit up. The emotional line is relatively slow and flowing, not abrupt. In short, it has great potential. When will the author open a fan group so that I can push for updates every day haha ​​❤️

There are no clichés in the plot, and the characters are not the classic black dragon Aotian. The inner conflicts and entanglements of the protagonist are very delicately depicted, making the characters very three-dimensional, and the group portraits make everyone else independent, which is very, very, very good-looking.

One word: absolutely! Two words: beautiful! Three words: Explosive! The author's writing is good, it feels like a steady flow of water, and the plot is not brainless. Pure love is invincible! I very much hope that Xiaoxia and Lan Yan can talk things out and the lovers will eventually get married! If the author reads my comment, can you tell me how far along the plot is now in outline? Are you halfway through the outline? If not, I'll have to raise the text.

The score is 😳 6.5 Points, record it, give yourself a five-star first 😳

It is one of the few good books that I can read 😢. The writing is also very good, smooth and natural, and the plot and characters are all online. The biggest highlight is that everything is logical, and even the supporting villains like the Demon King have their own obsessions. There is also a description of inner drama that makes people sympathize with each other. My eyes are going to pee 🥺. The author must keep writing. It's really good. It's amazing 😘😘😘

I would like to ask if Lan Yan has discovered the truth now? If the truth had not been discovered, why were you so close to a senior? Could it be that you were using your senior as a substitute? Isn't this a form of disrespect for Master? I beg the author to satisfy my curiosity, Qiuqiu 😢

It's good to read, and it's still a good review 😘 (OS actually reviewed the book two months ago when I was catching up on the summer vacation. The damn thing 🍅 swallowed my 500-600-word book review also made me feel very angry😡) I got angry and deleted it after a long time with zero views. So far, I think this book is still very good, so I'm here again! La la la Lan Yan and Lao Mei will live happily ever after!