This Time, You Can't Blame Me for Chun Yuan's Miscarriage

The author's writing style is quite good, and the details in the front are very soft. The feeling of Xiaojiabiyu's quiet years makes the heroine sometimes calculate or nag her, which is very inconsistent. It is not pleasant to predict that someone will listen to this setting, which is more troublesome. I personally feel that it is a setting with endless troubles. It is a bit difficult to overturn the setting of pure Yuan Bai Yueguang, because it is too eye-catching and a bit tongue-in-cheek. Both Yi Xiu and Duan Fei were well written in the early stages. I haven't read it yet. Let's see what the author writes later. I would like to give you a lot of support ❤️ [Please give me more updates]

The heroine's two maids-in-waiting, one is married to the emperor's brother-in-law as a sequel, and the other is married to the heroine's brother as a sequel (suddenly there is a plot where she has been admiring her brother for many years and she never thought about him in the whole process, maybe I missed it). The sister-in-law's death was too tragic and inexplicable. She was tortured with poison for two days before she died, but the murderer died before she had time to call the imperial doctor. She was an unjust tool who promoted the heroine's revenge. She was just a relative who only got along with the heroine for a few days and occasionally exchanged letters and gave gifts. Why not replace her with the heroine's own mother? The elder brother was also miserable. He and his wife had a harmonious relationship and they had several children, but his younger sister summoned him to the palace and indirectly killed him. Because he couldn't let go of his tragic death, his wife hadn't married for two or three years and was forced to marry a younger sister by imperial edict. It's hard to comment on the above points, but the rest are overall good.

After reading it all day and night, I finally tied it. It is indeed very beautiful. At first, I can tell that the author seems to be a newbie in writing. He is a little immature and has typos and mistakes. It will get better in the future. I wish the teacher will write better and better~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~ Recently... It's been a bit procrastinating and a bit watery.

The heroine is very real, not a villain, nor a very smart type, she is a soft-hearted little girl who is trying to survive. The system does not require the heroine to work hard to make predictions to earn points. The author's writing skills can be seen in the language, and it is completely made by his own hands. I hope that I will write less about trivial matters. For example, food and clothes do not need to be written in one page. The details should be appropriate so that readers will not be tired when reading.

It's the first time I've seen the heroine's perspective like this. It's novel and beautiful, and it's the kind of thing you can keep chasing. Yi Xiu needs to live a good life! Don't let Chun Yuan step on your feet 😢

The angle is novel and I like the heroine's character very much. Please update it a lot! Generally speaking, it is very interesting to watch. The plot after becoming a royal concubine is very exciting. However, the big and small bosses in the later stage are not very effective, and Rou is not smart enough. I originally expected Zhen Huan to have some counterattack to make the plot more enjoyable, but Zhen Huan was offline too quickly, and there was no plot between Yurao and Huanbi. Ye Lanyi slaying the dragon was too abrupt, and the ending was a bit rushed.

There are many private settings. Other than that, everything is pretty good. I suggest you write a copy or write something about the private settings at the beginning.

The perspective is very novel, the plot description has surprises, Yi Xiu changes Chun Yuan's darkening, and even mentions the butterfly effect that can be produced by inconspicuous supporting characters. It is a good article. I stayed up late to read it.

Good-looking, love to watch, watch quickly

The disadvantage is that the first person cannot be substituted