Awakening Sequence Sun Dasheng, Senior Sister Erlang Is so Flirty

It's good-looking, and there's a bit of the literary youth syndrome that many authors suffer from, but for this work, as a newborn, I feel that I can experience some of the beauty of literature. Sun Ling is like the hero we imagined when we were young when we watched the Great Sage, and Yang Jian is like the reality of being out of society and having its edges smoothed away. Both are correct.

The image creation of the male and female protagonists is okay, but the subsequent characters should not collapse. Then write more about their interactions. It's quite interesting. Although it's a standard tsundere, it's okay. As long as the food is delicious, wouldn't it be that the food hasn't been changed after so many years? It doesn't have to be different. Come on, author, keep writing like this and don't stop updating. The heroine is very active and has personality. It reminds me of the female characters drawn by Shu Fujimoto. I hope the character will not collapse. I see now that the purpose of this novel is very simple, which is to love people. It is so simple that there is nothing worthy of criticism. This is not to say that it is bad, but on the contrary, it feels quite easy to understand when I read it. It does not involve any mysterious things, it is just the principle that bad guys must be beaten. At the same time, in this way, the main thing that attracts me about the novel is the character image and personality. The current interaction and personality between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are very good, and I look forward to seeing more interactions. Finally, let me say the important things again. I hope that the subsequent characters will not collapse and updates will not be discontinued.

The author is awesome, and the content uses some AI (it feels a bit like it, not sure), but the story is still very charming. I believe that the creation of the heroes and villains is also quite reasonable. Everyone and "people" have their own stories, but the racial stance must make both sides fight to the death. There are also some descriptions that show that the author is very thoughtful, such as "The stars on the billboards smile very expensively." The last thing I want to say is, the author should not stop updating, just keep writing, it will definitely be 9.0 Or higher. ( ﹡ˆOˆ﹡ )

This novel was so well written it finally struck gold for me, the kids are amazing The thunderous beginning is also very delicious. The descriptions of the protagonist Sun Ling and the descriptions of the monsters and villains are also very good. Purely a matter of stance, this novel would definitely be a 9.0 If it weren't for some mistakes.

It's also very beautiful. [The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food] First, the three views are very upright, and I even feel that there is some red color in it. Whether the protagonist is a minor character or has a special status, the writing is great. [Like] The second point is that the plot conflicts and nodes are great, and the author is very good at writing conflicting plots [heartfelt]. Here's a reminder for authors, conflict is great and explosive, but don't rely too much on conflict. If you write too much, it will become boring. If you want to continue to use conflict as the main tone, you can use dark lines to write appropriately, such as the theme of an entire chapter, such as race. I also saw this when the author wrote it. The writing is meaningful and very comfortable. The third point is that some Randian can really affect people like me who like passion and belief [anger]. The orphanage's description of the beliefs represented by the two people, and the plot line in which Ma Sanyuan, the lone wolf, becomes old after being frustrated and becomes the old wolf who takes care of the younger generation, are very exciting and great. The fourth point is that the love line is not bad, Sun Ling's rescue and Yang Jian's teasing are not bad, readers can experience this for themselves. Later, I hope that the author will give Yang Jian more highlights or add some other backgrounds. After all, she is the heroine. Now I feel that Yang Jian is obviously strong and has a deep background. However, in order to serve the plot and let Sun Ling save the scene, she is always frustrated. I can add a prison character [face covering], and become a prisoner Jian. If it can be maintained and run well, it will be possible to become a work on the same level as Zhanshen, or even surpass it. Dear author, keep up the good work. [Top post][top post][top post]

Let's talk about this book. In fact, if you read this book in general, there is nothing wrong with it. It's just a bit of literary youth. But sometimes you will feel quite comfortable reading a bit of literary youth. Let's talk about this book. In fact, if you read this book in general, there is no problem. It's just a bit of literary youth. Yes, but sometimes you feel quite comfortable reading about literary youth. But I want to make a suggestion to the author. Please remember one sentence, those who are not of my race will be punished. What I am giving is five stars. If you don't kill the director of the orphanage later, then I will give you two stars. Why not one star? Because one star will not be detected, as for the plot, there is nothing wrong with it. The character of the protagonist and the heroine are very appropriate and well described. They are not completely Yang Jian and Sun Wukong, but also have their own characters. Then there is not much written about emotional drama, but I think it is okay. If you read my comment, please don't forget what I said, those who are not my race will be punished, so work hard

What is writing style? Writing style is something that others have written 10,000 times, but he still writes it brilliantly for the 10,001st time. Maybe the routines of this book are a bit old-fashioned, but the writing style and branching make up for this. For someone like me who reads books very quickly, having many branches slows down my reading speed and gives me time to generate pictures in my mind. It has a charm that makes people calm down and read.

This book is bound to be popular, give it a try

The protagonist is Lu Mingfei with a powerful character, and the heroine is Chen Motong with a zero character.

The writing is immature and the story is old-fashioned, but the actors are all excellent, so I highly recommend it.

It can be seen from the content of the book that the author was deeply influenced by "Dragon Clan" and has the flavor of Dragon Clan.

It looks good, and the writing is also very good. Just work hard and don't end up with a mess or run away.

It's okay. I can read it. I can tell it's a new author. This book is already great among a bunch of histories.

The writing is good, the plot is not inconsistent, the development is quite natural, and it is very interesting to watch. Come on, author [like]

This book is actually quite good. If you continue writing it, it will become a masterpiece with a score of 89 points. But why is the update discontinued?

The writing style is very good and the content is exactly what I want to read. It's very nice.

This author's writing style is very similar to Jiangnan The plot of the whole book is very interesting

It's good-looking, it's good-looking, okay, I'll continue reading after the review. I hope the boss can continue to make more updates. It's a bit lacking, boss.

I hope I can continue writing. I feel comfortable reading it so far.

Hey~ What was added to the text, why does it feel so painful~

My favorite childhood hero, Sun Wukong

It's okay so far

It can be written, but there is no one, maybe it's because of the new book!

It's pretty good, it's the AI ​​logo from my first chapter [laughs]

I feel like this book may become popular. When I read it, it felt like the content of the anime was written into a book. I personally like it very much.

As of now, I can see that the writing style of this book is still very good. I have a feeling this book may become very popular later on.

Good book, the writing is amazing

The writing is top-notch on Tomato, and the content is pretty good. This genre is quite popular, at least it's the genre I like.

It's very well written, cheers to the author.

One of Tomato's best books, the action scenes are exciting and the subject matter is very novel.