Defying Fate, Starting with a Shattered Jade Pendant

Really good! It completely fits the image of the two people in my mind, the writing style is also very comfortable, and the emotional lines between the two are also very delicate. She should have felt that the hot poison in Baochai's belly should have been burned vigorously, burning through the feudal rules of women's morals and virtues that penetrated into her bones, and scolding those bastards who were young and old in the skin but yellow in the belly.

It's very well written, and it's very good from the point of view of the person ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ ,,,, it's very good from this point of view that you don't call a woman by a man's name\^O^/After all, we are here to see the two female protagonists, but it feels a bit awkward to use a man's name with another woman [laughs evilly] and the author The writing is very close to the feeling of the characters in the original work, and has its own set of analytical rationality. The most important point is that it describes the real bitterness of Daiyu's coming and going into Jia's house. Unlike some other authors, they only know that writing about Daiyu is very painful, but they can't write about her pain. It's different when you do it, you write out your mental activities (⊙o⊙)! Although it may be speculation, it is really in line with the thoughts of women in the feudal era [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Are you saying that Sister Bao exchanged souls with Baoyu, fell in love with Daiyu, and took the imperial examination? That's great. Chai Dai is the perfect match. [Laughing] Baoyu, a tool man, can go as far as he wants.

I thought it was a slow pace, but it turned out to be a lot more fun? It's a very interesting perspective. It feels like everyone is a real person. There are no stereotyped bad guys. The characterization is very solid. I look forward to new plots and new lives. I really hope that both Chai and Dai can have choices and live freely! Another: I like slow-paced narratives, which relieve stress. I feel like I am living and growing with the characters. It's very refreshing to wander into the world. I once seriously thought about the characters and lives of everyone in Red Mansions. Thank you! Come on, come on, write quickly, I'll give you the book review and give me the updates. 😊

Overall, it is a rare masterpiece of Red Mansions. The writing style has the flavor of Red Mansions. From the details and plot arrangement, it can be seen that the author has read the original work. The main character line is closer to the imperial examination➕farming operation. The description of the other characters is also very surprising. From the ending arranged for Yinglian, Li Wan's family, Tanchun mother and son, it can be seen that the author's attitude towards the original Twelve Hairpins is mostly positive and compassionate (it can be seen that the author likes Feng very much). The description of the relationship between Qingxi and Qingxi is a bit strange... Mrs. Wang and Shi Taijun are a bit stereotyped, and I can understand that the plot requires dramatic conflicts. However, when I saw Mrs. Wang supporting Erbao and instructing my niece to secretly exchange Daiyu medicinal materials and pass them off as inferior ones, I really had no choice. When the house fight started, I got so ruthless that I lost my temper and lost my life. . . Three stars for the plot, three stars for Xue Lin, and one star will be deducted if you don't change the female to male version. Following the serialization, look forward to the appearance of Yuan Chun and Grandma Liu

My review is an article well worth reading. The writing style and daily atmosphere are very good, the antique daily life is not obtrusive at all, and the aroma of books is very strong. Some ancient words are interesting to chew on, and it feels like I have learned and communicated with the thoughts of the ancients. I want to mention one reason why I didn't click on this book when I saw it before. When I saw Baochai traveling through Baoyu's body, I felt a little weird. I don't know if this change of body counts as my own, but the plot and the exchange between Daiyu made up for my thoughts. There are also subtle changes in the appearance inside that should be the long-term foreshadowing left by the author. He looks forward to the time when Daiyu knows the truth and the two of them can be honest with each other. So I can accept this plot from this author. I'm also very curious about the Xue family's handling method. If this kind of cross-travel is not handled properly, the result of the original body will be a big poisonous point and problem. The article foreshadows the mountains, rivers, lakes and seas that Daiyu yearns for, and Baochai's great virtues help the world. I am looking forward to how these two thoughts will be realized. The copy talks about the fate of the Jia family. This is the shortcoming of the author's good daily description. Everyone in the Jia family in it is quite likable. I hope they will become like-minded after being influenced, and the hairpin of the Jia family will also be a help in the future. But after reading this article, I believe in the author's ability. It depends on how the author makes everyone happy.

It's very interesting. The author's perspective is unique. I can feel the cycle of cause and effect and the unpleasant taste of retribution. I really look forward to the author showing us how to get the Dream of Red Mansions. If Baochai enters the official career, how can the Jia family survive alone when the house is confiscated? How can the Jia family's daughter arrange a good home? If the real Baoyu becomes the daughter he misses, will he still feel beautiful under the cannibalistic feudal ethics? I'm really looking forward to the author's follow-up developments.

This book is really beautiful! ! ! The update has been updated, please wait for the update. As a fanfic, first of all, the characters are consistent with the personality, and it makes people feel comfortable to look at it (I am reading Red Mansion recently, yes) Secondly, this book is very readable, but it looks very smooth, and it is just right to use it in vernacular. Then, although Chai Dai's emotional line has not progressed much, I feel that classic classics such as Dream of Red Mansions are very implicit. I think this emotional development is particularly right. Finally, the author is really attentive in portraying the career line, and the plot is very neat. I like it very much.

After reading the first few chapters, I think the content is good. I just have a doubt, is this more realistic? I am a feudal person and I like pure love 1v1. Does this book have the same intimate contact with Baoyu (Baochai) as the original one?

Well written! The character's personality is very consistent with the original work, and the writing is also very good. I look forward to Chai Dai's emotional line😍😍😍