Bengtie: After Not Boarding the Train, the King of the End Comes to Visit

It's a very sweet and heart-warming daily routine. My aunt often laughs when I read it. But it feels like there is a knife in the candy, and the pig's feet may go back to the past and do something. It doesn't matter, as long as the current timeline is a sweet story

I feel like there's a knife [laughing evilly], but I don't know where it is. The author wrote this book very well. [Sending Hearts] is a plot that I have never seen before. Instead of following the train, he stayed at the space station. The character creation is also very interesting. So, author, you must not stop updating! [Adoration]

I just read Chapter 55. To be honest, this book is very good for me. The interaction between the protagonist and the heroines is very warm, especially the author's writing is also good. And um, judging from the current situation, I feel that it should be regarded as a relatively slow-burning one, but there is also a shortcoming, and that is the character of the protagonist. To be honest, um, the character of the protagonist may not be too likable. Um, of course I like it, otherwise I would not be able to give a five-star rating, but I think For some people, it may not be decisive enough, or sometimes a bit indecisive and wavering, but for me, it's okay, um, how should I put it, um, I feel that the protagonist's character is very vivid, um, it can't be summarized in one or two sentences. To be honest, it feels like a real person to me, who is very contradictory and entangled. Um, and sometimes when I see the protagonist, I always think of it. In a word, people who are loved are always confident. After all, to be honest, I feel that Esda and Heita even dote on the protagonist a little bit, and the protagonist is in that kind of, um, sometimes feeling a little socially fearful and cowardly, and sometimes feeling very bold, even a little bit presumptuous, ah, of course, this does not mean that there is a problem with the protagonist's character, because of this, the author has grasped this degree very well, um, how should I put it, um, The character of the protagonist cannot be described in one or two strokes. To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist very much, but um, according to my normal opinion, it may not be popular with the public. Well, it should be the kind of people who like it, but those who don't like it can't appreciate it. As for the plot, I can only say that it is the best among all, especially the protagonist and the black tower. Just that small plot, I can watch it again and again for half an hour. , I started to use my ghost brain. In the future, the protagonist and Heita will get married and decide what to name their children. After all, as the saying goes, you produce your own food and eat it yourself. The author's plot description is really great, and to be honest, this is the first time in a novel that I feel that Heita actually has a mother, um, um, ah, no, it is the feeling of Kafka and Himeko. For me, the only shortcoming is that, um, there are a few places. Huang, but this should be an advantage for most people. Well, anyway, when I read novels, I prefer the kind of novels that are a little more pure. But this author has a good grasp of the pure love and writes it very well. Well, it seems to be about the same. Well, let me finally give you a few personal suggestions. Of course, to be honest, this author does not need to refer to it. After all, I have not written a novel, and it is more like some of my personal feelings than suggestions. At heart, if possible, I think the author can write more daily life and go through the main plot as slowly as possible, because for now, most of the Bengtie City stories I have read are basically either broken or scrawled. Because the main plot is finished at the end, Lao Mi updates are very slow, so I can only interrupt or end it. I will write one or two extras. The one that survives the longest is the type of Bengtie City, because I can write more daily life, so I hope I hope the author can take it slow and write more, and finish the daily work as late as possible. After all, I really don't want to finish it hastily and then re-write it for the second or third time. Watching the daily life of the protagonist, mixing it with water and eating it slowly. After all, to be honest, the protagonist with this character is really too rare, and I really like it. Well, finally, I wish the author a happy day, and never interrupt the update. Please [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The character of the protagonist gives me the impression that he is a socially-phobic otaku who overflows with flamboyance, but sometimes he suddenly becomes very confident and bold for no apparent reason (Xingyu?), And directly takes the saliva from the mouth of the Black Tower villain and calls it sweet water. From the description, it is clear that he is quite socially-phobic, and he even dares to accuse Black Tower of why he doesn't give him sweet water to drink... 🤔

Tibao: Come on! *We* will always be here for your updates! Aglaia: Let's continue writing this story Saifeier: Update quickly, Feng'er won't stop for you! Na Kexia: Failure to update diligently is just like not studying diligently, both are stupid behaviors Bai E: Partner, it's not okay to just update this little. Ten Thousand Enemies: In the dictionary of Xuanfeng people, there is no waiting Feng Jin: Look, it's sunny. That's when the sky opens its eyes, can't wait to see new stories Xia Die: Sir, is there any sequel to the story? Cerydra: I order you to renew it immediately! Heather Yin: Updates are like fish in the sea. If they are not fast enough, they will not be able to keep up with the speed of the school of fish. Chang Yeyue: My dear, if you don't update soon, it will get dark~ Dan Heng: This journey should not stop here March 7: Hey, don't stop here! Xi Lian: My friend~ If I can't read new stories now, I'll be sad♪

Six words: Eat soft food and open a harem. Although the protagonist is said to be nothing interesting and not very powerful, it is still a good read and I quite enjoyed reading it.

Especially suitable for Chinese baby physique [Adoration] Compared with other cameras that blindly follow the plot, have fun with each other, and simulate love, it is much better, especially "You can regret it" is not my favorite ending. It is also well written with the heroines. The original version is still An Ming, and Star Iron Ghost Wolf, the author must stick to it, Tomato is really good-looking, reward

I feel Qiong is a bit like a simple Qiong baby. Now that I'm halfway through it, I guess the protagonist has gone through a gal game line completely, but hasn't remembered it yet. The girls' emotions came back first, and they found a good balance between lust and purity. I like it very much.

Very good, this kind of sweetness is very nice

Many people control points, but they can really resonate with the Supreme Bone.

It's pretty good, but emmm, there is no training. The character of the protagonist is pretty good, but it may not be likable to some people. Isn't it crisp enough?

So pretty. It's just a bit lacking, I hope the author will update it soon.

It's really good-looking. It's something a loser like me would love to see.

This is what ordinary people really look like after time travel. They want to go on a pioneering journey but are afraid of danger. It is normal for them to not even dare to fight when facing empty soldiers.

There are many settings that are different from those in the plot or text, but the plot's conferential status is enough to cover up this shortcoming.

It's really good to see Chapter 62. The Black Tower gives the protagonist a piece of stock.

By the way, now that the fake identity has been exposed, will you join [laughing evilly]? Considering the relationship between Akivili and Aha, it doesn't make sense not to join.

Reading this book gives me the feeling of being surrounded by happiness, it's so nice [blowing kiss]

A very sweet little article, suitable for people like me [lick screen]

Shi Li has been panning for gold for three days and finally secured the deposit [crying] [crying] I am so happy that I have to take back all the ginkgo leaves on my body [crying]

A very good book, suitable for me to read when I am bored. Thank you to the author. I will give you a five-star review.

Nice fanfic

Very good, recommended, you can try it

Man This is the novel I really want to read [sending my heart] [licking the screen]

Yeah, it's interesting to write

Personally I think it looks pretty good

It's very beautiful. I recommend it. It's very sweet.

I feel so good

It's a bit interesting, but you really can't tell it if you don't look carefully.

I can only look at it online, but in reality, there is not a single message on my phone from noon to dark.