An ordinary migrant worker suddenly gets an extraordinary opportunity. It is not a dramatic or decisive attack, but a way to live the life he wants at his own pace, while slowly changing some of the injustices in the world!
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Reader comments
The writing and the title of the book are not attractive, and the introduction is not very prominent. The pace of the plot at the beginning of the article is slow. I personally prefer this slow pace. The writing is good, the foreshadowing is a bit long, and the content is a bit bland. It needs to be able to quickly catch the reader's attention. It is very good for a new author. Come on.
It's very comfortable to watch and the storyline is also good. Come on
Very good, the content is detailed and the logic is clear
Okay, it's a good everyday article, but the paragraphs are too long and it's a bit tiring to read.
Really good
Unique idea
Hahahahahahahahaha
Bland, but I like it
The plot is gentle, more realistic, and quite interesting.
The content and title of the book are off. Is it a fantasy novel or a daily novel?
The writing and the title of the book are not attractive, and the introduction is not very prominent. The pace of the plot at the beginning of the article is slow. I personally prefer this slow pace. The writing is good, the foreshadowing is a bit long, and the content is a bit bland. It needs to be able to quickly catch the reader's attention. It is very good for a new author. Come on.
It's very comfortable to watch and the storyline is also good. Come on
Very good, the content is detailed and the logic is clear
Okay, it's a good everyday article, but the paragraphs are too long and it's a bit tiring to read.
Really good
Unique idea
Hahahahahahahahaha
Bland, but I like it
The plot is gentle, more realistic, and quite interesting.
The content and title of the book are off. Is it a fantasy novel or a daily novel?