The Shen family went bankrupt after a chemical plant explosion, forcing Shen Xingchen to quit school and work to make ends meet.
Someone appeared to help him at just the right time, paying off his debts, backing him up, and giving him a sense of security and love.
But Shen Xingchen was straight. He didn’t like men. As it turned out, this man had received the corneas of Shen Xingchen’s late mother. Gu Qingyan was using his mother’s corneas.
Shen Xingchen thought he truly had nowhere else to turn. But who could have guessed that, before she died, his mother had placed two sets of top-of-the-line luxury jewelry worth tens of millions in the Gu family vault, wedding gifts for her two children?
If Shen Xingchen had known about the jewelry a year earlier, he wouldn’t have spent so long entangled with Gu Qingyan.
He was supposed to be happy to leave Gu Qingyan. So why was he crying?
Your ending is too hasty, giving people the impression that you are in a hurry to finish writing, with a beginning and no end. Even if the ending is not a peaceful ending, there should be foreshadowing, and the explanation of other characters in the story is not complete enough. A little foreshadowing before ending should improve your score. After reading this book, I don't want to read your other books because it ended in a hurry before I could finish the story after reading it for a long time. I feel that reading your book is a waste of time. It doesn't matter how many books you write. You should write one book at a time. It's not about having too many books, but about being precise. What you wrote earlier is very good, and you have all the necessary foreshadowing. Why do you have to read Self-Deprecation from Chapter 25? Reading directly from Chapter 25 will give people a feeling of being anticlimactic, but reading from the beginning is just that the ending is too hasty.
It feels like the male protagonist is a bit repaying a favor. He didn't tell his sister anything, and acted like Gu was forcing him, which made her misunderstand that Gu worked hard for the male protagonist's affairs, spent so much money and had connections, but did not see the gratitude of the male protagonist and them.