Dragon Raja: Erii Took Me Home from the Start

He made up for his regrets and took Jiangnan away. Full marks! ! !

Poisonous point 1. Lu Mingze came out and started fighting with the protagonist. They had a fight, said harsh words and ran away. The description of the fight, ennn, is not like the great demon that transcends the tribulation. There are no spells and the body is fragile. It is no different from a fight between two ordinary people. No, this plot went to grandma's house. What did Odin think? He sent his clone directly to Kassel. Why? What are the benefits in Kassel? Even if it was Lu Mingze who instigated it, let's not worry about how Lu Mingze came out to fuck the protagonist. Is it reasonable for Lu Mingze and Odin to get together? It's hard to understand.

Ha! I like the writing style very much. It has a youthful atmosphere. The author should not be very young. It is my favorite writing style. Ha! Say important things three times! Ha! Ha! Don't let it be unfinished! More updates at the end! I want to read Xiao Eliyi!

(Personal opinion only, watch with caution) Generally speaking, the writing skills are acceptable, but the characters are a bit flat, and the emotional line between the protagonist and Eri seems to be relatively dry... Also, there seems to be a huge gap between the plot and the original work, and the direction of the plot has changed... Forget it, writing a book is not easy, please support me with four stars... [Rolls eyes] The following is the daily epilepsy: I have become the Taoist master! I have achieved it!!! Three flowers gathered at the top! Nantianmen! Bai Yujing! I saw it all! I saw it! Hahaha! I am the real Taoist master!!! Ah hahaha! In the future, you must remember... I am the most powerful venerable person in the world!!! Bai Lingmiao... Did you see it?! Bai Lingmiao! I can marry you! Why didn't you speak...? What? You said that I Already obsessed~ Is this all just my fantasy...? Hehahahahaha how is that possible, Bai Lingmiao?! Look! You are just a puppet that I play with~! But... But you guys don't say anything?! Is it really just me who wants to be a god and is obsessed with it? No!?! Hehe! No! This is all fake! This is all fake! This is all fake!!!

The 5th picture is also amazing [laughing awkwardly][face covering]

This is the most satisfying Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever seen.

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How should I put it, although there is no knife, everyone has lost their memory later on. It feels very sad. The protagonist has done so much, but no one remembers him. Moreover, the characters only have a similar tone of voice, and there are some details such as small movements. The description is not particularly good, but it is not bad, so I give it 4 stars.

Give yourself a little encouragement

It's pretty good, the emotional line is well written!