After Saving My Neighbor's Sister, She Became a Sick Girl and Haunted Me.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist passively knows the good impressions of the female protagonists in their previous lives and does not take them into the harem as a matter of course. He just feels sorry and regrets based on this and strives to change the tragedy of their previous lives. The good impressions of the female protagonists are also in line with the normal ignorance of the age group (except for the eldest heroine, who is a bit yandere), and they get along well. The style is more of a child-like dependence and playfulness, being intimate but keeping a certain distance. There is no need to call the husband or wife at a young age, or the women revolve around the male protagonist and are harmonious. The logic is clear and the plot is smooth. It is not a fake and cool novel that pretends to have a harem in the name of youth. It has been well received.

I've read the latest chapter, and I'll definitely give a review if I like the book. Ram! …………The back is normal Finished!

It's actually pretty good-looking. The heroine's character and characterization are very distinctive and unique, and she doesn't have the stallion behavior in the novel. She has exclusive interactions with each heroine. However, the male protagonist's inner activities do make me feel uncomfortable all the time. He feels like a scumbag who hasn't grown up? ? Maybe it's not the right description, but that's pretty much what it means. Although the introduction says there are many girls and no girls are given away, the full text is really fascinating and I have the desire to read on. But the feeling of being far away, especially the emotion towards Xiaoxiao, really makes me uncomfortable. I'm reading chapter 78 now, and he says he doesn't have any thoughts about Xiaoxiao? ? ? Ah? ? ? Just stay away from the protagonist. You give me the feeling that you want to push Xiaoxiao to others, which makes me feel very uncomfortable. However, your introduction also says that you will not give away girls, which makes me not want to read it. But in case there will be other plots later, this is foreshadowing what will happen next, which makes me a little confused. In the end, I thought about it and let it go. Now I just read books for pleasure. If I feel uncomfortable, I will change the book. But this book is actually well written, so it still deserves this five-star rating. I just scrolled through the comments section and saw that it was said later that Yu had a marriage and had no will to resist for the time being. How could he spend the past two years with the male protagonist? ? ? Ah? ? ? Also said that the heroine asked her brother to attack other heroines? ? What the hell? ? This is Yu's younger brother who reorganizes his family. Let me just say that when I saw the author describing this person for the first time, it was a bit strange about his experience, the way the male protagonist dealt with him, and the female protagonist's arrangements for him. So why was he laying a minefield here? If you put it this way, the cowardly little boy protected by Xiaoxiao Kindergarten also has too many scenes. This must be a later poisonous villain. Plus the silly guy on the rooftop, I wonder, is he so poisonous? ? In combination with the protagonist's slow development, lack of strength, and lack of emotional firmness, I thought that I still had some desire to continue reading, but it disappeared in an instant. I said goodbye. I will keep the five-star review, but it is really not to my taste. Say goodbye.

The writing is very good, compared to those who can obviously get the first place in the exam after being reborn, but they have to be afraid that if they are very smart, they will be cut open for study.

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This subject is well written. Compared with the top-notch starting point, there are fewer plots that simply make my aunt laugh. The writing style is enough. If it's like Invasion of the World, it will require more effort, but the performance improvement will be limited. Interesting to add a bookshelf

The story of rebirth and redemption seems quite depressing. Is it normal for the male protagonist to be the only co-author in the family? After getting used to reading cool novels, it is really uncomfortable to watch this kind of depressing one, but the writing is not bad, and the female protagonist is basically portrayed. I just hope to see the male protagonist redeem the female protagonist soon. It's really uncomfortable to watch. Although there is a golden finger in the rebirth, it doesn't seem to be of much use. Apart from adding some appearance, it is basically useless. It can't attract the heroine, and it can't help the family. It feels a bit dispensable. It's the first time I read a new novel and I feel so frustrated. Chen Sheng's book seems to have a much better experience. The heroine Shura Field will give me a little stomachache. The character of the heroine is really well portrayed. I would have written it down in a regular cool novel. But in this book, the male protagonist can only be powerless. As expected, I am not used to this kind of novel. I am used to reading cool novels.

Chapter 66 reveals that he came from time travel The protagonist licks a dog and is reborn. From the beginning to the end, he goes through all kinds of hardships. The writing is extremely unpleasant and aggrieved. He went to a friend and was slapped and shaved by her father, and was abducted by human traffickers. It's all kinds of aggrieved. Come and watch [laughing]

This is the most successful coming-of-age novel I have read in the past few years. When I was a child, I accurately grasped the time, did not delay, laid down the foreshadowing and foreshadowing, and grew up when it was time to grow. Unlike some novels, which are still in elementary school after more than 100 chapters. The characters are very three-dimensional, the plot is reasonable, and it is very immersive. But there is one plot that I personally think is not good enough, and that is the treatment of a terminal disease like ALS, which can only be done by advanced or even top-level medical skills. Intermediate medical skills require understanding of the specific process, which is obviously not simple. The male protagonist spent three years cultivating a relationship, and it was only in the latest chapter that he has a clue. By this time, he was already in the third year of junior high school. When Eno was a freshman, he met Kaoru who had been diagnosed with ALS. Kaoru was the same age as Eno, so it was already very serious at that time. It shows that he was diagnosed with the disease in high school. By analogy, acquiring advanced medical skills is obviously more difficult and should take longer. If everyone already knew that Xun suffered from ALS and the male protagonist cured her, it would be difficult to rationalize the plot. I think secretly curing Kaoru before she learned about ALS so as not to cause an uproar. Of course, it also depends on how the author writes the text. Maybe it will give us an unexpected plot. I hope the author can work hard to continue updating and not interrupt.

After saving my neighbor's sister, she became a sick girl and haunted me. Written by Doppy Kid This kind of novel usually has a strange circle. If it's not written carefully enough, it won't be sweet enough. However, those who can write particularly delicately and sweetly are always trapped in their own art, causing some emotions to be overly dramatic. It is important to grasp the balance between reality and creation, but not everyone has this ability. This book feels a bit like that. The writing and ink are quite good, the story is fresh, and the details are very delicate. Sometimes it feels sweet, but sometimes it feels so dramatic and fake. Wandering between the two. I have read countless books over the years. I've really seen every genre, so I can really adapt to it. But looking at the comment section, it seems that many people can't adapt. So it really depends on the individual. Four to five stars, for me. There is a big difference between the plot and the plot.

It's nice and interesting. The characters of these women are very vivid. There has been a shortage of books recently. This book is also to my liking. I really like to read it. It's the author. You said you won't give away girls. The process can be tortuous, but the ending is happy for me. You'd better accept them all, otherwise be careful of your waist [smile] [smile] [smile] I will follow the Internet cable to find you [smile]

It's okay, I just hope it will be a happy ending. Well, you can change the setting a little. The male protagonist has so many skills. How can a full-level hacker be rich? There may be a full-level medicine in the future, which can be disguised so that he can marry more. I don't want the male protagonist to become Chen Hansheng. Well, actually I think that when I read it now, the rating of this book is 7.1. I think I can mention it again. The main reason is that I read the review summary of this book and everyone thinks that the male protagonist is too It's a bit scumbag, um, but it's okay. As long as I don't leave any regrets and accept all the female protagonists, I can think it's okay. Don't give me the knife. Well, I've read Chapter 107 now. Well, it's obvious that the male protagonist prefers Lin Youxun. You can understand it. After all, the male protagonist said before that the two of them have clearly expressed their feelings. The male protagonist is here for redemption. Just give me the redemption. Anyway, the ending only accepts one acceptance. Come on, author! 🤓. The author's writing is okay. I'm not a critical critic. Anyway, I think it's okay. It must not be a dream ending. It must not be a dream ending. It must not be a dream ending. Say important things three times. Yes, don't become Chen Hansheng. Don't become Chen Hansheng. Don't become Chen Hansheng. Say this three times. Chen Hansheng's exchange of children is too poisonous. I prefer the relaxed version. This version of Ji Xiaoxiao is still a bit too weak and needs to be strengthened. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][learned]

It's pretty good, but it's too depressing. I'll deduct one star.

The male protagonist can predict the favorable impressions of many female protagonists towards him in the past life, but the male protagonist does not directly open the harem. The starting point is to regret the tragedies of everyone in the previous life and want to change the past regrets. The emotional shaping of the characters fits the ignorant state of mind of a teenager, but the sister-next-door heroine has a yandere quality. The relationship between the characters tends to be childlike, playful and interdependent, intimate but measured. There will be no clichés where young characters are treated as husband and wife prematurely and a group of women surround the male protagonist. The logic of the work is strict and the plot advances smoothly. It is different from those fast-food Internet articles that build a harem under the guise of youth and deliberately create a sense of pleasure. At present, if the level is stable or even improved, I feel that I can compete with "My 26-year-old Female Tenant"

Very good. As a bookworm with nearly 4,000 hours of experience, this book doesn't have much emotional ups and downs. It's very ordinary but also more heart-warming. If you like daily life, you can read it. It's very interesting.

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1. The writing is relaxed and relaxed, the words are exquisite and concise, there are no redundant modifications, and every description is just right. The story unfolds slowly in the text, and the artistic conception is far-reaching. After reading it, the lingering lingering feeling still lingers in my heart, which shows that my writing skills are very profound. 2. The author's writing style is delicate and full of aura, and the characters and scenery are vivid and three-dimensional. The words and sentences are natural and elegant. They are not deliberately carved, but every word is moving. The narrative rhythm is very well controlled and the immersion is very strong. It is easy to be brought into the world constructed by the text. 3. The writing has both character and tenderness, the narrative is smooth and silky, and the description is full of layers. A few strokes can outline a complete picture, the emotional expression is restrained and deep, the writing style is unique, and the reading process is a complete enjoyment. 4. The writing is solid and the writing is clear. It abandons the accumulation of flashy rhetoric and uses simple and powerful words to describe the content. The emotions are sincere and full, and the appeal is strong. The more you read, the more you can feel the ingenuity behind the words.

One day I read Chapter 287 from the first chapter. I personally think this novel is already a masterpiece. The plot flows very smoothly and feels natural without being forced. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very natural. I didn't think of other novels where the female protagonist starts out as a yandere and has heavy emotions for the male protagonist. Each heroine's emotional development is traceable, and only in this way can she gradually develop into a yandere. Secondly, the characters of each female protagonist are very three-dimensional and palpable. The male protagonist is not a dependent type, and all parties grow together. The most important thing is that there are many female protagonists who do not give away girls. I read many comments saying that girls are given away, but after reading it myself, I denied this. I thought maybe they had philophilia [laughing evilly]. I suggest that you save a few more chapters when reading this book so that it will be more enjoyable. Finally, I wish the author can persist in writing this novel, ignore other people's gossip, and write everything he wants to express, which is success. Tomato ratings are not very accurate. Your novel deserves a higher rating. Don't be discouraged and try your best.

I have read Chapter 109, and overall it is good. If you are looking for a cool system novel, but don't want the mindless coolness, this book is suitable for you. However, the presence of the system in the back is a bit low, and the coolness is a bit less. If you like that kind of yandere, the pace of this yandere book is a bit slow. I see that there is a normal development between the male and female protagonists. If it is a yandere, it is not enough. Decisiveness is a bit of a cover-up for a yandere novel, and then the author may create some logically inconsistent plot points to cater to the development of the plot. I have seen two such situations at present. Generally speaking, the characteristics are not distinctive enough, and there are not many exciting parts, but the average level is still there. Everyone has their own taste, and everyone will know whether they like it or not after watching it for a while [laughing] [laughing]

It's so good. I like Xu Zhiyu so much. Please update it quickly. For the sake of me staying up late tonight to read the novel, I have to get up early to go to work tomorrow. The author is fast and can't code. How can you sleep? You're so young and you're so young.

Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.

What is salvation? Is the family of origin changed or separated from it? Why? I'm so tired. The book may be good, but I don't want to read it, it makes me upset

I would like to remind everyone that those who want to read it should try not to read the comment section. It is a bit baffling to have such negative reviews. I started to speculate before I even finished reading. But this is true. For example, it seems a little uncomfortable in the front (you will know why it is uncomfortable after watching it). It is not that the protagonist does not accept Ji and others, but he did not think about starting a harem at the beginning. After all, he was just an ordinary person in his previous life. So there will be a slow transition in the plot. There is indeed something about Yu Lianyan, but it was just mentioned. Yu is not without resistance, and the protagonist is about to enter a stage of rapid development. Don't worry about this. And I feel that Yu must have been prepared for this while he was in the Song family. [Laughs] What does this book say? It feels a bit strange. It's not a cool article, but it doesn't have any connotation. It's relatively mediocre. But I still feel pretty good [shy][shy][shy] How to say it? It feels very strange [what] [what], there is really everything in the comment area, a lot of (thanks for testing the poison) [petrified] [petrified], he has not even tasted it himself, so he thanks others. Let's talk about the matter of helping to express love. I can only say that the beginning and end of a plot are not needed, and the unimportant parts are intercepted in the middle. (The protagonist knows that the heroine has transferred schools, but the heroine does not know that he knows, and then the protagonist also signed up for a program, specially prepared for her. I hope she can be happy and express her love. The day before the performance, her father violently assaulted her and her mother, and she was in a bad mood. Then the male lead came out and wanted to confess to her, but the protagonist didn't want him to disturb her performance, so she lied to him. That's pretty much it. Is this considered a gift?) Then a lot of thank yous started [fear][fear] I didn't express it very clearly, but that's pretty much what I meant. And please don't come here and misinterpret my meaning. Thank you.

Lao Ji, is it okay for us to take pictures like this? I have read several books in a row [stop][stop] Suppress first and then rise. Suppress first and then rise. Wait for me to rise! !

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

To be honest, this book is really well written and the characters are great in terms of emotions, but this type of book often makes me feel more uncomfortable the longer I read it. Maybe I am not suitable for this type of text. Although I have not finished reading this book completely, it is difficult for me to continue reading. I don't like the plot at the back. It is uncomfortable to watch, but I know that the plot line at the end will be better, but I am suitable for reading this type of book. I still recommend everyone to continue reading. Support

I'll give it a full score. I've seen the latest 300 chapters and many comments from everyone, and some of them coincide with each other. I've also seen what the author said, saying that the reading volume is now down. I can only suggest that the author read more about readers' thoughts, so that the data can come up. There are some points that are not bad, but they just make people feel a little uncomfortable. Among them, the names of two heroines are very similar to those I really don't want to be reborn, and their personalities. I feel that the author should learn from it. The author can actually borrow more. The book is very well written, very detailed and coherent, with a high emotional intelligence, and the content is okay. The plot is quite good, mainly because I feel that some points are written to lead to the following plot. This is indeed okay, but it is very uncomfortable and coherent to read. Some books only understand after you read them. Oh, it turns out to be this. This point is not necessary, but you will understand this book as you read it. It is written this way just for the sake of what follows. It is really unnecessary. I feel that the author can write better.

It's quite interesting, but the fish has not thought about solving the marriage problem by himself. I'm afraid that the fish has not thought about resisting, but just wants to spend these two years with the male protagonist and then get married. I think the male protagonist can cooperate to solve this problem, but the fish must have such thoughts and actions of resistance, otherwise it looks a bit poisonous.

It's good-looking. It's not about falling in love for the sake of falling in love, but in order to save the tragic fate of the tragic female character and make up for the regrets. The plot is warm and funny, but the male protagonist is afraid that the Shura field will be serious in the future, and he is yandere.

The writing style is really good. If I didn't write about yandere, I would be a good writer when writing about youth campus. But I hope the author can respond to the question of how many female protagonists there are. Too many female protagonists have been written down, so I'll wait and see with four stars.