Jujutsu Kaisen: From the Start, I Electrocute Hanami

Ken Suo really got the heroine. I feel that Kensuo is a perfect match for the prison deer described by the author.

It does look quite fun to fight, but some details can be optimized. For example, the part where the museum owner's daughter follows the protagonist is a bit far-fetched. It would be fun to add a protagonist to fight with the museum owner, so I agreed to the museum owner's request to help take care of his daughter. Overall, it's very good. It really satisfies my original imagination of a plus enhanced version of Laolu learning electromagnetism + reversal + non-disposable spells.

The fighting scenes are top-notch, which makes core fans look forward to them. The daily descriptions are also good, but in fact it feels very disconnected from the author's solitary love. If the author wants to lay the foundation for this character, I think the protagonist can be described more in flashbacks. The anguish in the hospital bed, the anguish of having no opponents after time travel, and the joy of gaining a healthy body after time traveling. Discovering that you can become endlessly strong after being unable to move, but discovering that you are still afraid of Su Nuo can also be described. A perfect character doesn't need to be perfect, and transformation always keeps people interested in watching it. It's not a one-size-fits-all fight scene, but at least everyone can watch it and be emotionally moved by the author, and the polarization is extremely serious. There is also the issue of the heroine. Once it is written, even if the idea is deleted, it will not be clear. There are suitors in Su Nuo's original novel. If you want to write it, write it according to your original tone. The heroine and the hero must love and kill me. If you want to love me, you must be able to kill me. Watching the heroine and the hero turn into a disobedient woman who enjoys fighting does not ruin your character. And looking at it this way, the title, introduction and content of the book have nothing to do with each other. Generally speaking, the sense of substitution and the depth of the combination with the original work are very harmonious. There are some flaws, but it is worth reading. Just think of these things, speak out what you feel, don't like to ignore them.

It's pretty cool, but the cp of Deer Skin Traveler and Tiger Mother Pi Mensuo is so weird that it made me sweat.

A very good conjuration fan work, which makes up for the lack of previous conjuration fan works by Yang Persimmon that featured Lu Ziyunyi as the protagonist. The author's writing style is also good, and there are no paragraphs that are like a running account. You have to read it, it is a good book and worth recommending. [Praise]

It's too late to be sad, the next one to appear is Lu Ziyun Yi! [Sinister smile]

Damn, this is the best spell-returning fanfic I've seen so far. The descriptions are so detailed, and the fighting is so exciting and cerebral. The main character is so handsome. I feel like the main character has become more lively since entering the modern era.

I just realized that I haven't written a review yet. After looking through the book review section, I feel that there are a lot of bad reviews (at least I didn't understand them) that I don't understand, so I'll give it a five-star rating to offset this. I prefer the Edo chapter to the Huaitama chapter, and I hope the Shibuya Incident chapter can be more vigorous. What I like most about the Huaiyu chapter is the daily life with Kensuo, but in the Shibuya Incident chapter, Kensuo's wife has been taken over by Xia You (turning against Tiangang), and I don't know if we can still have such a soulmate chemical reaction. Looking forward to future developments. When the plot unfolds after the Shibuya Incident, it will be fun to have more battles, and everyone will like it. [Eat melon]

The writing is pretty good, the scenes are well described, and the character of Lu Ziyun is also very consistent. I look forward to the next plot.

The writing by Naohua is really good. I highly recommend it to the female protagonist.